Reviews of Multiverse maintenance:the repairs wizard by moon_pie_99 - Webnovel

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behind_your_sister

so bad 😞 all the time it's bashing of characters and villian syndrome from xinxia novel wasted my lifes's 30 min

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Xander_Paz

Una joya, amigo que bien vas cocinado esto, los primeros capítulos cuesta arrancar pero después de despegar solo sigues subiendo, una verdadera joya. Un gran desarrollo de personaje y la historia es muy buena, no incluyes los personajes de un golpe y te tomas tu tiempo para crear. Buena suerte amigo que gran obra.

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Airelda

Note to myself: You dropped this because he took over Harry Potters body. Ok, bye!---------------------------------------------------------

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Maycon_Henrique_10

Mano a história tá incrível a escrita tá muito boa seria bom se você postasse mais capítulos e realmente não precisa se preocupar com a história para realmente boa acho que o que você poderia melhorar seria a quantidade de palavras se cada capítulo fosse maior seria interessante espero que continue escrevendo sua história é incrível 🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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Blood_soaked_bar

A good story concept and idea however there is multiple problems in the story the story is very rushed. There is no time for character building neither world building and conflict in the concept of magic where he says that magic can do anything in conflict with himself when he says nothing is immortal since magic can do anything. Why he cannot make himself immortal by using magic other than that my biggest problem is the rush of the story. My next point has nothing to do with this review. It’s just my observation. I noticed a lot of people bashing Dumbledore but you have to understand the man is over hundred years old this mean he is born and lived in the 1800 in a simple term his concept his life view is ancient. He may not be the the best person out there but neither he is the worst. Take it as a observation point..

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Rak
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its a great start to a harry potter + multiverse fic. Mc is taken over harry once he dies but its an AU with different verses mixed in including marvel. Till now mc is slowly powering up and has converted hogwarts into a semi divine artifact to help him in his quests ( he got to live but got some fate debts to clear ). Its been good. long chapters . Give it a try

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TheAbsolution

So far it's been really good 👍 Hope you keep up the good work

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Demon_Gouhl

So far the story is interesting, I hope it doesn't turn into catching girls like Pokemon [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

4mth
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moon_pie_99

Shameless five stars ⭐️ review for my own fanfic 😂😂😂😂😂

4mth
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behind_your_sister

so bad 😞 all the time it's bashing of characters and villian syndrome from xinxia novel wasted my lifes's 30 min

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6d
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Xander_Paz

Una joya, amigo que bien vas cocinado esto, los primeros capítulos cuesta arrancar pero después de despegar solo sigues subiendo, una verdadera joya. Un gran desarrollo de personaje y la historia es muy buena, no incluyes los personajes de un golpe y te tomas tu tiempo para crear. Buena suerte amigo que gran obra.

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Airelda

Note to myself: You dropped this because he took over Harry Potters body. Ok, bye!---------------------------------------------------------

15d
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Maycon_Henrique_10

Mano a história tá incrível a escrita tá muito boa seria bom se você postasse mais capítulos e realmente não precisa se preocupar com a história para realmente boa acho que o que você poderia melhorar seria a quantidade de palavras se cada capítulo fosse maior seria interessante espero que continue escrevendo sua história é incrível 🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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3mth
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Blood_soaked_bar

A good story concept and idea however there is multiple problems in the story the story is very rushed. There is no time for character building neither world building and conflict in the concept of magic where he says that magic can do anything in conflict with himself when he says nothing is immortal since magic can do anything. Why he cannot make himself immortal by using magic other than that my biggest problem is the rush of the story. My next point has nothing to do with this review. It’s just my observation. I noticed a lot of people bashing Dumbledore but you have to understand the man is over hundred years old this mean he is born and lived in the 1800 in a simple term his concept his life view is ancient. He may not be the the best person out there but neither he is the worst. Take it as a observation point..

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3mth
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Rak
LV 5 Badge

its a great start to a harry potter + multiverse fic. Mc is taken over harry once he dies but its an AU with different verses mixed in including marvel. Till now mc is slowly powering up and has converted hogwarts into a semi divine artifact to help him in his quests ( he got to live but got some fate debts to clear ). Its been good. long chapters . Give it a try

3mth
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TheAbsolution

So far it's been really good 👍 Hope you keep up the good work

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3mth
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Demon_Gouhl

So far the story is interesting, I hope it doesn't turn into catching girls like Pokemon [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

4mth
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moon_pie_99

Shameless five stars ⭐️ review for my own fanfic 😂😂😂😂😂

4mth
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