Capítulo 27: Chapter 27: The Shattered Memories
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Shubhu sat in silence, the weight of recent events pressing on his mind. Suddenly, a memory flashed before his eyes—a vivid, powerful vision.
He found himself standing in an ancient hall, surrounded by towering figures. Their faces were obscured, but their voices rang with authority and devotion.
"We pledge our loyalty to you, Shiva," they said, their voices echoing in the grand space.
Shubhu felt a deep connection to the scene, as if this was not just a dream but a memory from a forgotten past. His heart raced as he tried to focus on the details, but before he could grasp the full meaning, the vision vanished. Shubhu blinked rapidly, returning to the present. His friends, Ansh, Kavi, and Tara, were still around him, engaged in conversation.
"Shubhu?" Tara asked, noticing the distant look in his eyes. "You alright?"
Shubhu shook his head, trying to clear the lingering haze. "Yeah, just… a weird memory, I guess."
Before the others could respond, there was a knock on the door. Kavi stood up and opened it to find Satya standing in the doorway, his face set in a serious expression.
"Shiva," Satya began, addressing Shubhu with the name they knew him by, "I'm leaving for the God Trial."
The room went silent as the weight of his words sank in. The God Trial was a dangerous path, one that many did not return from. Satya's voice softened as he continued, "I may not come back. I don't know why, but I felt like I needed to tell you this. Something… feels off. There's darkness stirring in this world, something more dangerous than we've faced before."
Shubhu locked eyes with Satya, feeling an unspoken connection between them. He wanted to tell Satya to stay, to avoid the danger, but he knew it wasn't his place.
"You'll make it back," Shubhu said quietly, though even he wasn't sure he believed it.
Satya nodded, giving Shubhu one last glance before leaving, his footsteps echoing down the hall.
Once Satya was gone, Ansh leaned forward, breaking the silence. "Do you think he'll survive?"
Tara looked unsure. "Satya's strong, but the God Trial... it's unpredictable."
Shubhu remained quiet, still shaken by the memory he had experienced earlier. Something was changing in the world, and it felt like everything was connected to him in ways he couldn't yet understand.
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Meanwhile, far away in a dark fortress...
The Evil King sat on his throne, a menacing aura surrounding him. Karan stood before him, his head bowed low.
"I told you not to fight Shiva," the King said coldly, his voice filled with anger.
Karan kept his gaze down, but there was a strange excitement in his tone. "My king, I couldn't resist the opportunity. But I've discovered something... something far more important."
The King narrowed his eyes, his interest piqued. "What is it?"
Karan straightened, his voice filled with confidence. "Shiva is no ordinary man. When I faced him, I saw something strange. Spirits—powerful beings—appeared alongside him. At first, I thought they were gods. They destroyed three of our strongest generals without effort."
The King's expression shifted, his curiosity growing. "Spirits? What are you talking about?"
Karan continued, "I've never felt such power. I believe these spirits are linked to Shiva, and they are the source of his strength. He isn't just a man. He's something far more dangerous."
The King's eyes darkened as he considered this new information. "And Jedna Village? What of the battle there?"
Karan smirked. "We took losses, yes, but we also gained much. Many heirs fell to our forces. Their deaths will fuel our next steps. Jedna was just the beginning."
The King leaned back, his mind racing with new plans. "Good. Let them think they are safe. We'll strike again, and next time, Shiva will not escape."
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Shubhu shook his head. "No... this is different. If you knew, it would only bring more danger to all of you."
The room was thick with tension, but Shubhu held his ground. He couldn't reveal his true identity yet. Not until the time was right.
For now, the secret of who he truly was—Shiva, the forgotten god—would remain hidden.
But deep down, Shubhu knew that the time was coming when he would have no choice but to reveal
The "wow" moments of this chapter are subtle but impactful, with a mix of emotional depth and powerful revelations. Here are the key wow moments from Chapter 26:
1. Shubhu's Shattered Memory Flashback:
Shubhu experiences a memory from a forgotten past where he sees powerful beings pledging their loyalty to him, addressing him as "Shiva." This moment hints at his divine origins and past life as the God of Time and Space. The sudden, vivid flash of this memory creates a strong sense of mystery and intrigue.
2. Satya's Farewell and Pre-Monition:
Satya's serious declaration that he is leaving for the God Trial, knowing full well that he might not return, adds a poignant emotional touch. His sudden farewell, filled with unspoken emotions, coupled with his ominous premonition about the increasing darkness in the world, heightens the tension. The bond between Satya and Shubhu, although not fully explained, creates a powerful moment of connection.
3. Revelation of Spirits' Power:
In the conversation between Karan and the Evil King, Karan reveals that during his fight with Shubhu, powerful divine being appeared and killed three of their generals. This "wow" moment leaves the Evil King stunned, as Karan mistakenly believes these being to be gods, further elevating Shubhu's mysterious power in the eyes of his enemies.
4. Karan's Revelation about Shubhu:
Karan tells the Evil King that Shiva (Shubhu) is not an ordinary human, making the shocking observation that there were divine-like spirits fighting alongside him. This moment builds anticipation for the readers, as the enemy realizes that Shubhu is far more dangerous than he appears.
5. Dark Plans of the Evil King:
The revelation that the Evil King and Karan have gained an advantage by killing many heirs at Jedna Village, even though they lost generals, shows their cruel strategy. The Evil King's declaration that next time, Shubhu (Shiva) will not escape adds a dramatic turn and foreshadows a larger, more dangerous confrontation.
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