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English name of the original that this is a translation of please and thank you
It's good, but it forces the plot the author wants way too much. Seriously, imagine a user of Observation Haki losing their own sword to a 14-year-old girl! And you really want to tell me he has to negotiate with her after chasing her? There are literally a million other less humiliating ways. I felt dumber just reading that. Seriously, author, please make an effort to think through the situations a bit more. It wouldn’t hurt to try and make things more coherent. In the next chapter, Nami is going to rescue Ace from the execution platform right in front of the three admirals, Garp, and Sengoku because they were 'distracted' fighting Whitebeard. Seriously, this goes beyond any limits
Good Start and a good enough story till now. More action needed though. i hope we get that in the upcoming chapters.
Good story except for the incompetence of the MC to catch up with Nami who's just 14 years old. Lol Hoping that the author releases chapters regularly
Rating 5 stars for myself :) .................................................................................................................
Read till chapter 50 before this, I’ve since dropped. Idea is okay, nothing new but still good overall. Unfortunately the interactions between MC and others feels off, characters liking way too easy and power leveling is often off too. While I’ll be constructive and say there’s nothing wrong with the book, for me personally there’s nothing really engaging either.
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English name of the original that this is a translation of please and thank you
It's good, but it forces the plot the author wants way too much. Seriously, imagine a user of Observation Haki losing their own sword to a 14-year-old girl! And you really want to tell me he has to negotiate with her after chasing her? There are literally a million other less humiliating ways. I felt dumber just reading that. Seriously, author, please make an effort to think through the situations a bit more. It wouldn’t hurt to try and make things more coherent. In the next chapter, Nami is going to rescue Ace from the execution platform right in front of the three admirals, Garp, and Sengoku because they were 'distracted' fighting Whitebeard. Seriously, this goes beyond any limits
Good Start and a good enough story till now. More action needed though. i hope we get that in the upcoming chapters.
Good story except for the incompetence of the MC to catch up with Nami who's just 14 years old. Lol Hoping that the author releases chapters regularly
Rating 5 stars for myself :) .................................................................................................................
Read till chapter 50 before this, I’ve since dropped. Idea is okay, nothing new but still good overall. Unfortunately the interactions between MC and others feels off, characters liking way too easy and power leveling is often off too. While I’ll be constructive and say there’s nothing wrong with the book, for me personally there’s nothing really engaging either.