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Look I won't lie the story is written very well, but all that depressing and anti-socialness its started to get on my nerves. I know for a fact I'm dropping this story, but either way I'm going to give this story a three star just on how good it's written, not so much with a depressing stuff
I really love this story. The characters, the dinamic between them plus the action is awesome. The only small issue i have with it it's the inconsistent pacing(sometimes is too fast like jumping events plus one aabrupt timeskip while other Times is so slow that it feels like You could sometimes jump one or 2 chapters and barely see any discontinuity with the story)
Mc is fucking idiotdjjdjdjdjjjddjjdjjdhhddhjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjfjfjfjfjfjjffjjcjccjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfufuuffjjjfjjfjfjfdjdjfjdjjfjddhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhxhhxhxhxhxhdhxhxhcycy
I just read like 12 chapters and i just want to say I am a very picky reader an like action and bloodpumping scene from like get go 4-5 chapters but damn this novel just hooked me so hard I kept reading fist of all story was so fleshed I felt like I was reading the script of some nwe hit movie second mc character it showed just best for someone in his situation would behave and it didn't show much about world background I think it will also be amazing I would suggest to most reader they should at least stick till free chapters.
don't know why I haven't reviewed this novel yet. It's goated asf. Love asher, he's based. The women are all unique and interesting, and the harem isn't just some bullshit that the author pulls out his ass. Its beautiful. Must read. Also, if this doesn't convince you, I've donated a golden gachapon to this book, so that should tell you how great this is.
I honestly really liked the story and the characters of this novel (except Asher he’s an asshole), it really reminded me of the start of My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, but after a certain point in the story it just begins to fall down hill. Characters are abandoned and plot lines are left unfinished for such a long period of time. Now these characters a d plot lines may come back in the future but I doubt it. I did like this novel and I might pick it back up at some point in the future but at this current time, I’m unwilling to continue paying for a story I’m not enjoying.
It's a really wholesome story with romance, drama and action. It's perfect for reading in front of your family and friends.
there are two things I would like to say about this book, first those who don't read it are gay and second
the book is going on the way of becoming a masterpiece ....I request the author make it a peak level masterpiece for us....
was really enjoying the story and figured he would grind his way through i just really didt like the idea of him becoming a servant. don't know if ill continue reading, ill add to my library but idk if ill pick it back up.
Revelar spoiler
Another great novel by my friend, I have only read the free ch till now 😄, the writing is awesome and you could feel the emotion of the character which I truly like about it
Thisb is the real deal looks like your still good with the pen/keyboard hope to see the story progress further
Super Good . It brings me to tears just how much the author improves. He's other book is also good in terms of story telling but this one is on another level in terms of how clean and well written it is 😭😭😭
Good, story is good everything is good and if you like cold strong smart mcs give a read and hopefully is good enough to stand the passage of more chapters… since the others didn’t even make it past 20 *cough* keep up the work
Another High-quality work from my favorite author. Nothing to say , because I know it will automatically be good 💪
Honestly you should give this a try so far it’s very intriguing You will be hooked after reading the first few chapters Innocent is actually one of the few good authors on this app, and whenever you see “anti hero” or “villian” in his book tags just know he’s gonna definitely deliver.. And it has yandere in the title.. soooo that makes it even better 😭
I'm gonna give this dude 5 stars because he wrote Neuro link in Modern worlds
To be honest, this story is so amazing that it makes me wonder what I drank to create such a masterpiece. It might be due to my new diet of coffee, milk, and more coffee. But don’t just take my word for it. Try it for yourself, and you might be surprised to find how humble I’m being right now. LOL
Look I won't lie the story is written very well, but all that depressing and anti-socialness its started to get on my nerves. I know for a fact I'm dropping this story, but either way I'm going to give this story a three star just on how good it's written, not so much with a depressing stuff
I really love this story. The characters, the dinamic between them plus the action is awesome. The only small issue i have with it it's the inconsistent pacing(sometimes is too fast like jumping events plus one aabrupt timeskip while other Times is so slow that it feels like You could sometimes jump one or 2 chapters and barely see any discontinuity with the story)
Mc is fucking idiotdjjdjdjdjjjddjjdjjdhhddhjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjfjfjfjfjfjjffjjcjccjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfufuuffjjjfjjfjfjfdjdjfjdjjfjddhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhxhhxhxhxhxhdhxhxhcycy
I just read like 12 chapters and i just want to say I am a very picky reader an like action and bloodpumping scene from like get go 4-5 chapters but damn this novel just hooked me so hard I kept reading fist of all story was so fleshed I felt like I was reading the script of some nwe hit movie second mc character it showed just best for someone in his situation would behave and it didn't show much about world background I think it will also be amazing I would suggest to most reader they should at least stick till free chapters.
don't know why I haven't reviewed this novel yet. It's goated asf. Love asher, he's based. The women are all unique and interesting, and the harem isn't just some bullshit that the author pulls out his ass. Its beautiful. Must read. Also, if this doesn't convince you, I've donated a golden gachapon to this book, so that should tell you how great this is.
I honestly really liked the story and the characters of this novel (except Asher he’s an asshole), it really reminded me of the start of My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, but after a certain point in the story it just begins to fall down hill. Characters are abandoned and plot lines are left unfinished for such a long period of time. Now these characters a d plot lines may come back in the future but I doubt it. I did like this novel and I might pick it back up at some point in the future but at this current time, I’m unwilling to continue paying for a story I’m not enjoying.
It's a really wholesome story with romance, drama and action. It's perfect for reading in front of your family and friends.
there are two things I would like to say about this book, first those who don't read it are gay and second
the book is going on the way of becoming a masterpiece ....I request the author make it a peak level masterpiece for us....
was really enjoying the story and figured he would grind his way through i just really didt like the idea of him becoming a servant. don't know if ill continue reading, ill add to my library but idk if ill pick it back up.
Revelar spoiler Another great novel by my friend, I have only read the free ch till now 😄, the writing is awesome and you could feel the emotion of the character which I truly like about it
Thisb is the real deal looks like your still good with the pen/keyboard hope to see the story progress further
Super Good . It brings me to tears just how much the author improves. He's other book is also good in terms of story telling but this one is on another level in terms of how clean and well written it is 😭😭😭
Good, story is good everything is good and if you like cold strong smart mcs give a read and hopefully is good enough to stand the passage of more chapters… since the others didn’t even make it past 20 *cough* keep up the work
Another High-quality work from my favorite author. Nothing to say , because I know it will automatically be good 💪
Honestly you should give this a try so far it’s very intriguing You will be hooked after reading the first few chapters Innocent is actually one of the few good authors on this app, and whenever you see “anti hero” or “villian” in his book tags just know he’s gonna definitely deliver.. And it has yandere in the title.. soooo that makes it even better 😭
I'm gonna give this dude 5 stars because he wrote Neuro link in Modern worlds
To be honest, this story is so amazing that it makes me wonder what I drank to create such a masterpiece. It might be due to my new diet of coffee, milk, and more coffee. But don’t just take my word for it. Try it for yourself, and you might be surprised to find how humble I’m being right now. LOL