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A pretty interesting story with a chance for high potential but to be honest I don’t think the author has the skills to pull it off. So it’s three years before the game merges with real life. Chapter 100 only about two weeks have passed. A chapter released once per day. At that rate it would take years in real life with thousands more chapters just to see the merge. If the author does a really well put time skip it could work but I’m not seeing it.
this story is a good getting stronger and getting revenge story. the plot so far has been straight forward and easy to understand. The early chapters are rough. lots of scene transitions are missing and names are mixed up making it difficult to follow. this gets cleared up but it's not perfect. the plot is pretty decent, humor is good. the skills op has are grounded and very little of it has been "plot armor" though he does get overly cocky. (as of 130) the world itself could be filled in a little better. our main character knows a lot but never really justifies knowledge of obscure things. but at the same time now that History has changed he at least is not omniscient and is only knowledgeable about "famous" things. it is good and I hope the author keeps it up pros: not harem heavy main character is strong and clever revenge filled cons: editing and name switching makes some chapters hard to follow the world building could use a little more people sometimes appear without introduction
Free chapters are definitely worth it. MC’s abilities, while overpowered, have well-set initial limitations and are fairly unique.
This novel is simply amazing! From the plot to the character development, every detail is filled with charm, making it impossible to stop once you start reading. The story is tight, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the twists and turns keep you on the edge of your seat, making it impossible to predict what will happen next. The author's writing style is smooth, capturing complex emotions and conflicts perfectly. I truly believe this is a must-read and a book worth keeping! Can't help but send some gifts to the author... Oh wait, this is my novel! Haha[img=recommend]
I really enjoy this story. I want to see it succeed. That being said, there are a few things that are confusing at times and some things that I feel shouldn't be added as it adds time to the story moving forward. I understand the using of usernames/gamertags for many of the characters. Having names that are literal sentences is too much. Maybe start introducing them as their IRL names? or lessen the names to one word? On the topic of characters, stop introducing characters that have no meaning. Focus on the ones that will thrive and mean something. I didn't even catch a transition point for the main character using a disguise until 3 chapters later. Bolding the names of people talking isn't very necessary. Use an ' for thoughts and " for dialogue. Focus on what path the MC personality will be. I honestly thought he wasn't a bad guy in the beginning but now what he does after chapter 110 is meaningless and out of wack for the personality. I love this story, it's just a few things I don't understand that are in this story. Then again, it is the author's story. Not my own.
Revelar spoiler A pretty interesting story with a chance for high potential but to be honest I don’t think the author has the skills to pull it off. So it’s three years before the game merges with real life. Chapter 100 only about two weeks have passed. A chapter released once per day. At that rate it would take years in real life with thousands more chapters just to see the merge. If the author does a really well put time skip it could work but I’m not seeing it.
this story is a good getting stronger and getting revenge story. the plot so far has been straight forward and easy to understand. The early chapters are rough. lots of scene transitions are missing and names are mixed up making it difficult to follow. this gets cleared up but it's not perfect. the plot is pretty decent, humor is good. the skills op has are grounded and very little of it has been "plot armor" though he does get overly cocky. (as of 130) the world itself could be filled in a little better. our main character knows a lot but never really justifies knowledge of obscure things. but at the same time now that History has changed he at least is not omniscient and is only knowledgeable about "famous" things. it is good and I hope the author keeps it up pros: not harem heavy main character is strong and clever revenge filled cons: editing and name switching makes some chapters hard to follow the world building could use a little more people sometimes appear without introduction
Free chapters are definitely worth it. MC’s abilities, while overpowered, have well-set initial limitations and are fairly unique.
This novel is simply amazing! From the plot to the character development, every detail is filled with charm, making it impossible to stop once you start reading. The story is tight, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the twists and turns keep you on the edge of your seat, making it impossible to predict what will happen next. The author's writing style is smooth, capturing complex emotions and conflicts perfectly. I truly believe this is a must-read and a book worth keeping! Can't help but send some gifts to the author... Oh wait, this is my novel! Haha[img=recommend]
I really enjoy this story. I want to see it succeed. That being said, there are a few things that are confusing at times and some things that I feel shouldn't be added as it adds time to the story moving forward. I understand the using of usernames/gamertags for many of the characters. Having names that are literal sentences is too much. Maybe start introducing them as their IRL names? or lessen the names to one word? On the topic of characters, stop introducing characters that have no meaning. Focus on the ones that will thrive and mean something. I didn't even catch a transition point for the main character using a disguise until 3 chapters later. Bolding the names of people talking isn't very necessary. Use an ' for thoughts and " for dialogue. Focus on what path the MC personality will be. I honestly thought he wasn't a bad guy in the beginning but now what he does after chapter 110 is meaningless and out of wack for the personality. I love this story, it's just a few things I don't understand that are in this story. Then again, it is the author's story. Not my own.
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