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Started off great and had potential. MC was not overly OP nor a weakling. His actions up to Liyue were reasonable, and there was good comedy. However, Inazuma was absolutely garbage. The MC was always a pervert, but when he got to inazuma, they stopped being "funny" and became outright disgusting. The story also became purely about him going around, seducing female characters for no reason (and, in some cases, like Ei, just outright brainwashing her using the systems powers). Honestly, I tried putting up with it because many people told me that sumeru was good, but I can't take it anymore. The culmination was the mc forcing ayaka to wear extremely reveling attire under the excuse of "training clothes".
La historia es buena solo en liyue, luego la historia decae a los pocos capitulos de Inazuma por las acciones del protagonista, recomiendo leer solo liyue y luego abandonar la historia.
ey blud can you drop the previous cover of this novel I really like it (~‾▿‾)~~~
Definitely a five star. I have been reading this for quite some time now, and I have zero Complain about the story, the characters, but the only thing I did not like is the ayaka and Layla part in the Haram because except them most of the women are mature, this two fells a little out of place
F'in love it. Best translation I've seen so far, much love to the translator. Story is pretty good too, not too cheesy and not too much BS. Also hilarious, which is my favorite part and story flows really smoothly.
Good quality translation and editing. Some skits are really funny. The MC is overpowered and his powers develop balancedly. This story mainly revolves around comedic misunderstanding. The problem comes with the mc acting like a simp but even though he acts like a simp he's funny but at some point it will feel annoying. He is too vegetarian he acts like a beta and though girls are chasing him he don't do anything to them and though it's annoying me sometimes it's funny. Around chapter 220 though after he popped his cherry the story picked up the pace. Though he still acts submissive but at least he's not a virgin anymore and can sometimes assert his dominance. Still the story is enjoyable especially at the latest chapters.
...Very good job, it seems that they are very fond of this work. The characters are not very gray, in the sense that they do show the expressiveness of each person. The plot is well developed and the winning system gancha to be balanced without being too OP. The good thing about the protagonist is that he thinks first before acting and realizes that he is a bastard. 10/10
very nice
I'll be honest, I liked the story at first, but there is too much filler in almost every chapter, and scenes that make me feel ashamed, if you are able to bear what I am saying, go ahead
I found the fanfic to be simply phenomenal, there are no words to describe this masterpiece, there is a lot of comedy, and it is certainly a harem, but it is very well developed, it doesn't seem forced at all, except in some moments.
Of all the fan-fics that the author has been translating, if he asked me how many of them were Chinese fan-fics in a quiz, the only one I would know for sure is this one. Why? Well, let's just say that many Chinese fan-fic authors have a horrible habit of making the MC force women in one way or another to love and adore them - as was seen with Raiden Shogun here - when they don't know what to do to progress in romance. I remember a fic a few years ago where I read a HxH fan-fic, it was great, until the author literally gave a slavery system to the MC, where he could summon female characters. Honestly, I think this is SO shit. That's really my only criticism of the book, other than that it's really fun, and the translation is impeccable.
Excellent and hilarious, it’s a well translated fic that keeps you coming back for more. The story isn’t even the best part of reading the fic, the translator’s rage at how many names one character gets takes the cake, albeit barely. The worst part of the fic is that the translator is contractually obligated to upload 20 chapters a day and only does a tenth of that. TWO chapters a day?!? I mean, if you think posting anywhere from 2-10 times as many chapters as most people on the platform will get you out from the contract that I signed for you… then you have a lawsuit coming. And the fine is more chapters…
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Chapter 50 in and I have to say, this is good. I love how characters interact with each other and the mc antics lmao. It's very surprising Singora hasn't killed his bum yet. Also the translator note at the end of each chapter is fun to read ngl.
Revelar spoiler
one of the best fics for genshin MC doesn't follow lumine but still keeps track of her to know what's about to go down and he does whatever he wants 😉😉
I'm giving this 5 stars just for the quality of translation. I hope you keep translating some of the better chinese ffs, because you have a very good vocabulary and your writing style is also very good. It doesnt seem like youre a complete newbie to writing. I'm still on chapter 1 but I'm already vouching🫡
pretty solid story its fun to read with the main character causing chaos all around him in weird and unexpected ways. and i like that the author knows to write genuine interactions without the main character always being frustrating to other around him. the balance between chaos and him being normal makes it more entertaining to read.
Vou tentar ler esse, o tradutor poderia mudar o nome do mc sinceramente não combina com genshin e realmente desanima a ler por que letra histórica genéricas de xianxian.
