DxD: I Am Light With Villain System

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Tenzing_Choeying_5139

So far this story is really good, but it seems so familiar

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_Harsh_

where can i read the original one ,the one which u picked it from.

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Kayser_5988

lo volvi hacer la reseña, la otra después de lerla si que era algo grosera y no era mi intencion, 1,los capitulos no estan completos faltan partes y me interrupen la lectura 2,la historia va algo acelerada o tengo esa impresion en la otra abia mas desarrollo delo que recuerdo cuando la lei. Degando esos dos puntos la historia me gusta mucho,ai mui pocas o casi ningina con luz yagami como MC. I el systema de villanos es uno que me gusta mucho se ace mui divertido. lo qe mas me molesto fue el punto 1 por poner un ejemplo :Al final de un capitulu sona lo invito al consejo estudiantil para ablar,al capitulo siguinte y ellos ya estan sentados para jugar la partida de ajedrez y lla sabe qe son demonios por parte de sona y la rechazo su invitacion a su nobleza. esto me saca de la trama aveces. Espero que no sonara grosero esta vez de verdad lo siento por la otra resella Te lo dejo en los dos idiomas un saludo i gracias por retomar esta historia I did the review again, the other one after reading it was a bit rude and it wasn't my intention, 1, the chapters are not complete, parts are missing and they interrupt my reading 2, the story is somewhat accelerated or I have that impression in the other one, there was more development than what I remember when I read it. Denoting those two points, I like the story a lot, there are very few or almost none with light yagami as MC. The villain system is one that I really like, it's very fun. What bothered me the most was point 1, to give an example: At the end of a chapter, Sona invited him to the student council to talk, to the next chapter and they are already sitting down to play the game of chess and she knows that they are demons on their part. of sona and rejected her invitation to her nobility. This takes me out of the plot sometimes. I hope I didn't sound rude this time I'm really sorry for the other remark I leave it to you in both languages Greetings and thank you for taking up this story

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Yuri_is_Ntr

That's just worse then it's was. I am was against these useless picking on original mc, that's looks more like kindergarten bulling. Because it's was childish. But this author,simple ommited those things,and continue the story without them. Without any explanations on why and how things happened. Like literally,more then half of a original story is gone. But story is still the same. Maybe you should you know at least copy pasted original chapters then continue on you own,or even better,if you make at least some explanation what happened around mc,like in to love ru franchise. Either way, that's just boring work that's was chopped down to almost snippets level. Which is not a proper story.

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Elemise

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