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A solid start with good pacing in plot, character, and world building. Could use a bit more editing and it'll be a polished gem. I suggest giving the free version of Grammarly a try, might not catch everything but it should help clean things up.
This is a fantastic piece of work! The flow and description the author creates in their story is emacculate! The characters really come alive through the fantastic description, they are dynamic, well scripted, and also realistic in their emotions and feelings. The plot is unique, fast paced, and gripping all the way through! Honestly I am really impressed with how well the plot and the world are developed! It was such fun reading this! Spiritforming is such an ingenious idea! I genuinely dont think I have any criticisms for this novel! I'm really enjoying it, and I am I intrigued to see how it will develop! Amazing work!
First of all, I just want to applaud the author for the amazing storyline that this book have. The descriptions are very informative and well written. The worl building are top tier too. Good luck authorrr!!! Water hpes for the best!!!
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
5/5 This novel is a promising read. 😍 The plot had me intrigued and made me crave to read each chapters. I love fantasy novels so this might be biased, but everything about this novel is just superb. One of the page turner novels I have come across. Kiyu is such a nice name which fits the character perfectly. Reading the initial chapters was like watching a movìe. The start was quite something with the rite and all. 😍 Great job author-nim
Awesome. Great premise, great execution. Hook is so effective. I go deeper and deeper into the story. Prose is well-written, too. Please keep on writing. This story is a treasure. 👍
I was surprised by how well-written this is and the dialogue is somewhat intriguing - it makes me want to find out more. I love the thought put into this and I look forward to more. Cheers.
omoo babe, i could not imagine my babe can be adventurous so well. Chill gril u will find ur motivation in end might be in form of babe. Hiya all coming and upcoming babes, give a read to this novel. It might catch ur babe's heart and make u dwell in world of babe. imma read it to follow and know mah babe's heart...Don't think I mean Fl is mah babe now. Recommended for all waifus,wifey and babes and bae.Good luck! [img=recommend]
Just to fillthe requirement of 10 reviews. For those who care: I voted Writing Quality 4, stability of updates 5, Story development 4, character design 3 and world background 4. I'm not sure whether the first half of the novel to this date dare too fast-paced. Will just rely on possible future readers here.
The way that the author incorporates western writing styles in his fantasy universe is truly refreshing on a platform such as WebNovel. The immense potential that it brings to the platform and the very plot it surrounds in itself makes me as a reader lust for more to read. This not getting up there in views would be unfortunate, as a treasure such as this truly should be shared and known among the masses. Great job author, I hope to see your continued growth as a writer.