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it's a good novel according to me. Plot is quite good, and how he steals opportunities is also quite good. I hope he steals all major females and takes them into his harem or kills them(idk just for thrill
Qual vem a tona ela realmente perdeu a virgindadi ou tem algum mais atras disso?
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I already read the story similar to this one where the mc divorced Gu Xun'er from battling through the heavens, Author I just hope you don't become repetitive like that one and that you don't drastically change Qingzhu's personality to adhere to your plot, I don't mind seeing some redemption or a misunderstanding that might have her one day return to the mc but please for god's sake don't make the same mistake that story's author made and add forceful narratives it would just lower the story's quality by adding unnecessary plotholes and decrease the appeal. Aside from that you're doing good currently I also like the fact that your MC is ready to seek out revenge and is decisive, I also hope this is a harem
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it's a good novel according to me. Plot is quite good, and how he steals opportunities is also quite good. I hope he steals all major females and takes them into his harem or kills them(idk just for thrill
Qual vem a tona ela realmente perdeu a virgindadi ou tem algum mais atras disso?
Revelar spoiler I already read the story similar to this one where the mc divorced Gu Xun'er from battling through the heavens, Author I just hope you don't become repetitive like that one and that you don't drastically change Qingzhu's personality to adhere to your plot, I don't mind seeing some redemption or a misunderstanding that might have her one day return to the mc but please for god's sake don't make the same mistake that story's author made and add forceful narratives it would just lower the story's quality by adding unnecessary plotholes and decrease the appeal. Aside from that you're doing good currently I also like the fact that your MC is ready to seek out revenge and is decisive, I also hope this is a harem
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