This Is Definitely Not Dragon Ball!!

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SalveYing

I like it. I remember reading something similar, but this one is better written. The only thing I don’t really like is that half of the story focuses on forming a harem, even though there aren’t any +18 scenes. Obviously, those scenes aren’t necessary to make a good story, but in a fanfic where the plot revolves around that, it doesn’t make much sense.

LV 2

R0B

Translation is good - that's about it. This fanfic is a disguised brainrot. Mc is retard (confirmed by author). It's a dbz fanfic with "catch them all teenagers" mentality. The grooming is f insane. Even characters are cringing at mc actions. Not to mention it has many missed opportunities it's sickening. Ages and timeline are messed up. I don't see the future for this fanfic.

LV 2

SenatusAlpha

This shit is more peak than KSI's song man. Absolutely loving it 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

LV 3

Zeroren

Honestly, it started okay. It lures you into thinking maybe it would be different, but that just changes after he gets to Earth. It's time to catch them all and start on galactic domination. The translator does a great job—bless him for trying to get this brain rot to us—but no matter, the Chinese filth comes through.

LV 2

elpepe

I didn't expect anything and it surprised me in a good way, it's a very good translation, I just hope it's not one of those Chinese fanfics that in the middle of the story turns into garbage, please translator, if so, correct the fanfic, I wouldn't mind waiting so you can make the chapters.

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Venerable02

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Alucard777

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LV 4

incest_fucker

author in this novel mc has big harem ( 20 or 30 + harem members ) OR just small harem ( under 10 harem members) ? can you tell me

LV 14

Lana12_Lana12

The characters honestly lack depth and personality. The story focuses on building a harem for the most part and the pace is pretty good. The mc just not having a tail is just a straight nerf to be honest, the lack of a tail takes away ikari, great ape, golden great ape, and super saiyan 4. And unlike universe 6 saiyans who start with really high power level because of the lack of tail the mc gets nothing other then not having anger issues. It honestly just made the mc blander, felt like they wanted a human mc but couldn’t because they wanted the mc to be with the female versions of broly, vegeta and goku.

LV 4

Thunder_Storm10

it's a gotta catch em all story with no smut and no other interesting plot to work with. The mcs goal is even to conquer the universe just because

LV 5

Zaelum

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LV 4

RXGAMER_1

it's a really good novel. hope you don't hold it against me reid

LV 3

Moha_bz

This story are really cool. Good start i hope that's gonna stay like that

LV 4

Bhiel_h

Interesting. .

LV 3

DaoistHeartAttack

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