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The writing style is good, and I am hooked on the third chapter now . 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
The storyline is intriguing and Ming Locke happens to be my favorite character 😊 keep up the good work author 😊
Not bad. I managed to read the first four chapters and I cn tell this story is lit.🔥 I’m adding u to my collection~
such and intriguing story outline author thumbs up author I was caught up with the synopsis
I like this system and academy story. Hope the main character will get more powerfull and beat his enemy. The academy story mostly highlight the relations between MC and his friends, and there is develop a romantic things with the Heroine. Good writing and keep it up!
Well... What can I say, this is an absolute gem. I decided to check this novel out after seeing its name and I have to admit that I'm impressed. After reading nine chapters, I have decided to drop my review, so that readers would know the world they're about to step into. First of all, the world background is epic, the characters are amazing and all have their unique perks. There is great pleasure earned from reading this book, and I have to say that I recommend this book to all those who love a story with a good pace, great characters and understandable world-building. I have to say... Good Job, author. Just never drop this book. I'm off to read the rest after this short pause for a review.
To be honest, I was quite confused in the beginning, probably 'cause I'm not used to reading system stories. But as I read I understood it more and I love the character interaction. Your writing style is good too. Moreee chapters please!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
This need more 5 stars!!! Very nice story! One of my cup of tea! Everyone should give this a try as well!
Shameless Author here, speaking after writing fifteen chapters of this novel. I will shamelessly give myself a five-star review. This novel entails a story about systems. All Ability Awakeners have their own system, but in some classes, some Awakeners are chosen by unique systems, such as the Plundering System (MC's second system), Thunder God System (Chapter 14), Vampire System, Undead System, Fox System, Dragon System, and many more. I would say it has a bit of Eastern fantasy with magic. The novel follows the MC's journey as he battles these unique system holders, subduing some and plundering others. It is a world where the strong prey on the stronger. You'll surely love it. As for the systems' origin, I'll just drop a hint: gods. Feel free to ask any further questions related to this. Thank you for continuing to support this shameless Author.
I love the world-building, but redundancy should be taken care of. The writing style is good, though I suggest minimizing the detailed physical descriptions of every character
I'm not a professional in writing reviews but your book rocks I love how detailed your writing is from the prologue to chapter 4. you started a bit slow but later I got the hang of it. it's so interesting. I love the interactions between the characters, just from your writing I got to know the kind of dynamics the friends have. it's amazing 😍.
at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans. there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty
This shit gass 🔥🔥, talent awakening? My cup of tea 🍵. The story is good so far, the details about the school for each district, the families, everything is 🥂. Keep up the good work bro 💪🏻
Author, your writing style is so good 👍 I got hooked on this book. More chapters please
The writing style is good, and I am hooked on the third chapter now . 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
The storyline is intriguing and Ming Locke happens to be my favorite character 😊 keep up the good work author 😊
Not bad. I managed to read the first four chapters and I cn tell this story is lit.🔥 I’m adding u to my collection~
such and intriguing story outline author thumbs up author I was caught up with the synopsis
I like this system and academy story. Hope the main character will get more powerfull and beat his enemy. The academy story mostly highlight the relations between MC and his friends, and there is develop a romantic things with the Heroine. Good writing and keep it up!
Well... What can I say, this is an absolute gem. I decided to check this novel out after seeing its name and I have to admit that I'm impressed. After reading nine chapters, I have decided to drop my review, so that readers would know the world they're about to step into. First of all, the world background is epic, the characters are amazing and all have their unique perks. There is great pleasure earned from reading this book, and I have to say that I recommend this book to all those who love a story with a good pace, great characters and understandable world-building. I have to say... Good Job, author. Just never drop this book. I'm off to read the rest after this short pause for a review.
To be honest, I was quite confused in the beginning, probably 'cause I'm not used to reading system stories. But as I read I understood it more and I love the character interaction. Your writing style is good too. Moreee chapters please!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
This need more 5 stars!!! Very nice story! One of my cup of tea! Everyone should give this a try as well!
Shameless Author here, speaking after writing fifteen chapters of this novel. I will shamelessly give myself a five-star review. This novel entails a story about systems. All Ability Awakeners have their own system, but in some classes, some Awakeners are chosen by unique systems, such as the Plundering System (MC's second system), Thunder God System (Chapter 14), Vampire System, Undead System, Fox System, Dragon System, and many more. I would say it has a bit of Eastern fantasy with magic. The novel follows the MC's journey as he battles these unique system holders, subduing some and plundering others. It is a world where the strong prey on the stronger. You'll surely love it. As for the systems' origin, I'll just drop a hint: gods. Feel free to ask any further questions related to this. Thank you for continuing to support this shameless Author.
I love the world-building, but redundancy should be taken care of. The writing style is good, though I suggest minimizing the detailed physical descriptions of every character
I'm not a professional in writing reviews but your book rocks I love how detailed your writing is from the prologue to chapter 4. you started a bit slow but later I got the hang of it. it's so interesting. I love the interactions between the characters, just from your writing I got to know the kind of dynamics the friends have. it's amazing 😍.
at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans. there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty
This shit gass 🔥🔥, talent awakening? My cup of tea 🍵. The story is good so far, the details about the school for each district, the families, everything is 🥂. Keep up the good work bro 💪🏻
Author, your writing style is so good 👍 I got hooked on this book. More chapters please
this is so intriguing definitely adding to my library