Hey, it’s really good, you don’t make mistakes with the names so that’s a plus in my book, and can you please share the nome of the og or a link if possible
Started off great and had potential. MC was not overly OP nor a weakling. His actions up to Liyue were reasonable, and there was good comedy. However, Inazuma was absolutely garbage. The MC was always a pervert, but when he got to inazuma, they stopped being "funny" and became outright disgusting. The story also became purely about him going around, seducing female characters for no reason (and, in some cases, like Ei, just outright brainwashing her using the systems powers). Honestly, I tried putting up with it because many people told me that sumeru was good, but I can't take it anymore. The culmination was the mc forcing ayaka to wear extremely reveling attire under the excuse of "training clothes".
La historia es buena solo en liyue, luego la historia decae a los pocos capitulos de Inazuma por las acciones del protagonista, recomiendo leer solo liyue y luego abandonar la historia.
ey blud can you drop the previous cover of this novel I really like it (~‾▿‾)~~~
Definitely a five star. I have been reading this for quite some time now, and I have zero Complain about the story, the characters, but the only thing I did not like is the ayaka and Layla part in the Haram because except them most of the women are mature, this two fells a little out of place
F'in love it. Best translation I've seen so far, much love to the translator. Story is pretty good too, not too cheesy and not too much BS. Also hilarious, which is my favorite part and story flows really smoothly.
Good quality translation and editing. Some skits are really funny. The MC is overpowered and his powers develop balancedly. This story mainly revolves around comedic misunderstanding. The problem comes with the mc acting like a simp but even though he acts like a simp he's funny but at some point it will feel annoying. He is too vegetarian he acts like a beta and though girls are chasing him he don't do anything to them and though it's annoying me sometimes it's funny. Around chapter 220 though after he popped his cherry the story picked up the pace. Though he still acts submissive but at least he's not a virgin anymore and can sometimes assert his dominance. Still the story is enjoyable especially at the latest chapters.
...Very good job, it seems that they are very fond of this work. The characters are not very gray, in the sense that they do show the expressiveness of each person. The plot is well developed and the winning system gancha to be balanced without being too OP. The good thing about the protagonist is that he thinks first before acting and realizes that he is a bastard. 10/10
very nice
I'll be honest, I liked the story at first, but there is too much filler in almost every chapter, and scenes that make me feel ashamed, if you are able to bear what I am saying, go ahead
I found the fanfic to be simply phenomenal, there are no words to describe this masterpiece, there is a lot of comedy, and it is certainly a harem, but it is very well developed, it doesn't seem forced at all, except in some moments.
Of all the fan-fics that the author has been translating, if he asked me how many of them were Chinese fan-fics in a quiz, the only one I would know for sure is this one. Why? Well, let's just say that many Chinese fan-fic authors have a horrible habit of making the MC force women in one way or another to love and adore them - as was seen with Raiden Shogun here - when they don't know what to do to progress in romance. I remember a fic a few years ago where I read a HxH fan-fic, it was great, until the author literally gave a slavery system to the MC, where he could summon female characters. Honestly, I think this is SO shit. That's really my only criticism of the book, other than that it's really fun, and the translation is impeccable.
Excellent and hilarious, it’s a well translated fic that keeps you coming back for more. The story isn’t even the best part of reading the fic, the translator’s rage at how many names one character gets takes the cake, albeit barely. The worst part of the fic is that the translator is contractually obligated to upload 20 chapters a day and only does a tenth of that. TWO chapters a day?!? I mean, if you think posting anywhere from 2-10 times as many chapters as most people on the platform will get you out from the contract that I signed for you… then you have a lawsuit coming. And the fine is more chapters…
Great story with a great premises you should try and read it tea teateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateateatea
Chapter 50 in and I have to say, this is good. I love how characters interact with each other and the mc antics lmao. It's very surprising Singora hasn't killed his bum yet. Also the translator note at the end of each chapter is fun to read ngl.
Revelar spoiler one of the best fics for genshin MC doesn't follow lumine but still keeps track of her to know what's about to go down and he does whatever he wants 😉😉
I'm giving this 5 stars just for the quality of translation. I hope you keep translating some of the better chinese ffs, because you have a very good vocabulary and your writing style is also very good. It doesnt seem like youre a complete newbie to writing. I'm still on chapter 1 but I'm already vouching🫡
pretty solid story its fun to read with the main character causing chaos all around him in weird and unexpected ways. and i like that the author knows to write genuine interactions without the main character always being frustrating to other around him. the balance between chaos and him being normal makes it more entertaining to read.
Vou tentar ler esse, o tradutor poderia mudar o nome do mc sinceramente não combina com genshin e realmente desanima a ler por que letra histórica genéricas de xianxian.
Hey, it’s really good, you don’t make mistakes with the names so that’s a plus in my book, and can you please share the nome of the og or a link if possible
Well, we certainly have quite an interesting and fun story here.