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this fic is fkin good, really worth to read. mc is not impulsive type like another chinese mc. at least much better than the translator dd 1 fic [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
One of the best soul land fanfictions. .......................................................................................................................... .......... .......... ..................................................
É uma das melhores histórias que eu já vi de doulou dalu. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🙂😀😀😀
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Muito top, Espero que possa o autor não desista de postar ela👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Muito bom, não desista. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍️✍️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
The world-building remains a highlight, expanding on the already rich landscape of soul masters and their abilities. The author skillfully introduces new factions and powers, which keeps the narrative dynamic and engaging. The combat scenes are well-executed, filled with strategic depth that showcases the unique abilities of each character.
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The writing is generally fluid, though occasional inconsistencies in tone can pull readers out of the immersive experience. A bit more attention to editing could help tighten the narrative.
Hmm, I think I saw this before and they abandoned it. I hope you don't abandon it, Mr. Editor. The story is interesting, I hope it continues. I rarely find soul land stories from 2 or 3, almost all of them are from 1.
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good translation, this is not only well done but also well edited... for example in the first chapter when the system first came and MC asked for limitless and six eyes which MC actually didn't ask for that, MC asked for pangu blood (god) but the translator changed it to something that most people in different countries can understand.... and for the storyline, I'm quite disappointed with the original author, even though I quite like other works from this author (btth: Element god)..... the beginning of the story is still very good, but then the check in system starts to mess up, this system gives a sacred power as strong as Haotian out of thin air and integrates it as if it had existed thousands of years ago and it is 100% loyal to the mc. then the system gives a summoning card which finally summons hai bodong from btth whose brain was brainwashed by the system to be very loyal to the mc..... I don't like the storyline but that doesn't mean the interaction between the characters is bad, actually this is quite good compared to other Chinese fanfics
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
I'll leave this for now as there're still quite a few chapters for me to review on but hey here's a meme for you to take
this fic is fkin good, really worth to read. mc is not impulsive type like another chinese mc. at least much better than the translator dd 1 fic [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
One of the best soul land fanfictions. .......................................................................................................................... .......... .......... ..................................................
É uma das melhores histórias que eu já vi de doulou dalu. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🙂😀😀😀
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Muito top, Espero que possa o autor não desista de postar ela👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Muito bom, não desista. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍️✍️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
The world-building remains a highlight, expanding on the already rich landscape of soul masters and their abilities. The author skillfully introduces new factions and powers, which keeps the narrative dynamic and engaging. The combat scenes are well-executed, filled with strategic depth that showcases the unique abilities of each character.
Revelar spoiler Need More. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
The writing is generally fluid, though occasional inconsistencies in tone can pull readers out of the immersive experience. A bit more attention to editing could help tighten the narrative.
Hmm, I think I saw this before and they abandoned it. I hope you don't abandon it, Mr. Editor. The story is interesting, I hope it continues. I rarely find soul land stories from 2 or 3, almost all of them are from 1.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good translation, this is not only well done but also well edited... for example in the first chapter when the system first came and MC asked for limitless and six eyes which MC actually didn't ask for that, MC asked for pangu blood (god) but the translator changed it to something that most people in different countries can understand.... and for the storyline, I'm quite disappointed with the original author, even though I quite like other works from this author (btth: Element god)..... the beginning of the story is still very good, but then the check in system starts to mess up, this system gives a sacred power as strong as Haotian out of thin air and integrates it as if it had existed thousands of years ago and it is 100% loyal to the mc. then the system gives a summoning card which finally summons hai bodong from btth whose brain was brainwashed by the system to be very loyal to the mc..... I don't like the storyline but that doesn't mean the interaction between the characters is bad, actually this is quite good compared to other Chinese fanfics
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
I'll leave this for now as there're still quite a few chapters for me to review on but hey here's a meme for you to take