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I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.
The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.
Good, more, pls, don't stop, moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ..,.......,....................,....,....,.,... ...... ..,...........,................,.,..............................................,..............,,.,..........,...........................,,............,...............
Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage
Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then
this is a really really good story so far .....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
👏👏👏👏☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏👏👏☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ really good start waiting for the next chapters...
I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.
The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.
Good, more, pls, don't stop, moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ..,.......,....................,....,....,.,... ...... ..,...........,................,.,..............................................,..............,,.,..........,...........................,,............,...............
Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage
Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then
this is a really really good story so far .....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
👏👏👏👏☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏👏👏☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ really good start waiting for the next chapters...