Writing a Diary in the Shinobi World, and the Kunoichi Are Shocked

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King_linley123

What kind of sh*tty name is “night star” 😂😂😂

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Zack_Lazy_5538

What kind of bitch ass name is night slasher that sounds like what an edgy 12yr old would name themselves [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Vlad_6413

Stupid concept. MC doesnt even think that others could read the diary even with the obvious acting of kurenai and co.

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Trouxa_157

I had read this novel before, but the translator abandoned it after 100 chapters and a bit, I'm glad I found someone again willing to share this story here. I don't know how many chapters the author wrote, and if there is an ending, or if he ruined everything with typical Chinese nationalism, not to mention racism, I just hope that the current translator goes to the end and doesn't discard this. For now it's 5 stars.

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daremetochoosemyna

Kind of stupid. Additionally author got bored and finished story in lazy way. If you are looking for raws just copy thing name and google it. There are sites that mtl it.

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reza_Asgari

Stupid bullshit from start to finish ................ ... ............,,..................-..-.-.-..-.-...-.-.-..-.-.-.-..-.-.-..-.-..-.-.-.-.-.-..-.

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Gh0st00

not worth reading story was decent even though the naming since kind of sucks but a chapter 115 it just ended very forced and rushed made no sense to in the story there so don't even waste your time you'll be highly disappointed with the ending

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Bierbart

Interesting concept and story was better than 95% of the rest of ff here ... bit the ending ia just abrupt and bad. thats why the bad rating is here... just cut off and made an ending randomly... its like it was dropped and the author aaid in the middle of the atiry nah... just write an half a chaoter ending..

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Otonashi_Yuzuru

Wtf was that final... The end just fucking sucks

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Mastersun

What a stupid name "Night Star Uchiha", I, of course, understand that the translator just translated through the auto-translator and did not bother, this is about the same if you read the story about Naruto, where his translator called Uzumaki Whirlpool and so left.

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Mark_Fyry

The translator couldn't come up with a better name than ‘night star’, what's with the eighth grade syndrome? And it's not stated that it's a translation and it cuts off the story at the most interesting part, instead giving a crappy ending.

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daniele_visani

An excellent story, well written, until the ending which makes a single question arise spontaneously: What the fuck have you been smoking, dattebayo?

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chocolatechipsrule

It's hard to say anything about the story because of how abruptly it ends. It goes from what sounds like it will be a few chapters on the Kumo front, to an abrupt ending that instantly kills the 8-tail jinchuriki, followed by a '3-years-later' where everyone is as strong as Kaguya, the end. That's it. No emotions, no mentions of any specific person or event, not even bringing up what he was doing now that he controlled the world. I would have added a spoiler if the events mattered, but they don't. The ending would be the equivalent of ending Harry Potter during the second event in the triwizard tournament, explaining how he won and fought voldemort and killed him. Even stories that I found mediocre at least had an ending, that was actually an ending.

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PsyLoRD

raw?

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GnomeBob

Wasn't too bad. Giving it 5 stars because it avoided all the cliches I hate, like making Danzo more of a threat than he actually was and the mc becoming retarded as he becomes stronger

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Ichigo_Kurosaki_1867

Trust me. It’s a good book. Do I like the name? Not really but after reading a lot of Chinese novels, it’s really not a big deal breaker. All I care about is if the story is good and it’s written grammatically correct. It is by the way. Don’t let other reviews fool you.

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SomeLordsBastard

For those of you using Firefox there is an add-on called FoxReplace in which you can automatically replace terrible chinese names. I personally replaced Night Star with Niko.

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DarkAbyss1000

like what the novel is about a bit funny and cool and for the story its not bad and if your looking for a high intellect story this is not for you just a fun FF

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Erick_Espinoza

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