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A question about how the protagonist will build his nobility because here I was thinking that you could use Akeno Himejima and Asia Argento as starting pieces due to the wasted potential they showed in the canon. You see, I say this because with them you can go negotiate with Zuo. himejima to give you akeno saying that you will take it and any action that may benefit the coan in the future you will share with the himejima to also try to open a commercial bridge both with one of the five clans of Japan as well as with the fallen telling him to Barakiel that you will take Akeno under your protection and help her to be stronger. You can do the same with Asia, maintaining a margin of communication with her and when she is expelled, she will invoke you and reincarnate her so that she can train in both medicine and the arts. martial arts to see what kind of balance breaker can generate without the help of asking what you think of this
I always liked the world of dxd, it offers multiple opportunities for reciting many good stories if, unfortunately many authors concentrate on the Hareem and Opowerness aspects that make them miss these opportunities. Your story however is a good one 👍 I like it so much that I find myself thirsting for more. The characters are likable, the story development is mature and interesting, the style of writing is also good. Thank you🙏 for your efforts
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A question about how the protagonist will build his nobility because here I was thinking that you could use Akeno Himejima and Asia Argento as starting pieces due to the wasted potential they showed in the canon. You see, I say this because with them you can go negotiate with Zuo. himejima to give you akeno saying that you will take it and any action that may benefit the coan in the future you will share with the himejima to also try to open a commercial bridge both with one of the five clans of Japan as well as with the fallen telling him to Barakiel that you will take Akeno under your protection and help her to be stronger. You can do the same with Asia, maintaining a margin of communication with her and when she is expelled, she will invoke you and reincarnate her so that she can train in both medicine and the arts. martial arts to see what kind of balance breaker can generate without the help of asking what you think of this
I always liked the world of dxd, it offers multiple opportunities for reciting many good stories if, unfortunately many authors concentrate on the Hareem and Opowerness aspects that make them miss these opportunities. Your story however is a good one 👍 I like it so much that I find myself thirsting for more. The characters are likable, the story development is mature and interesting, the style of writing is also good. Thank you🙏 for your efforts