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Seriously the main topic of this fanfic is food… too many food so i can’t read this good luck for your light novel author (Bla-bla-bla 140 caractères bla-bla-bla)
I'm seeing a lot of potential and I don't normally like stories like this, just hope that the mc gets with naruto since a lot of stories don't let OC's get with him but other characters
The fanfic is good, I always like to go through fanfics with female MCs, most of the ones I've been lucky enough to read are good, you should give it a chance. Now this is my inner fanatic talking but you could have the MC develop Sukuna's ice slashes it would be devastating in a fight since they would be almost invisible and not needing very deadly hand seals, you could add them later as a trump card or something like that
Loving story so far, honestly wasn’t very excited about the add of another reincarnated person. You do you though
Seriously the main topic of this fanfic is food… too many food so i can’t read this good luck for your light novel author (Bla-bla-bla 140 caractères bla-bla-bla)
I'm seeing a lot of potential and I don't normally like stories like this, just hope that the mc gets with naruto since a lot of stories don't let OC's get with him but other characters
The fanfic is good, I always like to go through fanfics with female MCs, most of the ones I've been lucky enough to read are good, you should give it a chance. Now this is my inner fanatic talking but you could have the MC develop Sukuna's ice slashes it would be devastating in a fight since they would be almost invisible and not needing very deadly hand seals, you could add them later as a trump card or something like that
Loving story so far, honestly wasn’t very excited about the add of another reincarnated person. You do you though