Man Of Steel, Shield Of Ice

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BIGGRA

I am at chp6 and i am already quiting. The characterization of this clark is weird. He is meek and seems more like teenage clark kent or even younger, not like the Man of Steel. We also don't get an explanation why he doesn't just fly to explore, his other powers also seem to be nerfed . Lastly there's a lot of "fluff" in the writing, either this is the authors style or it's AI.

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Subham_Singha_5718

Bro way to start if off the margin but yeah it's could have been great content , but the initial way of remaining silent off the bat acting weird and hiding 😭 bro it's all weird

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Dracmon13

It's rubbish, the writing is very repetitive about Superman, distrust of him and such, a lot of mystery, and besides, the author nerfed Superman a lot, in his childhood he had x-ray vision and hearing, here at 18 to 20 years old he There's nothing hahaha, the author's stupid reason is because it's very appealing, so he didn't even try to include a Superman fanfic '-' and there's writing that is almost all AI translation generated by google.

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Ashish_Bisht_6746

Shameless Author .... I suppose. But I hope readers atleast read 10 chapters before dropping this.

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level69

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Areswargod99

I m love it is good……………………………………………/../.