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Hey there folks, Wony here! Longtime anime fan, Uchiha apologist, and self-proclaimed sucker for overpowered protagonists. Today, I want to talk about a novel that completely hijacked my brain—Naruto: About the Fact That my Brother is Madara Now, I know what you’re thinking. “Oh great, another Naruto fanfic where the MC gets all the cool powers and steamrolls through life.” But nah, this one hits different. It takes everything I love about the Naruto world—the clans, the betrayals, the insane power-ups—and cranks it up to a level I didn’t even know I needed. Before I get too ahead of myself, let’s break this down into the four things that make this novel a complete banger: Characters, World-Building, Power System, and Story. I’m here to give a COMPLETELY UNBIASED review of this amazing fanfic takes everything you love about the Naruto universe and dials it up to eleven. Before jumping into the actual review, I just want to say that if you’re a fan of Naruto fanfictions that expand the lore in crazy, unexpected ways, this is a must-read. Whether you love Madara’s ambitions, the Senju-Uchiha conflict, or just want to see how an outsider can shake up the entire timeline, this story delivers. Now, let’s break it down into four simple categories: Characters, World Building, Power System, and Story. Characters If you’re looking for a protagonist who just coasts through life with plot armor, you’re in the wrong place. Kyōsuke starts as just an ordinary Uchiha (well, as ordinary as an Uchiha can be) during the bloodiest era in Naruto history. Unlike Madara or Hashirama, he wasn’t born a prodigy—he has to fight for his place in history. What makes him stand out is his Point Redemption System, which turns every battlefield into an opportunity for growth. He has ambition, he has drive, and most importantly, he has the ability to change the fate of the Naruto world in ways we’ve never seen before. Beyond Kyōsuke, this novel gives new depth to familiar faces. Madara isn’t just a future villain—he’s a teenager with a dream. Hashirama isn’t just some peace-loving idealist—he’s someone struggling with the weight of his clan. Even Black Zetsu and the Otsutsuki get fresh takes that make them more than just distant, untouchable threats. And of course, there’s Uzumaki Mito, because what’s a reincarnation story without some unexpected romance? World Building This isn’t the peaceful Konoha you know. This is the Warring States period, where life is cheap, betrayals are common, and clans rise and fall overnight. The novel does an amazing job of making you feel the tension of the era—every battle could be your last, and every alliance is just one betrayal away from collapsing. What makes this even better is how the story integrates the hidden lore of Naruto. The Otsutsuki aren’t just a distant afterthought; they’re a real and immediate problem. Black Zetsu’s manipulations are happening in real time, and Kyōsuke is right in the middle of it all. The result? A world that feels alive, unpredictable, and way more dangerous than in the original series. Power System The Point Redemption System is chef’s kiss. Unlike traditional power-ups where the protagonist just gets stronger because the plot demands it, Kyōsuke has to earn every single ability. He starts off weak, but as he racks up kills and gains points, he can exchange them for legendary abilities like the Tenseigan, Truth-Seeking Orbs, and even Yamotsu Hirasaka. But here’s what makes it great—the choices actually matter. Do you save up for an SSS-tier ability, or do you spend points on something more practical for the short term? The system isn’t just a gimmick; it actively shapes Kyōsuke’s journey and forces him to strategize every step of the way. Story At its core, Uchiha Kyōsuke is a reincarnation power fantasy, but what sets it apart is the balance between action, strategy, and character development. And of course, there are some absolutely wild moments. Kyōsuke challenging the Otsutsuki? The story constantly surprises you, making you wonder just how far Kyōsuke can go. Final Thoughts If you’re a Naruto fan, this novel is an absolute treat. The action is intense, the world-building is deep, and Kyōsuke’s journey is both exciting and unpredictable. Whether you’re here for the fights, the political intrigue, or just to see how far a reincarnated Uchiha can push the limits of power, Uchiha Kyōsuke has something for you. Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to go re-read some of my favorite chapters. Wony out.
