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Disappointed,he was a grown man but after reborn he became childish .He shares his power to someone he just met. No change in story,and forced in everything .He risked his life for someone whom he just met .
a good fanfic. keep it up author. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
At first I saw that this fanfic had good potential, but after I read several chapters, this story still follows the original plot without any changes to the storyline, which I think is the essence of a fanfic.
Forcing a harem between every female character he meets is very dissapointing and giving access to his powers is even more of a no go. i should have realised at the start instead of wasting 3 hours of my life
The book is excellent, interesting, funny, no need to strain your brain the only thing I don't really like is the harem hints and thanks for the great story, I will follow and wait for the continuation
keep going author-san. a very good black clover fanfic. also waiting for the danny phantom fanfic since it was related to my childhood. plus you should also make fanfics about animated shows like 'american dragon: jake long' and 'randy cunninghum: 9th grade ninja'. both are good shows and were related to mine and many other's childhood. also stay safe and sound.
I usually like reading the author's other books, but they kind of ruined this one before it even got started. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i am so annoyed with myself for not reading the reviews, after volume 1 i am just shocked at how it became something with potential to absolute trash, especially how the story was "forcing" the "awful coupling" of mc and vanessa, and how the character of the mc was being slowly ruined up to that point where it just disappeared to the dumps. just the fact it included vanessa proves its garbage
Beginning was a little shaky but the story seemed interesting plus the whole mystic arts in black clover. But everything went downhill after secre reveal. He only knows her as an intelligent bird for about 10years, I can see him trusting her little bit. But straight up giving access to his magics and revealing the secrets about his grimiore is downright bad. From a normal person's pov, if you found out the pet you've been keeping with you is actually a person, especially one with horns in a magical world where demon kings lived. You would atleast have some doubts about this person and her origin. But nothing like that happens, just asks her name and be luffy about it. Sorry for the rant, mc should've waited a bit or get to know her story before giving her full access to his library. That's just my perspective, you do you. Atleast the if MC was aware of black clover plotline, then the problem wouldn't have risen. All the best Author, I'll save this novel for later.
Revelar spoiler
it's another shadow story what else is there to say... BUT PERCY JACKSON- SON OF HADES RAIN SUPREME...
I can't rate 5 stars on the world background since it's a fanfic but I loved the rest without a doubt the best black clover fanfic I have ever read (translator)
Ruin the whole story just because someone can read his grimoire. The author needs to understand that doing “fanfic” isn’t the same as their “own” book. Fanfic is to get the reader's interest in the story already written and use the existing work to express their view of the original work. Original work expresses your imagination
Absolutely amazing imo I started this morning and I’m already at chapter 22. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters author you’re doing a really really good job.
I read it, and it's trash. Like the other comment said might as well make secre a main character. This is just popular because the author has so many followers 🤢
Not sure why everyone’s hating on it—I’m actually really enjoying it so far! Maybe my taste in fics is just quirky, lol. But seriously, as I’ve said before, I’m loving the novel. Keep up the great work, author!
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars
This fanfic makes one of the biggest mistakes a fanfic can have in my opinion, that is sharing powers, I honestly hate that, if the mc shares his specialty, what stops a person with greater talent than the mc from overcoming the mc in his own power/cheat'? it really takes away the vibe for me, if you don't like that, skip this fanfic
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Really good fanfic. Although the integration of some characters looks weird, it's still good. I recommend reading it.
I like the background you're trying to create by mixing Marvel and Black Clover. I think if you go that route, you'd need to power up the canonical characters to a certain extent, considering the threats Strange has to face as the Sorcerer Supreme. On the other hand, I don’t dislike the idea of him giving access to his library—original Doctor Strange would do that too. Also, in the end, all the power belongs to the protagonist, and only he can reach the peak of the Sorcerer Supreme. The classic Strange could confidently speak with the Living Tribunal, and even the Black Priest version makes him unbeatable against any challenge. The only downside I see—and I say this as a harem fan—is that the way he wins over the heroines needs more refinement. It’s not bad, but there’s room for improvement.
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I do hope you make a one piece story as Luffy or an oc mc of with the Nika fruit or maybe a Berzerk story as guts or an oc mc
Not worth it, just follow the original canon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
He’s a saint a bleeding heart mister free for all power giving good boy his principle is - If all of us are special ( Dr. Strange magic and knowledge ) then NO ONE is -
just the fact someone else can read his book is so off putting. and the fact there were sorcerers before him. man you are pulling dissapoinments after dissapoinments
Just step away and don't bother with anything written here. All of the stories are either harem trash, follow the og plot with no changes, the story having people make the dumbest decisions you will ever witness or God forbid all the above. RUN AND DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME
My first Dr strange story that too in bc world....cool author....strated with the ash fenix story to here.... please try to finish this story to the end..... looking forward to it
Disappointed,he was a grown man but after reborn he became childish .He shares his power to someone he just met. No change in story,and forced in everything .He risked his life for someone whom he just met .
a good fanfic. keep it up author. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
At first I saw that this fanfic had good potential, but after I read several chapters, this story still follows the original plot without any changes to the storyline, which I think is the essence of a fanfic.
