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MC dies as collateral damage from the wrath of a truck over the loss of its relative. Now, he's on a journey through various fictional worlds, looking for the reason behind it.
First world: Game of Thrones.
Second world: Harry Potter.
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Do I even need to write something? Well I think it is very balanced in plot character development and the powers from ROB which are in acceptable range and not over the top like having Naruto or Harry Potters powers they just suck all the fun from novel and make it game. You've got good thing going on dost keep it up.
Ruined it for me when he caused the MC to go unconscious for a few days due to the shock of Lynna getting kidnapped. He could have rescued her if he didn't but of course the author forced it and made him unconscious for no reason other than to force the plot.
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So I figured I'll review this since it was restarted. It's a great start at 3 chapters. Good length chapters and great story telling. The system isn't over bearing and the MC is realistic.
In the beginning, the story was great. Great character development. Especially about his attitude. Though the only problem I have with it was He dies and leaves his wife and kids behind and goes to another world to start over again. You pretty much watch him live his life. Just for it to end and start all over again. And to me, that's just sad. I feel like the author is just gonna keep doing it like there. So if you don't like that, I wouldn't recommend reading it. Other than that, it's not that bad.
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Neutral review The beginning is really good, I loved the MC, how he ended up in Westeros, what he became ect But when Robert enters the story everything has changed, he has become arrogant, he forgot what world he is in, that this Robert is the one who killed Raegar Targaryen and laughs over the corpse of two children who are his cousins and an innocent woman without any remorse, it is a lord who has every right to kill him without any pretext, he should have stayed away from them . But above all he should have lied about his history, said that he is the second son of an average family, wherever his father is from Pentos and that his mother is Westerosis, just to explain his upbringing. In short an explanation that does not place it at the bottom of the food chain but also not so high, He could have been an independent knight, in short, the way of acting does not correspond to Westerosis and therefore, it cringes. The story is quite readable and we get caught up in the rhythm, I recommend reading it, I had to stop at chapter 17 because of the problems announced above but I know that it won't bother everyone
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I don't like some things in fanfic, but who has ever written something that everyone likes? so I won't specify, but one thing I like a lot about all fics is a different approach and that there's no harem. I use google traudor, so I don't know if your grammar is good because it fixes some mistakes by itself when translating, I'll be giving 5 stars for being able to read normally without guessing words ^^. the update is a little slow, but i think it's just a hobby to write this fic the finnal is studying medicine ne, so 5 stars. I thought the development of the story was good, mainly because I didn't mess around to resolve matters or let them resolve themselves to follow the original error, 5 stars. I like the character, he's not afraid to use what he knows and not to offend anyone, he does what he wants, he doesn't find excuses for not acting as he wants, 5 stars. It's the world of ice and fire so far, I only watched GOT, but it was poorly explored, after all it's a series, so far you've been exploring the world well and expanding. 5 star. this is my most sincere evaluation, I hope I don't offend anyone, but everyone has a taste, I don't expect you to agree with me, but if you think I said something wrong, just comment and we can discuss ^^. (Google translator)
this is actually a nice story good character , not too op mc keep it author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
this story is so good at first I thought it was going to be boring but it started to get better each chapter
It would be funny When Allan returns to Winterfell for him to reappear in a suit of Chaos Warrior armor. He has the strength to wear it and Rickard will be verry intimidated by the appearance of the armor.
I cant lie, I was not gonna give this a full 5 stars BUT THEN the author made the MC do some of the COLDEST sheet I’ve ever seen on webnovel. SO here we are!
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wonderful story going on here author . another great GOT fanfic.. I hope you finished this too.. got me hyped reading the 1st few chapters. being a free readers. I give you 5🌟 for everything . this a great and wonderful story.. praying for your good health 🙏👌😊 keep it up author
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it was recently uploaded so hopefully we get more it's a good read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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amazing restart, simply amazing writing and immersion. I love the MC and his growth. excited to see where it goes from here. hope you keep writing.
PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS!!!🙏🙏🙏🙏 Fics like these in this website are as rare as they get and among them half get dropped😢. Also more updates please
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This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.