The writing quality is pretty good so I don't really blame the translator for the low review but there are quite a few inconsistencies when it comes to the MC and his powers and the world around him. Another thing that annoys me is that every once in awhile I read one chapter just to move to the next just for me to be confused cuz it feels like there's a missing chapter in between the two because a whole bunch of stuff has happened in between the two chapters that we either don't get an explanation of what happened or we do get one but it's so poorly explained it leaves me scratching my head
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Мне очень понравилась эта история. Классно сделанная система, которая вроде и имба, но не настолько дисбалансная. В общем потрясающая работа, жду продолжения
Eu adorei está novel, Perfeita. Um bom desenvolvimento dos personagens, desenvolvimento muito legal do mundo Naruto e também sem crossover de poderes de outros universos.um possível ponto fraco é o baixo desenvolvimento da Mito mas possível que esteja no Patreon mas mesmo assim que novel excelente e um ótima tradução. Bom trabalho.
one of the best waring state period stories the only problem is that while mc gain strength with max difficulty without system that is but the other antagonist gaining strength easily almost especially the hyuga and mc power level inconsistency but overall it is one of the best waring state period fanfic just that i think the this period should have been over some time ago
Normal cn novel .....until mc gave hyuga tensigen on silver platter bitch didn't even have mangekyo unlocked..
Es una increíble y genial lectura 😆👌🏻 está muy bien ambientada en la época de Madara y Hashirama con un ritmo de desarrollo fluido y constante, el MC es genial, no solo es inteligente y astuto también cuenta con una personalidad centrada en sus objetivos siendo cruel cuando se necesite y lo bueno que no es completamente dependiente del sistema sino que tiene un crecimiento escalonado y sólido por mérito propio, muy entretenida realmente lo recomiendo 🤙🏻
Excellent translation. The beginning is a bit rough and boring, but after chapter 40-50 it becomes really interesting!. I think it is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read. Even if the MC has a system, it will be difficult for him to keep up with the other powers.
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The story and the translation have been decent so far, and the updates are regular. The mc was cunning and manipulative, and while there’s some Chinese elder nonsense, it’s not too bad. The system aspect felt a bit glossed over—we only know that the MC buys things with the points he earns. The part where the MC and the Hyuga go to the moon felt forced for the sake of the plot. After the MC obtained the Mangekyou, the story started to feel like it was lacking something.
Entertaining and more original than average. The system is not disproportionate, It's a bit odd that a simple chakra recovery potion costs 10,000 points, but... Details. The story is not perfect, there are boring arcs like the puppet war, but the story in general, as I said, is more original than average.
There are so many freaking inconsistencies in this story. And many times the author just makes shit up to advance the plot without any reason or sense. I could ignore a few of them but these plot inconsistencies continue to happen chapter after chapter after chapter. And it gets really annoying after a time. The plot line itself isn't actually bad. But the way it's written makes me feel that the author believes all his readers to be a bunch of retards.
Young author, I commend you for this. The start won't be pleasant and you will receive a lot of negative reviews but let it not affect you. Take this as gaining experience from negative comments just as the mc gains points from kills. Grow with it and transform for the better. Be wise.
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Nice book and A very understandable Translation. Certainly enjoyed this book but the chapters are very less. Please continue the book and and 5 stars review from me.
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Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.
Великолепная и необычная история. Очень рад, что на нее наткнулся. Здесь мы можем наблюдать как появление еще одного героя в эпоху войны кланов серьёзно так меняет историю)
The story is quite good, it is quite pleasant to read each chapter, although it has a system that does not make it extremely powerful from one moment to the next. the translator does a great job, keep it up my friend
the story is pretty good. the only complaints that I have is the lack of consistency in power levels of the mc. at one time he is peak jonin, in the next, he is getting dogged by a counterpart at the same rank. the writing quality is very good with no mistakes. The story is developing quite well. it lacks depth in certain areas, but overall entertaining enough to be called a worthwhile read. characters are multi dimensional. not like the typical chinese bs. i suppose the translator is heavily editing it. The world background is limited at the moment but we are only at 35 chapters. so there is plenty of time.
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Hey everyone, the author here! This is my debut novel and my first foray into Naruto fanfiction. I know I'm a bit late with the review, but I would really appreciate it if you could leave one—it helps me a lot! Nevertheless, after reading through the fanfiction, I genuinely feel this is one of the best stories set during Naruto's "Warning State" era. The main character is not only cool and smart but also ruthless and fully aware of his actions. That said, no story is without its flaws. For instance, the MC's system—what kind of system gives points for killing people? The character could essentially wipe out the entire Shinobi population! Despite this, the story remains a fantastic read. The pacing is strong, and the MC doesn’t overly rely on the system to gain power; he works tirelessly to grow stronger on his own. There may still be a few mistakes I've missed along the way. If you spot any, please don’t hesitate to point them out. I'm always open to feedback and constantly working on improving my writing! Lastly, I genuinely believe this story is amazing, and I've put a lot of effort into making it the best it can be for you. If you have any questions, feel free to comment on this review. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy this journey through the Shinobi world as much as I have enjoyed creating it.
