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I really like the premise and the writing quality despite the amount of exposition. Not quite at the point of taking a paragraph to describe the color of a leaf but not that far off either at times. MC's trauma feels a bit like it's being forced to add depth so I hope that's not a big ongoing thing. Overall, it's looking like an excellent story with potential.
Obligatory review from the author. . I'm writing this review on my 30 chapter that I've write, so here we go. I see my early chapter and all i could say is, 'wow it quite drag huh'. I think my mindset at the time is to hit 15k words first whilst only having a pilot plot. it's my first time writing anything, so why not a fanfic. . Hopefully it's still tolerable for you guys. and english is my 3rd language so I use some ai to check my grammar and typo. If you like it leave a review will ya... . -🧣
Enjoyed but it started to get boring. It feels like theres no progress, there's no "Multiversal" just "Hotel" Its quite disappointing to be honest. At most you get Harry Potter and Newt. That's pretty much it.
I thought this would be more of management or action oriented novel but it is a 'therapy novel' or 'fee fee novel'. Plus the usage of AI breaks the immersion. Its not that I dislike AI but this has too much redundant sentences which are basically plot filler sentences..
bro you have been explaining how tough the mc life is in his past in every chapter as far as I read. I love the story but the fillers which suthor uses in every chapter makes it tough. author is trying to make mc relatable to his customer I can understand but instead of completing in a single line you were Steaching it too far. for a past 7 chapter the story didn't move at all. just telling mc past for 3/4 part of the chapter and actual progressing is too slow.
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Awesome story concept and has the potential to be one of The Goats!!!! Can't wait for more chapters !!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🫡👍🐐🙏
MASS EFFECT WORLD PLEASE I NEED IT AND NEVER GET IT, IT COULD BE FUN TO READ THE HOTEL IN THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE HELPING THE HEROES AND ALIENS OF MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE.
AUTHOR THIS HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A EPIC MULTIVERSE STORY..author the WORLDS the HOTEL needs to VISIT.1.MASS EFFECT game the hotel in a planet. 2,TENSURA anime.3.MUSHOKU TENSEI anime,4.BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLATER.4.TRANSFORMERS ONE movie all other universes.5.SUPERNATURAL TV show.6, NARUTO anime.7.fairy tail anime.8,BLEACH anime.9,DC and MARVEL..author DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL AFTER 7 CHAPTERS and WASTE MY TIME thanks you.
It is an amazing story start. One of the best starts that I have read in last few hours on this platform. My personal recommation to read it and give it a try. The stpry is captivating and interesting!
I really like the premise and the writing quality despite the amount of exposition. Not quite at the point of taking a paragraph to describe the color of a leaf but not that far off either at times. MC's trauma feels a bit like it's being forced to add depth so I hope that's not a big ongoing thing. Overall, it's looking like an excellent story with potential.
Obligatory review from the author. . I'm writing this review on my 30 chapter that I've write, so here we go. I see my early chapter and all i could say is, 'wow it quite drag huh'. I think my mindset at the time is to hit 15k words first whilst only having a pilot plot. it's my first time writing anything, so why not a fanfic. . Hopefully it's still tolerable for you guys. and english is my 3rd language so I use some ai to check my grammar and typo. If you like it leave a review will ya... . -🧣
Enjoyed but it started to get boring. It feels like theres no progress, there's no "Multiversal" just "Hotel" Its quite disappointing to be honest. At most you get Harry Potter and Newt. That's pretty much it.
I thought this would be more of management or action oriented novel but it is a 'therapy novel' or 'fee fee novel'. Plus the usage of AI breaks the immersion. Its not that I dislike AI but this has too much redundant sentences which are basically plot filler sentences..
bro you have been explaining how tough the mc life is in his past in every chapter as far as I read. I love the story but the fillers which suthor uses in every chapter makes it tough. author is trying to make mc relatable to his customer I can understand but instead of completing in a single line you were Steaching it too far. for a past 7 chapter the story didn't move at all. just telling mc past for 3/4 part of the chapter and actual progressing is too slow.
Revelar spoiler Awesome story concept and has the potential to be one of The Goats!!!! Can't wait for more chapters !!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🫡👍🐐🙏
MASS EFFECT WORLD PLEASE I NEED IT AND NEVER GET IT, IT COULD BE FUN TO READ THE HOTEL IN THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE HELPING THE HEROES AND ALIENS OF MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE.
AUTHOR THIS HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A EPIC MULTIVERSE STORY..author the WORLDS the HOTEL needs to VISIT.1.MASS EFFECT game the hotel in a planet. 2,TENSURA anime.3.MUSHOKU TENSEI anime,4.BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLATER.4.TRANSFORMERS ONE movie all other universes.5.SUPERNATURAL TV show.6, NARUTO anime.7.fairy tail anime.8,BLEACH anime.9,DC and MARVEL..author DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL AFTER 7 CHAPTERS and WASTE MY TIME thanks you.
It is an amazing story start. One of the best starts that I have read in last few hours on this platform. My personal recommation to read it and give it a try. The stpry is captivating and interesting!