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I like the book and the writing. My only complaint was personal preference. The MC honestly is a tad wimpy. It seems like he is literally crying every 2 or 3 chapters. Again this is preference and maybe him being overly emotional is by design. I’m just more adjusted to a tougher MC in these type of stories.
I logged in just to say this.. be grateful puny mortal author! this was a very enjoyable read the characters are the strong suit. the world Is addictive and the plot Is fire. well done puny mortal.
one of the few books I enjoy fofor the plot and not just because of the reading aspect dialogues are simple writing is easy to understand yet at no point it feels like story is lacking keep reading dawgs author is passionate and loves his book and I love the author for that keep writing bro we might be seeing a goat in the making
shameless review by the author. I will warn that the first arc is rather slow, taking time to build up Miko's character, the new setting he's thrust into, and other characters, notably the princess and Roan. From escape and onward, though, it gets crazy ;)
I very much appreciate the simplicity of the writing. Especially dialogue between characters. It’s not too fleshed out or too bare. And it’s pretty nice to the eyes. Especially the mc who is actually cool, and not generic for once.
i already loved the introduction! the writing style is entirely understandable and ready to read with a touch of humor and there that perfectly describes the main character's thoughts. i think the flow as well is not too fast, not too slow, which is a perfect balance because the story itself is already good so we get more hooked. the system is also really unique, but not difficult to grasp. its suited for many young male readers (or females too). keep it up, author!
I like the book and the writing. My only complaint was personal preference. The MC honestly is a tad wimpy. It seems like he is literally crying every 2 or 3 chapters. Again this is preference and maybe him being overly emotional is by design. I’m just more adjusted to a tougher MC in these type of stories.
I logged in just to say this.. be grateful puny mortal author! this was a very enjoyable read the characters are the strong suit. the world Is addictive and the plot Is fire. well done puny mortal.
one of the few books I enjoy fofor the plot and not just because of the reading aspect dialogues are simple writing is easy to understand yet at no point it feels like story is lacking keep reading dawgs author is passionate and loves his book and I love the author for that keep writing bro we might be seeing a goat in the making
shameless review by the author. I will warn that the first arc is rather slow, taking time to build up Miko's character, the new setting he's thrust into, and other characters, notably the princess and Roan. From escape and onward, though, it gets crazy ;)
I very much appreciate the simplicity of the writing. Especially dialogue between characters. It’s not too fleshed out or too bare. And it’s pretty nice to the eyes. Especially the mc who is actually cool, and not generic for once.
i already loved the introduction! the writing style is entirely understandable and ready to read with a touch of humor and there that perfectly describes the main character's thoughts. i think the flow as well is not too fast, not too slow, which is a perfect balance because the story itself is already good so we get more hooked. the system is also really unique, but not difficult to grasp. its suited for many young male readers (or females too). keep it up, author!