Hey there folks, Wony here! Longtime anime fan, Uchiha apologist, and self-proclaimed sucker for overpowered protagonists. Today, I want to talk about a novel that completely hijacked my brain—Naruto: About the Fact That my Brother is Madara Now, I know what you’re thinking. “Oh great, another Naruto fanfic where the MC gets all the cool powers and steamrolls through life.” But nah, this one hits different. It takes everything I love about the Naruto world—the clans, the betrayals, the insane power-ups—and cranks it up to a level I didn’t even know I needed. Before I get too ahead of myself, let’s break this down into the four things that make this novel a complete banger: Characters, World-Building, Power System, and Story. I’m here to give a COMPLETELY UNBIASED review of this amazing fanfic takes everything you love about the Naruto universe and dials it up to eleven. Before jumping into the actual review, I just want to say that if you’re a fan of Naruto fanfictions that expand the lore in crazy, unexpected ways, this is a must-read. Whether you love Madara’s ambitions, the Senju-Uchiha conflict, or just want to see how an outsider can shake up the entire timeline, this story delivers. Now, let’s break it down into four simple categories: Characters, World Building, Power System, and Story. Characters If you’re looking for a protagonist who just coasts through life with plot armor, you’re in the wrong place. Kyōsuke starts as just an ordinary Uchiha (well, as ordinary as an Uchiha can be) during the bloodiest era in Naruto history. Unlike Madara or Hashirama, he wasn’t born a prodigy—he has to fight for his place in history. What makes him stand out is his Point Redemption System, which turns every battlefield into an opportunity for growth. He has ambition, he has drive, and most importantly, he has the ability to change the fate of the Naruto world in ways we’ve never seen before. Beyond Kyōsuke, this novel gives new depth to familiar faces. Madara isn’t just a future villain—he’s a teenager with a dream. Hashirama isn’t just some peace-loving idealist—he’s someone struggling with the weight of his clan. Even Black Zetsu and the Otsutsuki get fresh takes that make them more than just distant, untouchable threats. And of course, there’s Uzumaki Mito, because what’s a reincarnation story without some unexpected romance? World Building This isn’t the peaceful Konoha you know. This is the Warring States period, where life is cheap, betrayals are common, and clans rise and fall overnight. The novel does an amazing job of making you feel the tension of the era—every battle could be your last, and every alliance is just one betrayal away from collapsing. What makes this even better is how the story integrates the hidden lore of Naruto. The Otsutsuki aren’t just a distant afterthought; they’re a real and immediate problem. Black Zetsu’s manipulations are happening in real time, and Kyōsuke is right in the middle of it all. The result? A world that feels alive, unpredictable, and way more dangerous than in the original series. Power System The Point Redemption System is chef’s kiss. Unlike traditional power-ups where the protagonist just gets stronger because the plot demands it, Kyōsuke has to earn every single ability. He starts off weak, but as he racks up kills and gains points, he can exchange them for legendary abilities like the Tenseigan, Truth-Seeking Orbs, and even Yamotsu Hirasaka. But here’s what makes it great—the choices actually matter. Do you save up for an SSS-tier ability, or do you spend points on something more practical for the short term? The system isn’t just a gimmick; it actively shapes Kyōsuke’s journey and forces him to strategize every step of the way. Story At its core, Uchiha Kyōsuke is a reincarnation power fantasy, but what sets it apart is the balance between action, strategy, and character development. And of course, there are some absolutely wild moments. Kyōsuke challenging the Otsutsuki? The story constantly surprises you, making you wonder just how far Kyōsuke can go. Final Thoughts If you’re a Naruto fan, this novel is an absolute treat. The action is intense, the world-building is deep, and Kyōsuke’s journey is both exciting and unpredictable. Whether you’re here for the fights, the political intrigue, or just to see how far a reincarnated Uchiha can push the limits of power, Uchiha Kyōsuke has something for you. Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to go re-read some of my favorite chapters. Wony out.
The writing quality is pretty good so I don't really blame the translator for the low review but there are quite a few inconsistencies when it comes to the MC and his powers and the world around him. Another thing that annoys me is that every once in awhile I read one chapter just to move to the next just for me to be confused cuz it feels like there's a missing chapter in between the two because a whole bunch of stuff has happened in between the two chapters that we either don't get an explanation of what happened or we do get one but it's so poorly explained it leaves me scratching my head
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Мне очень понравилась эта история. Классно сделанная система, которая вроде и имба, но не настолько дисбалансная. В общем потрясающая работа, жду продолжения
Eu adorei está novel, Perfeita. Um bom desenvolvimento dos personagens, desenvolvimento muito legal do mundo Naruto e também sem crossover de poderes de outros universos.um possível ponto fraco é o baixo desenvolvimento da Mito mas possível que esteja no Patreon mas mesmo assim que novel excelente e um ótima tradução. Bom trabalho.
one of the best waring state period stories the only problem is that while mc gain strength with max difficulty without system that is but the other antagonist gaining strength easily almost especially the hyuga and mc power level inconsistency but overall it is one of the best waring state period fanfic just that i think the this period should have been over some time ago
Normal cn novel .....until mc gave hyuga tensigen on silver platter bitch didn't even have mangekyo unlocked..
