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Archon of the alsike.

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"We follow the recorded archives of the achievements of a king. A very odd but effective king who Rebuilt a society of barbarians into a society of people. This King's name is Octavius Neak Zophiel better known by the title of the Summoner or maybe just maybe the conqueror. Such an old title now." the man Dust off the book with his hand before opening it to the first chapter of this king's Story."Well, children Let's begin a tale of the man who rebuilt an entire society.




(oh yes Alsike is a type of clover for those who don't know it has much too many meanings.) [{!the cover is not mine and any character Summoned is not mine The MC is mine and the World is long live the king!}]

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Ferasight

So for those just going for a read you will find this very confusing I don’t really bother fixing novels For the simple reason of the damage is done besides I never expect much from this stuff So to tell you early the grammars horrid and the POV are horribly planned the conversations are very convoluting the plot itself literally removes multiple arcs Terrible pacing and horrid power. I promise it gets better but some things will go completely against characters personality Because of my own terrible development you will especially notice this with any female character They are static not planned and very weak plot wise

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Jackleell

This novel seems interesting and good, but please consider rewriting it. The grammar and spelling are poor, and the interactions with other characters feel off. Additionally, the story flow is problematic, giving me a headache trying to read it. Perhaps you could use ChatGPT; it might take only a day or two to fix all these issues.

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MeepsNewGroove

Its a good book tbh. Stopped at like 25ish since I found out it was a harem. Good book but isnt for those who dislike harem

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Kaisen1

I haven't read it yet, but it doesn't stop me from giving it a 5 star, a long live the king fanfic? That's new and that's why I rated it a 5. HOPE YOU DON'T DROP IT, AUTHOR, THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR WORK

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