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Escribe una reseñaA good take on the game genre. An interesting game novel. I like the idea, a really dope stuff but I think the work in this work should be the dialogue. Overall it's really interesting.
This book is what I will call hypnotic it keeps you trapped in this world of epic battles and never ending adventure. check this book if you want to be hypnotized
Your novel has potential, though I only read till 11 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
The book has good pacing, interesting themes and a promising storyline. I hope the Author resumes in posting chapters.
The beginning had its issues- mostly writing. But as we move on it becomes much better, although a small tip I'll give author is that when writing dialogue try to flesh out exposition more to make it more interesting (use the pope in pool method haha). Author also needs to publish stably! It's very important, at least three chaps a week for the readers! Please be steady, author. Story development is going smoothly. No erraticness and character design is as interesting as it gets, without spoiling anything, each has there unique traits that draws you in. The world background is immersive, if you read game novels then you probably know better but I don't read them. Despite that, to me, the world background is striking enough to leave a memorable impact. So idk the standards since I don't read game novels but to me this is nice. In total, its an good novel, improvements will make it even better, its still in its early stage with lots of potential after all! Keep improving in writing quality author as well as uploading streak, stop taking so much time to upload~.
With the few chapters I just finish reading. The book is okay, just that am not a good reviewer in avatar cartoon or stories. I will recommend this to my nephew, he really love this kind of stories. Well the book is okay in my own view and interesting same time 👍
Just by reading the first chapters, I liked it because personally I like when they add more dialogues the story is very creative, add video games with fantasy, personally they are my favorites
The first chapter is captivating. I don't really read books like this but this one, listening to it gave a vivid picture of it. Listening to books like this is way better than reading. Good job, author. 🤗
Eden's Legacy is a thrilling dive into the world of virtual reality, blending high-stakes action with personal growth. Miles Levine, a passionate gamer, finds himself drawn into a VRMMORPG where his choices shape not just his character but the fate of two worlds. While the pacing occasionally slows with detail, the book is an engaging and fun read, especially for fans of Ready Player One or Sword Art Online.
Revelar spoilerI love the story background and it has a flavour i like. This author really thought and I recommend this book to any one who wants a real fantasy book.
Okay... what did the author just do to me? Every chapter seems to draw you in further. It's legit hypnosis, and I've been hypnotized. I'm coming back here for another review, when I'm ball's deep in.
Eden's Impact: Reckoning of the Shadows" is an ambitious and imaginative story that attempts to blend high-stakes fantasy with VRMMORPG elements. The premise—a duel to determine the fate of two worlds—is unique, and concepts like the "glitch system" and the dynamics between Mammon, Gaius, and Lady Fate show promise for deeper exploration. The world-building is creative and adds a refreshing twist to the genre. However, the execution leaves room for improvement. The dialogue often feels overly dramatic and unnatural, making it hard to fully connect with the characters. The pacing, especially in the prologue, is rushed, delivering too much information too quickly without proper emotional buildup. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical and typographical errors, such as inconsistent capitalization and awkward phrasing, which disrupt the reading experience. With better pacing, more natural dialogue, and tighter editing, this story has the potential to be a standout in the genre. For now, it’s a rough gem with creative ambition and worth checking out for fans of experimental fantasy. I’m curious to see how it develops in the future.
Revelar spoilerInteresting novel. I really got hooked just by reading some few chapters. Really captivated and interesting . Keep updating more chapters 😁
"You excelled in presenting work that reflects clear effort and deep thought. Your distinct narrative style reflects your true passion for writing, and you were brilliantly able to take us on a journey full of exciting details and sincere emotions. Continue this creativity. Your talent deserves praise and appreciation."
Hmm how should I say... Even though this is totally not my favorite genre, but I still got hooked!... Other than some minor spelling mistakes, I think this has great potential... Go for it.
"I'm absolutely hooked on this story! The world-building is incredible, and the characters are so well-developed and complex. Ryujin's journey is full of twists and turns that keep me on the edge of my seat. The author's writing style is engaging and immersive, making it easy to get lost in the world of the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!"
Keep it up Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The first few chapters got me hooked and mad [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This synopsis presents a highly intriguing premise that immediately grabs the reader's attention. The concept of a world dominated by virtual reality and a protagonist forced to make such a profound sacrifice is both timely and thought-provoking. It taps into our modern fascination with technology and the potential consequences it may have on our humanity.
I'm not a fan of game genre,but seeing how you were able to put your thoughts into words got me flipping pages to see more of your writing. This is really nice,not sure I've seen a game genre before,this will be my first and the detailing and everything is good!
The story is captivating, with well-paced progression that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Its steady development sustains interest throughout, making it a refreshing addition to the genre. Great job author—keep it up! ;)
Overall, the story is engaging with good pacing that keeps you hooked all the way through. It has steady development and maintains interest until the end. It’s refreshing to read another story in this genre. Keep up the good work! 👍✨️
A true reading investment has found my library after a long dry spell, I approve this glitchy system
Really good plot, so far the story is well written and not rushed. I wanna see this author go places with this novel
First chapter got me hooked very nice pacing and character development... highly recommend for those who love adventure troupes.