Es una increíble y genial lectura 😆👌🏻 está muy bien ambientada en la época de Madara y Hashirama con un ritmo de desarrollo fluido y constante, el MC es genial, no solo es inteligente y astuto también cuenta con una personalidad centrada en sus objetivos siendo cruel cuando se necesite y lo bueno que no es completamente dependiente del sistema sino que tiene un crecimiento escalonado y sólido por mérito propio, muy entretenida realmente lo recomiendo 🤙🏻
Excellent translation. The beginning is a bit rough and boring, but after chapter 40-50 it becomes really interesting!. I think it is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read. Even if the MC has a system, it will be difficult for him to keep up with the other powers.
Its really good actually .,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,
The story and the translation have been decent so far, and the updates are regular. The mc was cunning and manipulative, and while there’s some Chinese elder nonsense, it’s not too bad. The system aspect felt a bit glossed over—we only know that the MC buys things with the points he earns. The part where the MC and the Hyuga go to the moon felt forced for the sake of the plot. After the MC obtained the Mangekyou, the story started to feel like it was lacking something.
Entertaining and more original than average. The system is not disproportionate, It's a bit odd that a simple chakra recovery potion costs 10,000 points, but... Details. The story is not perfect, there are boring arcs like the puppet war, but the story in general, as I said, is more original than average.
There are so many freaking inconsistencies in this story. And many times the author just makes shit up to advance the plot without any reason or sense. I could ignore a few of them but these plot inconsistencies continue to happen chapter after chapter after chapter. And it gets really annoying after a time. The plot line itself isn't actually bad. But the way it's written makes me feel that the author believes all his readers to be a bunch of retards.
Young author, I commend you for this. The start won't be pleasant and you will receive a lot of negative reviews but let it not affect you. Take this as gaining experience from negative comments just as the mc gains points from kills. Grow with it and transform for the better. Be wise.
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Nice book and A very understandable Translation. Certainly enjoyed this book but the chapters are very less. Please continue the book and and 5 stars review from me.
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Revelar spoiler Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good. Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.Actually good fic, the translations needs some what more refining. But overall its very good.
Великолепная и необычная история. Очень рад, что на нее наткнулся. Здесь мы можем наблюдать как появление еще одного героя в эпоху войны кланов серьёзно так меняет историю)
The story is quite good, it is quite pleasant to read each chapter, although it has a system that does not make it extremely powerful from one moment to the next. the translator does a great job, keep it up my friend
the story is pretty good. the only complaints that I have is the lack of consistency in power levels of the mc. at one time he is peak jonin, in the next, he is getting dogged by a counterpart at the same rank. the writing quality is very good with no mistakes. The story is developing quite well. it lacks depth in certain areas, but overall entertaining enough to be called a worthwhile read. characters are multi dimensional. not like the typical chinese bs. i suppose the translator is heavily editing it. The world background is limited at the moment but we are only at 35 chapters. so there is plenty of time.
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Hey everyone, the author here! This is my debut novel and my first foray into Naruto fanfiction. I know I'm a bit late with the review, but I would really appreciate it if you could leave one—it helps me a lot! Nevertheless, after reading through the fanfiction, I genuinely feel this is one of the best stories set during Naruto's "Warning State" era. The main character is not only cool and smart but also ruthless and fully aware of his actions. That said, no story is without its flaws. For instance, the MC's system—what kind of system gives points for killing people? The character could essentially wipe out the entire Shinobi population! Despite this, the story remains a fantastic read. The pacing is strong, and the MC doesn’t overly rely on the system to gain power; he works tirelessly to grow stronger on his own. There may still be a few mistakes I've missed along the way. If you spot any, please don’t hesitate to point them out. I'm always open to feedback and constantly working on improving my writing! Lastly, I genuinely believe this story is amazing, and I've put a lot of effort into making it the best it can be for you. If you have any questions, feel free to comment on this review. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy this journey through the Shinobi world as much as I have enjoyed creating it.