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An Adventure in the One Piece World.
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[Due to time constraints with family and work its hard to write when I want too.
So I’ll be using this time to think over where I want the story to go from here. I’ll be rereading One Piece again, when I have time, to better capture the world Oda created in my novel.
Thank you to all who read and supported this novel. I hope that when I continue this story it will better than ever. I apologize to those that enjoy this series, but I want to do my FanFic justice, so I won’t rush it.]
The journey of an old soul through the universe and how it found it’s home in the most unlikely of places.
After slipping through the gaps of the reincarnation cycle, an ordinary teenager found himself wandering through space. Eventually he would meet the gods of his world and find out that they messed up and missed picking up his soul when he died, therefore when he finally found his way to the heavens he was allowed to choose any world to be reborn in. So of course he chose the world he found most exiting. The world of One Piece.
There are countless stories, comics and movies that build incredible worlds, but how exactly do all these worlds come about. Is it really just imagination? The answer is both yes and no. Almost all writers in this world have the ability to see into other worlds, peer into entirely different universes, and follow their counter parts through their journeys. However when they see certain things, they make changes to the ‘story’ so as to conform to their own personal thoughts and beliefs. What they want to see, they see and they fill in the rest with their imagination. Therefore no world is the exact same as its comic, manga, movie or novel counterpart.
This is the journey of a thousand year old human soul, reborn into the world of one piece as it truly is, not just as Oda saw it.
- This is NOT a re-write of the story! I love One Piece and Oda is an amazing writer. I just believe there are points and things in the world he built that aren’t explored enough, wether because of time constraints or lack of desire to write about certain things doesn’t matter. I would just like to build on the amazing world Oda has created. Little things like the lack of strong bounty hunters, real acts of piracy, combat oriented female characters, and showing the level strength even the fodder posses. These are all things I’d like to build upon. I do not intend to change anything of the main plot, however if things in the world line up, my character may have effects on the world around him that can’t be ignored, however unlikely this may be -
- This is not harem novel, nor will my character be over powered or travel with the Straw Hats. He will however interact with side characters and journey down his own path, not involving the One Piece-
And for the sake of plot all filler and movie characters are now canon. Devil fruit ideas are always welcome!
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All in all a good start. The main character seems a little rash and weird at times, but it makes sense given his past. The character and setting descriptions are on point and the world definitely feels like something that would fit right in with One Piece. Though I’m worried the story will take a turn should he find a random powerful devil fruit instead of growing stronger by continuing his training. At the moment that seems unlikely. I do hope to see more strange and wacky fights in the future though. Since that’s the charm in allot of the combat in One Piece. Devil fruits aren’t the only way to do this. Different weapons, unique fighting styles and special techniques are all apart of what I enjoy about the fights in One Piece. You don’t need to copy and paste Oda’s writing style or anything, what you’ve been doing is enjoyable. But a blend of your own style and the original style is what makes a really good fanfic. Just my two cents on the matter. GL
A good One Piece fanfiction. Update stability - good. Not very OP - good. Not much mistake, easy to read. Overall it is one of the best One Piece fanfiction.
This is amazing! Please continue writing this.Please do not drop!😟🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
I like the way you make all the situations and abilities have a logical development within what is their world also the plot is original and good, but for me it would be cooler if you add dialogue in the scenes where there are more emotions and not summarize them, to be able to immerse us more in the plot and have more closeness to the characters making us feel what they feel through dialogue, descriptions and thoughts of each one enriching the development of your characters. (This is a well-intentioned opinion from a non-expert). Overall I loved your story. 😍😍
While I like the kind of mc that is cunning and morally ambiguous, I kinda like this mc even tho it bothers me a lot the fact that he choose as practice target people that might kill him and fight them with their own weapons, I mean it is the mc style but honestly it would be good if he has a contingency plan in case he is about to die and start taking things a little more seriously but apart from that I’m really liking the novel. Some suggestions for Devil fruits could be a zoan that make the user a horned dung beetle, it is an insect that call pull more than thousand times its own weight so the user would have the strongest potencial on pure physical strength. Another could be a fruit that allows the user to control blood, it would be a normal Paramecia and the powers could allow the user to regenerate wounds and enter a mode similar to luffy’s gear second but without the restrictions and when the fruit awakens he could control other people’s blood. By the way since you are also expanding the world you could add different weapons made from seastone like bullets staff and nets to capture Devil fruit users, I mean it would make much more sense for marines to use those kind of weapons to fight against Devil fruit users since most of their members don’t user armament haki
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The story is great but just don't like the Main Character. I'm not even complaining him not being Overpowered I like under dog characters is just that your MC personality is ruining a great story. I'm not gonna read a perfectly written story if the character suCk asS and have zero attachment to your MC is just gonna be annoying to read a chapter with that much screen time.
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MC is an idiot who thinks he’s strong but is extremely weak lol he practically dies to a guy with a 2million bounty soooo I dropped it lol it was so boring reading 14chapters of him going after people with under a million bounty then his 15th chapter gets embarrassed lol not a fan of beta MCs
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One of the best ff that I had read........................................................................................ .........................