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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
idk became all edgy. Level progression was pretty fast, which is fine but wasn't really fleshed out. I wish the story built more on the forged beasts cuz that's a great concept. I like him as a tinkerer using his skills to upgrade beasts. felt that it was just kind of handed to him tho. could just be a pace thing. I don't know I'm bad at reviews. this is probably my 3rd in my lifetime or something like that.
I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.
It’s a good synopsis and a different way for beast taming. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up I highly recommend it.
As tradition requires, I can't not give my own book a five star review. You can drop any questions you might have, below 👇🏾 in the comments. Thank you for reading.
Although we're still in early chapters I see a lot of potential in this book. It's a book that traps you in reading mode until the end and then makes you want to read more of it. I'm definitely going to keep reading it.
Beast taming is not a new or unique concept but I like your take on it, it's pretty good. Love your characters, especially the Rusty, forged beast. It's a book I recommend 10/10.
It's a pretty good read, I love the characters introduced so far especially Reid. I hope the author continues updating, unlike me...
Author, Congratulations on this masterpiece. I love the flow and how you have done the world-building. I am looking foward to reading more from you. Cheers
This novel is one of the best in beast taming novels, I advise you to read it 👍👍
Hmm the synopsis was really nice, it got me hooked. The first chapter was good start. Really well-written, and the story development is good so dar and I like the main character.
Really, really Nice book. Love the idea. I like where it's going. Love the mc Reid too. I just hope the author keeps updating. The narrative flows well. I think I'll have to update this review when I've read more chapters. Just keep updating author.
So far, with the few able chapters, the concept of the story seems promising. The start focuses on developing the MC and introducing the unique concept of the story. With a more intense chapter ahead, this book will surely get its fair share of readers.
It's a very nice book and I love the world background a lot. It really got me going. And really made me feel like I'm in the book, like a virtual game.
After reaching 100 chapters, I wanted to take a moment to write another author review and share some thoughts. First, I want to say that the response so far has been amazing. Seeing so many of you enjoy the story has been a huge motivation for me to keep writing. We even got third place in a competition. 🥳 But even after 100 chapters, I know this is just the beginning—there’s still so much more to tell. My goal is to complete this story within 800-1000 chapters at most, so there’s still a long way to go and I hope you stick around to see the end. Next, I’ve seen some of the theories readers have come up with, and honestly, some of them are terrifyingly accurate. It’s always fun to see different theories even if some might be wrong. But for those of you who have figured out things that haven’t even been revealed yet… well, let’s just say I’m keeping an eye on you. 👀 Now, about the love interest. This is a No Harem novel. There will be only one love interest. Some characters might be interested in Reid but that does not mean they're the love interest. Whether or not the love interest has been introduced is a secret, for now. And finally, thank you all for reading and supporting this journey so far. I appreciate every single one of you, and I look forward to bringing you even more chapters!
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
idk became all edgy. Level progression was pretty fast, which is fine but wasn't really fleshed out. I wish the story built more on the forged beasts cuz that's a great concept. I like him as a tinkerer using his skills to upgrade beasts. felt that it was just kind of handed to him tho. could just be a pace thing. I don't know I'm bad at reviews. this is probably my 3rd in my lifetime or something like that.
I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.
It’s a good synopsis and a different way for beast taming. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up I highly recommend it.
As tradition requires, I can't not give my own book a five star review. You can drop any questions you might have, below 👇🏾 in the comments. Thank you for reading.
Although we're still in early chapters I see a lot of potential in this book. It's a book that traps you in reading mode until the end and then makes you want to read more of it. I'm definitely going to keep reading it.
Beast taming is not a new or unique concept but I like your take on it, it's pretty good. Love your characters, especially the Rusty, forged beast. It's a book I recommend 10/10.
It's a pretty good read, I love the characters introduced so far especially Reid. I hope the author continues updating, unlike me...
Author, Congratulations on this masterpiece. I love the flow and how you have done the world-building. I am looking foward to reading more from you. Cheers
This novel is one of the best in beast taming novels, I advise you to read it 👍👍
Hmm the synopsis was really nice, it got me hooked. The first chapter was good start. Really well-written, and the story development is good so dar and I like the main character.
Really, really Nice book. Love the idea. I like where it's going. Love the mc Reid too. I just hope the author keeps updating. The narrative flows well. I think I'll have to update this review when I've read more chapters. Just keep updating author.
So far, with the few able chapters, the concept of the story seems promising. The start focuses on developing the MC and introducing the unique concept of the story. With a more intense chapter ahead, this book will surely get its fair share of readers.
It's a very nice book and I love the world background a lot. It really got me going. And really made me feel like I'm in the book, like a virtual game.
After reaching 100 chapters, I wanted to take a moment to write another author review and share some thoughts. First, I want to say that the response so far has been amazing. Seeing so many of you enjoy the story has been a huge motivation for me to keep writing. We even got third place in a competition. 🥳 But even after 100 chapters, I know this is just the beginning—there’s still so much more to tell. My goal is to complete this story within 800-1000 chapters at most, so there’s still a long way to go and I hope you stick around to see the end. Next, I’ve seen some of the theories readers have come up with, and honestly, some of them are terrifyingly accurate. It’s always fun to see different theories even if some might be wrong. But for those of you who have figured out things that haven’t even been revealed yet… well, let’s just say I’m keeping an eye on you. 👀 Now, about the love interest. This is a No Harem novel. There will be only one love interest. Some characters might be interested in Reid but that does not mean they're the love interest. Whether or not the love interest has been introduced is a secret, for now. And finally, thank you all for reading and supporting this journey so far. I appreciate every single one of you, and I look forward to bringing you even more chapters!