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Beast Evolution Forge
4.52 (13 valoraciones)
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"Beast Forge? What the hell is that?"
He thought while walking out of the alley. The streets were almost empty, with only the homeless wandering around, picking up anything valuable that was dropped. He walked over to join them, still thinking he needed to do this to survive. But as he bent down, a black screen appeared in front of him, with white text displayed on it.
[Beast Forge system activated
User successfully registered
Scanning user... done
User has not awakened, cannot use Beast Forge.
Analyzing for possible solutions.... done
Mission: Run 10 km before 00:00
Reward: Force awakening
Failure: Loss of the Beast Forge system
Will you accept this mission: YES/NO]
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A novel with a good potential, but the way of writing lacks. It's like some Japanese manga or anime nowadays where the MC is naive/has anger issues/no character development/full of awkwardly portrayal. These are the list that I see it lacks: 1. Story development is not good. Too fast development. MC jumps from one scenario to the other that there are no breathing. 2. The awkwardly interaction of characters. I read and some of the characters are like (I am a mysterious one) vibe.
Straight from chapter 1, I saw immense potential in this book. And though there aren't many chapters yet, I can already foresee this book reaching the top! Good luck, author!
ohh, not bad, there are issues but i am still enjoying it, i can see that the author is slowly improving with each chapter which is nice to see.
i love this one, hope you get contracted soon so i can support you with a castle
the story is really good, i do have to admit that the writing quality is not the best but and the characters are not described well but other than that, i love it so much.
nice, i love the slow build up, there are areas where i am like huh but it's not bad
some might not like the slow pacing but i love it, shows us the progression properly
First 20 chapters are decent. I still don’t know what’s happening with the MC, so I wish more were free.
Its a good novel but once you get past the free chapters the grammar dips a little. The mc has anger issues and lashes out at everyone and everything which gets kinda annoying
Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1
- 1 Betrayal 2 months ago
- 2 Resolve 2 months ago
- 3 Awakened 2 months ago
- 4 A Good Meal 2 months ago
- 5 Back 2 months ago
- 6 Association 2 months ago
- 7 Snap 2 months ago
- 8 Cornered 2 months ago
- 9 Corrupted Mana 2 months ago
- 10 Agreement 2 months ago
- 11 Evolution 2 months ago
- 12 Found 2 months ago
- 13 Naive 2 months ago
- 14 Anger 2 months ago
- 15 Gamble 2 months ago
- 16 Hate 2 months ago
- 17 Nightfall Pt.1 2 months ago
- 18 Nightfall Pt.2 2 months ago
- 19 Corrupted Mana Pt.1 2 months ago
- 20 Corrupted Mana Pt. 2 2 months ago
- 21 Corrupted Mana Pt.3 2 months ago
- 22 Corrupted Mana Pt.4 2 months ago
- 23 Peace 2 months ago
- 24 Kana Pt.1 2 months ago
- 25 Kana Pt.2 2 months ago
- 26 Kana Pt.3 2 months ago
- 27 Slot 2 Pt.1 1 months ago
- 28 Slot 2 Pt.2 1 months ago
- 29 Slot 2 Pt.3 1 months ago
- 30 Change Pt.1 1 months ago
- 31 Change Pt.2 1 months ago
- 32 Change Pt.3 1 months ago
- 33 The bird Pt.1 1 months ago
- 34 The Bird Pt.2 1 months ago
- 35 Zone Pt.1 1 months ago
- 36 Zone Pt.2 1 months ago
- 37 Zone Pt.3 1 months ago
- 38 Seal 1 months ago
- 39 Forest Pt.1 1 months ago
- 40 Forest Pt.2 1 months ago
- 41 Forest Pt.3 1 months ago
- 42 Forest Pt.4 1 months ago
- 43 Forest Pt.5 1 months ago
- 44 Forest Pt.6 1 months ago
- 45 Forest Pt.7 1 months ago
- 46 Forest Pt.8 1 months ago
- 47 Forest Pt.9 1 months ago
- 48 Forest Pt.10 1 months ago
- 49 Forest Pt.11 1 months ago
- 50 Dungeon 1 1 months ago
- 51 Dungeon 2 1 months ago
- 52 Dungeon 3 1 months ago
- 53 Dungeon 4 1 months ago
- 54 Dungeon 5 1 months ago
- 55 Dungeon 6 1 months ago
- 56 Dungeon 7 1 months ago
- 57 Dungeon 8 1 months ago
- 58 Dungeon 9 1 months ago
- 59 Taming 1 months ago
- 60 Hunt 2 1 months ago
- 61 Hunt 3 1 months ago
- 62 Hunt 4 1 months ago
- 63 Hunt 5 1 months ago
- 64 Hunt 6 1 months ago
- 65 Hunt 7 1 months ago
- 66 Hunt 8 1 months ago
- 67 Doom 1 1 months ago
- 68 Doom 2 1 months ago
- 69 Doom 3 1 months ago
- 70 Doom 4 1 months ago
- 71 Doom 5 1 months ago
- 72 Doom 6 1 months ago
- 73 Doom 7 1 months ago
- 74 Battle 1 1 months ago
- 75 Battle 2 1 months ago
- 76 Battle 3 1 months ago
- 77 Battle 4 1 months ago
- 78 Battle 5 1 months ago
- 79 Battle 6 1 months ago
- 80 Battle 7 1 months ago
- 81 Battle 8 1 months ago
- 82 Battle 9 1 months ago
- 83 Battle 10 1 months ago
- 84 Save them 1 months ago
- 85 Last Target 1 months ago
- 86 Dungeon Core 1 months ago
- 87 Reunion 1 months ago
- 88 Next Target 1 months ago
- 89 Battlefield 1 months ago
- 90 Pride 29 days ago
- 91 Move On 29 days ago
- 92 The Forest Awakens 28 days ago
- 93 The Council of Guardians 27 days ago
- 94 Guardians 1 27 days ago
- 95 Guardians 2 26 days ago
- 96 Guardians 3 25 days ago
- 97 Guardians 4 25 days ago
- 98 Guardians 5 25 days ago
- 99 Guardians 6 24 days ago
- 100 Guardians 7 23 days ago
- 101 Guardians 8 22 days ago
- 102 Guardians 9 22 days ago
- 103 Guardians 10 21 days ago
- 104 Guardians 11 21 days ago
- 105 Tournament 1 21 days ago
- 106 Tournament 2 20 days ago
- 107 Tournament 3 18 days ago
- 108 Tournament 4 17 days ago
- 109 Tournament 5 16 days ago
- 110 Tournament 6 16 days ago
- 111 Tournament 7 15 days ago
- 112 Guild Masters 1 14 days ago
- 113 Guild Masters 2 13 days ago
- 114 Guild Masters 3 13 days ago
- 115 Defiance 12 days ago
- 116 Real Lead 11 days ago
- 117 Section 12 10 days ago
- 118 Lab 10 days ago
Author here. just want to point out that my novel has many issues but i plan to keep improving. if you see any area that i could do better, feel free to tell me, either here or in my discord linked in the synopsis.