With two Abilities I became invincible in post apocalyptic World

LV 14

FenikeX

So far it's a bit rushed and some parts of the story don't make sense, but it seems to me that this novel has good potential (especially as the author gains more experience), which, together with an author who seems to know how to receive and filter criticism well, makes me think that it might not take long for him to gain experience and that he probably won't abandon this work (at least not anytime soon). In any case, it's not a waste of time to read (even with some of those exaggerated and sometimes somewhat forced Chinese cliches) and I believe that with the addition of chapters it might be something worth adding to your library and reading over time (it's up to you). Despite everything, my meter is closer to decent (for now).

LV 2

Mystical_Watcher

Dear Readers, First of all, thank you so much for giving my novel a chance! 🙏 I want to start by being upfront, English is not my first language. So, if you come across mistakes or awkward phrasing, I hope you can forgive me. I promise that I will work hard to improve my writing skills as the story progresses. Your patience and support mean everything to me! ... Now, about the story, This novel is my passion project, and I’ve poured a lot of thought into creating a unique world where portal, monster, clans and conflicts exists. I am also planning to introduce many interesting thing so, just read and enjoy Jay's journey, from a normal human to clan leader to strongest person in the world. I hope to get your full support in endeavor. Thank You @Mystical_Watcher