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The story is decent, but leans too much into the explanatory style, where every little thing needs an explanation behind it that it gets annoying. Even reminders to some degree from previous chapters. I mean, they CAN be summed down a bit. There's also a lack of character description, only mentioning clothes and gender. Naming sense is also poor, from regions (people names) to cities (animal or object) and even some people (gender confusing names). ____________________ Grammar is great, but there's an obvious use and over reliance of [Ai] on that front, with a lack of human proof-reading. Made obvious with the types of repeated mistakes. Such mistakes happen during pokemon relates topics, such as moves, types and evolution, as well as the MC phrasing stuff in a way where he is the trainer and not the pokemon. Such as mentioning Treecko or a Pikachu instead of himself when referring to his evolution. ____________________ It doesn't seem like the author reads comments to know this or they just couldn't be bothered to fix these mistakes. Looking at their profile and their 10 so called "original" fanfic novels, started 4 months ago or less with each already being at 50+ to 100+ chapters already, it's easy to see why their isn't much quality control and likely preferential treatment. I will say this however, it's one of the better AI made fanfics I've read so far.
It's an alright story just to much move and Pokémon explaining and not enough story for me.. also the introduction of working with a trainer ruined it for me..
I love the style of this fanfic, i wanted to see the mc Iv's and ev's so i can calculate how rare He is. I don't know if mutations exist in this novel/fanfic. Well I'm going to read the Author's history
a história é legal, o autor atualiza todos os dia, ate o sistema é legal, o problema mesmo é o protagonista, ele me da uma sensação de preguiça sabe, porra, o cara é um pokemon e ele que descansar, onde ele pode ficar mais forte, eu sei, ele quer lutar contra o sistema, mas porque ele quer?eu também não gosto de como o protagonista é um canhão de vidro, so o especial é forte.querta-feira/20/novembro 2024
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The story is decent, but leans too much into the explanatory style, where every little thing needs an explanation behind it that it gets annoying. Even reminders to some degree from previous chapters. I mean, they CAN be summed down a bit. There's also a lack of character description, only mentioning clothes and gender. Naming sense is also poor, from regions (people names) to cities (animal or object) and even some people (gender confusing names). ____________________ Grammar is great, but there's an obvious use and over reliance of [Ai] on that front, with a lack of human proof-reading. Made obvious with the types of repeated mistakes. Such mistakes happen during pokemon relates topics, such as moves, types and evolution, as well as the MC phrasing stuff in a way where he is the trainer and not the pokemon. Such as mentioning Treecko or a Pikachu instead of himself when referring to his evolution. ____________________ It doesn't seem like the author reads comments to know this or they just couldn't be bothered to fix these mistakes. Looking at their profile and their 10 so called "original" fanfic novels, started 4 months ago or less with each already being at 50+ to 100+ chapters already, it's easy to see why their isn't much quality control and likely preferential treatment. I will say this however, it's one of the better AI made fanfics I've read so far.
It's an alright story just to much move and Pokémon explaining and not enough story for me.. also the introduction of working with a trainer ruined it for me..
I love the style of this fanfic, i wanted to see the mc Iv's and ev's so i can calculate how rare He is. I don't know if mutations exist in this novel/fanfic. Well I'm going to read the Author's history
a história é legal, o autor atualiza todos os dia, ate o sistema é legal, o problema mesmo é o protagonista, ele me da uma sensação de preguiça sabe, porra, o cara é um pokemon e ele que descansar, onde ele pode ficar mais forte, eu sei, ele quer lutar contra o sistema, mas porque ele quer?eu também não gosto de como o protagonista é um canhão de vidro, so o especial é forte.querta-feira/20/novembro 2024
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a good story to read. will look forward for more chaps