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First 20 chapters are decent. I still don’t know what’s happening with the MC, so I wish more were free.
Its a good novel but once you get past the free chapters the grammar dips a little. The mc has anger issues and lashes out at everyone and everything which gets kinda annoying
A novel with a good potential, but the way of writing lacks. It's like some Japanese manga or anime nowadays where the MC is naive/has anger issues/no character development/full of awkwardly portrayal. These are the list that I see it lacks: 1. Story development is not good. Too fast development. MC jumps from one scenario to the other that there are no breathing. 2. The awkwardly interaction of characters. I read and some of the characters are like (I am a mysterious one) vibe.
ohh, not bad, there are issues but i am still enjoying it, i can see that the author is slowly improving with each chapter which is nice to see.
i love this one, hope you get contracted soon so i can support you with a castle
the story is really good, i do have to admit that the writing quality is not the best but and the characters are not described well but other than that, i love it so much.
nice, i love the slow build up, there are areas where i am like huh but it's not bad
some might not like the slow pacing but i love it, shows us the progression properly
Straight from chapter 1, I saw immense potential in this book. And though there aren't many chapters yet, I can already foresee this book reaching the top! Good luck, author!
Author here. just want to point out that my novel has many issues but i plan to keep improving. if you see any area that i could do better, feel free to tell me, either here or in my discord linked in the synopsis.
First 20 chapters are decent. I still don’t know what’s happening with the MC, so I wish more were free.
Its a good novel but once you get past the free chapters the grammar dips a little. The mc has anger issues and lashes out at everyone and everything which gets kinda annoying
A novel with a good potential, but the way of writing lacks. It's like some Japanese manga or anime nowadays where the MC is naive/has anger issues/no character development/full of awkwardly portrayal. These are the list that I see it lacks: 1. Story development is not good. Too fast development. MC jumps from one scenario to the other that there are no breathing. 2. The awkwardly interaction of characters. I read and some of the characters are like (I am a mysterious one) vibe.
ohh, not bad, there are issues but i am still enjoying it, i can see that the author is slowly improving with each chapter which is nice to see.
i love this one, hope you get contracted soon so i can support you with a castle
the story is really good, i do have to admit that the writing quality is not the best but and the characters are not described well but other than that, i love it so much.
nice, i love the slow build up, there are areas where i am like huh but it's not bad
some might not like the slow pacing but i love it, shows us the progression properly
Straight from chapter 1, I saw immense potential in this book. And though there aren't many chapters yet, I can already foresee this book reaching the top! Good luck, author!
Author here. just want to point out that my novel has many issues but i plan to keep improving. if you see any area that i could do better, feel free to tell me, either here or in my discord linked in the synopsis.