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pretty good I'm just dropping this cause i dont like the undead mountain from the show and the MC created one of those don't get me wrong i like necromancy i always pick necromancer class but i would prefer the white walker than the undead qyburn created not gonna like i stayed until he created one but he talk about it on chapter 7 iIjust have hope he wouldn't create one cause they turned on they're master so his skill wouldn't work because it need loyalty but the author decided that they only not loyal cause the ritual is incomplete so i drop it good story though just not for me
Me gusta la forma en que se está desarrollando y la construcción de mundo además del progreso uque hace hace el mc y la forma en que se están desarrollando las relaciones de la pareja del mc
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No offence to the translator, but the original author is trash. From chapter 200~ the story HUGELY drops in quality. The mc lets a few enemies go(euron greyjoy), and when he is later attacked by said enemies and nearly dies, he acts all surprised.
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This story is simply wonderful! Every time new chapters are posted I get more excited! ♡ I'm really looking forward to reading more♡♡♡ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
Оригинальная завязка и нестандартное развитие сюжета весьма порадовали. Продолжение в том же духе и спасибо за работу.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
I like the energy that you are giving off, I’m here for the long haul and am putting my faith that this is the beginning of great things to come for you.
As the author I give myself 5 star This is my first fan-fic i have always wanted to write a fan-fic about GOT i will continue this and when it reaches 100ch i will also write another fan-fic on HOTD
pretty good I'm just dropping this cause i dont like the undead mountain from the show and the MC created one of those don't get me wrong i like necromancy i always pick necromancer class but i would prefer the white walker than the undead qyburn created not gonna like i stayed until he created one but he talk about it on chapter 7 iIjust have hope he wouldn't create one cause they turned on they're master so his skill wouldn't work because it need loyalty but the author decided that they only not loyal cause the ritual is incomplete so i drop it good story though just not for me
Me gusta la forma en que se está desarrollando y la construcción de mundo además del progreso uque hace hace el mc y la forma en que se están desarrollando las relaciones de la pareja del mc
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No offence to the translator, but the original author is trash. From chapter 200~ the story HUGELY drops in quality. The mc lets a few enemies go(euron greyjoy), and when he is later attacked by said enemies and nearly dies, he acts all surprised.
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Gooooood🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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This story is simply wonderful! Every time new chapters are posted I get more excited! ♡ I'm really looking forward to reading more♡♡♡ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
Оригинальная завязка и нестандартное развитие сюжета весьма порадовали. Продолжение в том же духе и спасибо за работу.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
I like the energy that you are giving off, I’m here for the long haul and am putting my faith that this is the beginning of great things to come for you.
As the author I give myself 5 star This is my first fan-fic i have always wanted to write a fan-fic about GOT i will continue this and when it reaches 100ch i will also write another fan-fic on HOTD