Forcing a harem between every female character he meets is very dissapointing and giving access to his powers is even more of a no go. i should have realised at the start instead of wasting 3 hours of my life
The book is excellent, interesting, funny, no need to strain your brain the only thing I don't really like is the harem hints and thanks for the great story, I will follow and wait for the continuation
keep going author-san. a very good black clover fanfic. also waiting for the danny phantom fanfic since it was related to my childhood. plus you should also make fanfics about animated shows like 'american dragon: jake long' and 'randy cunninghum: 9th grade ninja'. both are good shows and were related to mine and many other's childhood. also stay safe and sound.
I usually like reading the author's other books, but they kind of ruined this one before it even got started. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i am so annoyed with myself for not reading the reviews, after volume 1 i am just shocked at how it became something with potential to absolute trash, especially how the story was "forcing" the "awful coupling" of mc and vanessa, and how the character of the mc was being slowly ruined up to that point where it just disappeared to the dumps. just the fact it included vanessa proves its garbage
Beginning was a little shaky but the story seemed interesting plus the whole mystic arts in black clover. But everything went downhill after secre reveal. He only knows her as an intelligent bird for about 10years, I can see him trusting her little bit. But straight up giving access to his magics and revealing the secrets about his grimiore is downright bad. From a normal person's pov, if you found out the pet you've been keeping with you is actually a person, especially one with horns in a magical world where demon kings lived. You would atleast have some doubts about this person and her origin. But nothing like that happens, just asks her name and be luffy about it. Sorry for the rant, mc should've waited a bit or get to know her story before giving her full access to his library. That's just my perspective, you do you. Atleast the if MC was aware of black clover plotline, then the problem wouldn't have risen. All the best Author, I'll save this novel for later.
Revelar spoiler it's another shadow story what else is there to say... BUT PERCY JACKSON- SON OF HADES RAIN SUPREME...
I can't rate 5 stars on the world background since it's a fanfic but I loved the rest without a doubt the best black clover fanfic I have ever read (translator)
Ruin the whole story just because someone can read his grimoire. The author needs to understand that doing “fanfic” isn’t the same as their “own” book. Fanfic is to get the reader's interest in the story already written and use the existing work to express their view of the original work. Original work expresses your imagination
Absolutely amazing imo I started this morning and I’m already at chapter 22. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters author you’re doing a really really good job.
I read it, and it's trash. Like the other comment said might as well make secre a main character. This is just popular because the author has so many followers 🤢
Not sure why everyone’s hating on it—I’m actually really enjoying it so far! Maybe my taste in fics is just quirky, lol. But seriously, as I’ve said before, I’m loving the novel. Keep up the great work, author!
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars
This fanfic makes one of the biggest mistakes a fanfic can have in my opinion, that is sharing powers, I honestly hate that, if the mc shares his specialty, what stops a person with greater talent than the mc from overcoming the mc in his own power/cheat'? it really takes away the vibe for me, if you don't like that, skip this fanfic
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Really good fanfic. Although the integration of some characters looks weird, it's still good. I recommend reading it.
I like the background you're trying to create by mixing Marvel and Black Clover. I think if you go that route, you'd need to power up the canonical characters to a certain extent, considering the threats Strange has to face as the Sorcerer Supreme. On the other hand, I don’t dislike the idea of him giving access to his library—original Doctor Strange would do that too. Also, in the end, all the power belongs to the protagonist, and only he can reach the peak of the Sorcerer Supreme. The classic Strange could confidently speak with the Living Tribunal, and even the Black Priest version makes him unbeatable against any challenge. The only downside I see—and I say this as a harem fan—is that the way he wins over the heroines needs more refinement. It’s not bad, but there’s room for improvement.
Revelar spoiler I do hope you make a one piece story as Luffy or an oc mc of with the Nika fruit or maybe a Berzerk story as guts or an oc mc
Not worth it, just follow the original canon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
He’s a saint a bleeding heart mister free for all power giving good boy his principle is - If all of us are special ( Dr. Strange magic and knowledge ) then NO ONE is -
just the fact someone else can read his book is so off putting. and the fact there were sorcerers before him. man you are pulling dissapoinments after dissapoinments
Just step away and don't bother with anything written here. All of the stories are either harem trash, follow the og plot with no changes, the story having people make the dumbest decisions you will ever witness or God forbid all the above. RUN AND DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME
My first Dr strange story that too in bc world....cool author....strated with the ash fenix story to here.... please try to finish this story to the end..... looking forward to it