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A surprisingly decent Kimimaro fanfic. Aside from some skill/character names being mistranslated, it's all good. Those errors were also corrected in the following chapters so A for effort.
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i think you should post more so i can read. what raw name? is it original or translate? when you update? how many chapter this story go?.....
more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?more update?
A surprisingly decent Kimimaro fanfic. Aside from some skill/character names being mistranslated, it's all good. Those errors were also corrected in the following chapters so A for effort.