Attack on Titan: The Strongest Newcomer

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Z3kChrome

Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.

LV 4

ladywhite

you said the MC is a recarnactor. but he's acting like he hasn't even watch the anime, how can he not know that Krista is faking it or she is from a royal blood.or that Annie is a female Titan. author I think you should go and watch it before writing a fanfic

LV 1

Santy_Melay

I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj

LV 4

Mohit_0812

Author san try to remove some of the Chinese parts, and also make it more human-like. overall the story is good and has potential. Just keep up the good work and read some of the books which are slices of life.

LV 3

Narrator_san

5 STAR No doubt loved all of your works and thanks for writing an Aot fanfic as there are literally none like I have read many of them they just ditch in middle I really hope you will not drop this

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Shane_Cannon

I love the flow with the book so far.Wish it would post more, but other than that. It's a great book keep going

LV 4

jonas_karel

I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)

LV 3

Keelyn

This is amazing zhshsgshsjsuusjsseue

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Sagvey_Ay

the writing quality is fine, but if you're going to do the same ending as the anime, tell me, let's not bother reading at all, the attack on a titan has already brought a lot of frustration

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Fallen_Demon123

do you have the original link?......…,...

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Mathaw

This is a poorly written fanfic with numerous flaws. The interactions feel hollow, the relationships are rushed, and the writing quality is terrible. Characters contradict themselves from one chapter to the next, and events are unnecessarily repeated, making it feel like you’re reading the same thing over again. There was one instance where a situation was introduced and resolved within a single chapter, which was fine at first, but then the next 10 chapters acted as though that resolution never happened, retelling the events all over again. Many chapters start by repeating almost the exact same content as the previous one, with only minor word changes, until halfway through, where some new content is introduced. Additionally, there are points where it feels like entire scenes were skipped because the story seems to progress drastically without explanation. Overall, this is a low-effort, poorly structured fanfic that feels like lazy AI-generated content.