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I like this story but you have to try to make otto lass obsessed with kallen not to the point of the original otto and please don't make the story short try to lengthening the chapter's and make them speak normal it will make it easier for you to right the story and good luck with story and please don't pouch yourself to much okay
I like this story but you have to try to make otto lass obsessed with kallen not to the point of the original otto and please don't make the story short try to lengthening the chapter's and make them speak normal it will make it easier for you to right the story and good luck with story and please don't pouch yourself to much okay