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Hope the author continues ro update it regularly. Such a satisfying fic about the naruto series. I have read many fics about naruto each with it's own quality but this takes the top for me. Although it has some grammatical errors, it is great read.
Edited MTL and the RAW got dropped/axed/deleted....so only 155 chaps unless the TL gonna continue the rest it's a waste of time...
Form a decent story to shit one it’s amazing how fast the switch can happen It isn’t even the same main character anymore Different name and all I’m sitting here questioning if I’m reading the same story
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all I have to say is that danzo suffers horribly in this novel and hiruzen starts to loose all his hair
This work is raw (without soul). There are stupid plot holes that the author doesn't even see. And the author also has some distorted ideas about the Uchihas (as if he doesn’t know anything about them... but pretends that he understands... It seems that he was just told a little about the Uchihas and he made the wrong conclusions and made up his mind a lot of nonsense)
It's a great Naruto fanfiction.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translate (although there's quite a few times a chinese or different names.. it's still ok for me).. I liked that MC/Yagami not afraid to change.. He changed Uchiha fate.. He also change Hizashi fate.. It satisfying to see what happens to Danzo & 3rd Hokage (I don't know if comic Hiruzen is bad/evil or not, but he's really to soft to Danzo.. And quite bad in this story).. Hope the other Konoha advisor is get the downfall like Danzo and Hiruzen.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
its a good story. a bit boring sometimes, lacking a bit of action, but still a nice read
The actual story is good, but your translation drops in level every chapter. The 34 chapter is unreadable at this point. ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................
I really enjoy this fanfic! It’s not too overbearing and shoving things down your throat, it has a well planned story line, and the direction it’s going in seems very promising. It also doesn’t have a MC who is doing things that would make 0 sense or has no backing to it, which I’m glad about.
I am writing this comment after reading chapter 28. This is a good fan-fic , please don't dropthis and continue writing this story. i am looking forward to further development of the story .
Vous pouvez mettre le lien du roman original s'il vous plaît,.......,......................................... ........................... ................................. ................,............,,,......,.... .............
Can i have the orginal name of this book ...................................................................................................................................................
good fan fic but you have to be more careful in the translator because there are some character names that are inconsistent from the start (Chinese elements)
I'm excited to share that this story explores an alternate path for the Uchiha clan, diving deep into themes of loyalty, power, and rebellion. With intense character arcs and unexpected twists, I believe it offers something fresh for fans of Naruto. Thank you all for your ongoing support – every power stone and comment makes this journey even more rewarding!
Hope the author continues ro update it regularly. Such a satisfying fic about the naruto series. I have read many fics about naruto each with it's own quality but this takes the top for me. Although it has some grammatical errors, it is great read.
Edited MTL and the RAW got dropped/axed/deleted....so only 155 chaps unless the TL gonna continue the rest it's a waste of time...
Form a decent story to shit one it’s amazing how fast the switch can happen It isn’t even the same main character anymore Different name and all I’m sitting here questioning if I’m reading the same story
Me gustaría saber el color del Susano Fghbnnnnnnmmmmmmmmmnb bb jjjn No leas ésto hjnnmmm hjjjnk mmmmmm hjnnmmm bb kkkk fghbnnnnnnmmmmmmmmmnb
all I have to say is that danzo suffers horribly in this novel and hiruzen starts to loose all his hair
This work is raw (without soul). There are stupid plot holes that the author doesn't even see. And the author also has some distorted ideas about the Uchihas (as if he doesn’t know anything about them... but pretends that he understands... It seems that he was just told a little about the Uchihas and he made the wrong conclusions and made up his mind a lot of nonsense)
It's a great Naruto fanfiction.. I love it 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translate (although there's quite a few times a chinese or different names.. it's still ok for me).. I liked that MC/Yagami not afraid to change.. He changed Uchiha fate.. He also change Hizashi fate.. It satisfying to see what happens to Danzo & 3rd Hokage (I don't know if comic Hiruzen is bad/evil or not, but he's really to soft to Danzo.. And quite bad in this story).. Hope the other Konoha advisor is get the downfall like Danzo and Hiruzen.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
its a good story. a bit boring sometimes, lacking a bit of action, but still a nice read
The actual story is good, but your translation drops in level every chapter. The 34 chapter is unreadable at this point. ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................
I really enjoy this fanfic! It’s not too overbearing and shoving things down your throat, it has a well planned story line, and the direction it’s going in seems very promising. It also doesn’t have a MC who is doing things that would make 0 sense or has no backing to it, which I’m glad about.
I am writing this comment after reading chapter 28. This is a good fan-fic , please don't dropthis and continue writing this story. i am looking forward to further development of the story .
Vous pouvez mettre le lien du roman original s'il vous plaît,.......,......................................... ........................... ................................. ................,............,,,......,.... .............
Can i have the orginal name of this book ...................................................................................................................................................
good fan fic but you have to be more careful in the translator because there are some character names that are inconsistent from the start (Chinese elements)
I'm excited to share that this story explores an alternate path for the Uchiha clan, diving deep into themes of loyalty, power, and rebellion. With intense character arcs and unexpected twists, I believe it offers something fresh for fans of Naruto. Thank you all for your ongoing support – every power stone and comment makes this journey even more rewarding!