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¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia! ¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia! ¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia!
There is BIG down side to this novel. OP stories must focus on character relationships. because every battle is won before they are even fought. So love, friendship, comedy romance, intruge, slice of life. All these things have to be there. There is 2 big problems that are in this novel that hamper that. One the system or core or whatever is sentient and is either friends or lover to the MC... not good that mean its going to be one of the most meaningful connection the mc has. 2nd World hopping..... because this not only puts a timer on any relationships but also reinforces that the system is that most important person as its the only one that will go with him most likely. This whole sentient system this is a shortcut for not having to write a whole character that would be either love interest or best friends to the MC in my opinion.
very unique and very pleasing to read love it keep up the good work author (dont drop please )
Well, it's not full of battles and bright actions... but! The descriptions here are at a high level! Especially the created world.
Love it it reminds me so much of I the dragon overlord but without the confusing plot and r 18 stuff this is more fluff than anything
Revelar spoiler
Hey,this is shaping up to be a great novel. The journey has just beggining. Good job,keep it up!
¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia! ¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia! ¡Me encanta! ¡Espero que no dejes caer esta historia!
There is BIG down side to this novel. OP stories must focus on character relationships. because every battle is won before they are even fought. So love, friendship, comedy romance, intruge, slice of life. All these things have to be there. There is 2 big problems that are in this novel that hamper that. One the system or core or whatever is sentient and is either friends or lover to the MC... not good that mean its going to be one of the most meaningful connection the mc has. 2nd World hopping..... because this not only puts a timer on any relationships but also reinforces that the system is that most important person as its the only one that will go with him most likely. This whole sentient system this is a shortcut for not having to write a whole character that would be either love interest or best friends to the MC in my opinion.
very unique and very pleasing to read love it keep up the good work author (dont drop please )
Well, it's not full of battles and bright actions... but! The descriptions here are at a high level! Especially the created world.
Love it it reminds me so much of I the dragon overlord but without the confusing plot and r 18 stuff this is more fluff than anything
Revelar spoiler Hey,this is shaping up to be a great novel. The journey has just beggining. Good job,keep it up!
Still doing a great job keep it up my dude