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With the power of One Piece and Naruto in a modern cultivation world, this novel is strictly for an audience of legal age, it contains erotic readings, as our character is transmigrated into a body of a dead boy and does what any boy would do. , get wifus. The names of the characters are known, if you need to remember just look them up in googl, for example Nene Fujinoki or Roxanne De Dejiiru XD. I am a man of culture.
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Not bad, but please fix the first 6 chapters as they are almost unreadable. I had to skip them.... They hurt my brain that much that I had to skip them. Again, not bad.
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if read machine translated novels that are way easier to read than this story, while the idea of the story was interesting, the way it was written makes it impossible for me to keep reading and from the looks of it, the story is already dropped so i dont think it will be fixed
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I like it. It's intresting and different from other novels. Your story is unique and fun to read. Keep up the good............................
Interesting idea but poor execution. sentence structure need more improvement in order to deliver the story properly. why not use grammarly to help with writing the story. overalls, SAD
What ruins ur story is your structure, ur sentences all start in different lines like one half of the sentence is not continued in the same line but instead a different one. this just makes it hard to understand especially since the dialogues half the time are separated but continued with the ' story '. I suggest fixing this with Grammarly. the story concept is interesting from what I managed to comprehend. And OG world with cultivation elements [ clans and shit like the SI MC being a person that got kicked out ] with ff shit and an SI MC. But the MC jumping from a dragon into the tournament and doing attacks out of now where? why? Its like those cultivation protags, so stupid. Also your world background [ BG ] is non existent. for stories like yours BG is what makes it interesting but its left out, you just state theres energy and its like a wuxia world and thats it. no in-depth exploration. Also it seems to be a harem seeking protag style. Chicks see MC is so OP and Hot, and done, in the bag. The MC using special attacks and unique skills and no one caring or questioning em. the MC antagonizing people and doing ' cool ' shit. this retarded considering he was kicked out by his family and he is alone with no backing. overall its a SELF wish fulfillment wuxia style protag. thats barely illegible. really suggest you atleast fix basic grammar [ cause its similar in all major languages ] and explore your world more.