A good take on the game genre. An interesting game novel. I like the idea, a really dope stuff but I think the work in this work should be the dialogue. Overall it's really interesting.
This book is what I will call hypnotic it keeps you trapped in this world of epic battles and never ending adventure. check this book if you want to be hypnotized
Your novel has potential, though I only read till 11 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
The book has good pacing, interesting themes and a promising storyline. I hope the Author resumes in posting chapters.
The beginning had its issues- mostly writing. But as we move on it becomes much better, although a small tip I'll give author is that when writing dialogue try to flesh out exposition more to make it more interesting (use the pope in pool method haha). Author also needs to publish stably! It's very important, at least three chaps a week for the readers! Please be steady, author. Story development is going smoothly. No erraticness and character design is as interesting as it gets, without spoiling anything, each has there unique traits that draws you in. The world background is immersive, if you read game novels then you probably know better but I don't read them. Despite that, to me, the world background is striking enough to leave a memorable impact. So idk the standards since I don't read game novels but to me this is nice. In total, its an good novel, improvements will make it even better, its still in its early stage with lots of potential after all! Keep improving in writing quality author as well as uploading streak, stop taking so much time to upload~.
With the few chapters I just finish reading. The book is okay, just that am not a good reviewer in avatar cartoon or stories. I will recommend this to my nephew, he really love this kind of stories. Well the book is okay in my own view and interesting same time 👍
Just by reading the first chapters, I liked it because personally I like when they add more dialogues the story is very creative, add video games with fantasy, personally they are my favorites
The first chapter is captivating. I don't really read books like this but this one, listening to it gave a vivid picture of it. Listening to books like this is way better than reading. Good job, author. 🤗
Eden's Legacy is a thrilling dive into the world of virtual reality, blending high-stakes action with personal growth. Miles Levine, a passionate gamer, finds himself drawn into a VRMMORPG where his choices shape not just his character but the fate of two worlds. While the pacing occasionally slows with detail, the book is an engaging and fun read, especially for fans of Ready Player One or Sword Art Online.
Revelar spoilerI love the story background and it has a flavour i like. This author really thought and I recommend this book to any one who wants a real fantasy book.
Okay... what did the author just do to me? Every chapter seems to draw you in further. It's legit hypnosis, and I've been hypnotized. I'm coming back here for another review, when I'm ball's deep in.
Eden's Impact: Reckoning of the Shadows" is an ambitious and imaginative story that attempts to blend high-stakes fantasy with VRMMORPG elements. The premise—a duel to determine the fate of two worlds—is unique, and concepts like the "glitch system" and the dynamics between Mammon, Gaius, and Lady Fate show promise for deeper exploration. The world-building is creative and adds a refreshing twist to the genre. However, the execution leaves room for improvement. The dialogue often feels overly dramatic and unnatural, making it hard to fully connect with the characters. The pacing, especially in the prologue, is rushed, delivering too much information too quickly without proper emotional buildup. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical and typographical errors, such as inconsistent capitalization and awkward phrasing, which disrupt the reading experience. With better pacing, more natural dialogue, and tighter editing, this story has the potential to be a standout in the genre. For now, it’s a rough gem with creative ambition and worth checking out for fans of experimental fantasy. I’m curious to see how it develops in the future.
Revelar spoilerInteresting novel. I really got hooked just by reading some few chapters. Really captivated and interesting . Keep updating more chapters 😁
"You excelled in presenting work that reflects clear effort and deep thought. Your distinct narrative style reflects your true passion for writing, and you were brilliantly able to take us on a journey full of exciting details and sincere emotions. Continue this creativity. Your talent deserves praise and appreciation."
Hmm how should I say... Even though this is totally not my favorite genre, but I still got hooked!... Other than some minor spelling mistakes, I think this has great potential... Go for it.
"I'm absolutely hooked on this story! The world-building is incredible, and the characters are so well-developed and complex. Ryujin's journey is full of twists and turns that keep me on the edge of my seat. The author's writing style is engaging and immersive, making it easy to get lost in the world of the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!"
Keep it up Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The first few chapters got me hooked and mad [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This synopsis presents a highly intriguing premise that immediately grabs the reader's attention. The concept of a world dominated by virtual reality and a protagonist forced to make such a profound sacrifice is both timely and thought-provoking. It taps into our modern fascination with technology and the potential consequences it may have on our humanity.
I'm not a fan of game genre,but seeing how you were able to put your thoughts into words got me flipping pages to see more of your writing. This is really nice,not sure I've seen a game genre before,this will be my first and the detailing and everything is good!
The story is captivating, with well-paced progression that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Its steady development sustains interest throughout, making it a refreshing addition to the genre. Great job author—keep it up! ;)
Overall, the story is engaging with good pacing that keeps you hooked all the way through. It has steady development and maintains interest until the end. It’s refreshing to read another story in this genre. Keep up the good work! 👍✨️
A true reading investment has found my library after a long dry spell, I approve this glitchy system
Really good plot, so far the story is well written and not rushed. I wanna see this author go places with this novel
First chapter got me hooked very nice pacing and character development... highly recommend for those who love adventure troupes.