In Marvel With Unique Skill Great Sage (MCU)

LV 6

Z3RG102077

I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.

LV 15

Requien

The story makes no sense, first of all why the f is the mc so horny to get / steal tonys money and arc in the early chaps if and i mean if u have Rimurus Whole Abilitys. This seems bland and dumb. if u have nothig to read then this is the shit

LV 2

BigPanda69

Pure stupidity by furry femboi mc/author...first despite having great sage he wants some fkin stupid armour of tony knowing how strong rimuru gets in future making armour even greater what tony can imagine would be a child's play for mc but nah this mf author wants to make mc a femboi and a ret@rd...

LV 12

NunuXD

Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then

LV 5

LastGod

MC lands in marvel right next to tony in the desert after escaping capture. MC immediately thinks of killing tony and taking the arc reactor for no reason other think hes an idoit.... whats he gonna do its not even the upgraded arc reactor. Is he gonna build a suit. power a vacum. MORON!!

LV 12

BloodMonk

Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage

LV 4

amaron

story starts right Tony's cave in Afghanistan now major cons of this novel is -character is too stupid , his first thought after seeing tony is to kill him and steal arc reactor, and his character doesnt really develop better. -story's translation is weak all chinesium element are not removed like, mc being part Chinese, their weird nick names for marvel characters , and weird morals also we shouldnt forget subtle racism, sexism and sometimes blatant. and also their monologues abt some well established plot points and philosophy + justification of mc actions like why he did that, then adding some chinese saying etc... -MAJOR LETDOWN: was stories premise is that mc hold one of the overpowered and most versatile ability in all fiction, with ability to calculation ,learning, understanding pretty much super ability but this story starts with this idiot thinking of killing tony to get premature arc reactor. and i don't spoil anyone but his decisions and character doesn't really change much - above are not even abt plot ,pace or writing quality so this point is for that : they are ok but pace is worse ,story usual web novel type

LV 13

Muhamby

Bad mc, dumb and soulless.

LV 4

Lizrock

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LV 3

INFINITESTORAGE

The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.

LV 13

Prakash_Das_7278

this is a really really good story so far .....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Martian_Fridge

loving it so far, pls gib more and dont drop

LV 1

MiqueIIa

A masterpiece, I highly recommend reading for those who are fans of tensura and Marvel. 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛

LV 13

Daoist8w7JVw

it's intriguing, but I don't like how you feminize a male and most who try and base their characters off of rimaru do so with a few exemptions that aside you are down playing the combo of gs and pred by going the tech rout I mean seriously ik the story just started and all but that's a red flag but that's just my opinion I'll see what you do with this

LV 12

OVERPOWERED

3.2 bcs chapter word count is short compared to the no of chapters. and bcs of that it's extremely slow pacing . I mean you just lengthen the story of 5 chap with good word count into 29 chapters with low word count. I am thankful for your work though but I need to tell you this critique.

LV 13

MadSlayerLuxef

the concept of bringing rimuru into marvel is not new, but fanfics about it are either too few or disappointing, so finding one that holds up is refreshing. keep it up.Frankly I feel threatened, the author is very good at negotiating, very good story

LV 5

ErickHenrique_BR

I liked it at first, after the mc started wanting to crossdress I stopped liking it, when the love interest was an oc I was even more disappointed, I don't know why the mc stays with Tony, he looks like someone who doesn't know what do, I have a feeling the story isn't going anywhere and the MC will always stick with Tony.

LV 3

Index_7548

The pacing is quite comfortable, it's not fast but not that slow either, though i might be biased since i prefer slow pacing. the characters are ok, they are not the most interesting thing but they aren't bland, and the characters aren't brain dead, there are some weird things they do, but nothing that offensive that makes you question the intelligence of the author. (on a not so short note, most of the "mental retardation" of characters can be explained by a simple logic explanation, but it feels like, we as readers are filing in the blanks on holes and things the author never thought of to begin with. so some problems fall into the category of whether or not we think some decisions or the lack of one makes sense in the context presented) I didn't find any problem with the grammar, (though that may be because I don't know grammar myself.) in conclusion, it's a novel with good potential that would be on my library for some time. by the way... is this novel translated?, the update rate is quite suspicious. the author could just be hoarding chapters but that's not a very convincing argument since said "hoardering" is quite extreme.

LV 4

Human_Man_9265

The story seems interesting and I would like to read more of it, looking forward to reading further ahead in this web novel to see how it goes