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Really enjoyed reading this story wg hich had a different vibe than the novels I've been reading. I hope the author continues updating as much as possible
A magnificent book, the way I always wanted to read it, fantastic, interesting, fun and fascinating! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))))))))))))))))))
I like it as a mind numbing read... but then I saw the amount of coins they want for the exclusive chapters. Its still to early the locked chapters at this point make up a third of the available material. I dont generally review things but that coin greed really got me on this one.
Feel like there is a bit of an issue with the plot. I see absolutely no reason for him to tie himself to this empire where everyone despises him, and he certainly isn't given one. With a million points he can literally do anything he wants, without surrounding himself with people that hate him and want to kill him. It doesn't make any sense. He could build an amazing town in the middle of nowhere full of absolutely loyal SSS heroes if he wanted to lol. What is the point of any of it?
For the length of the chapters the description of the status and skills and so on are waaaay to long. Dude no one can keep that stuff in their mind when reading and also it doesnt even matter. I really like the Kingdom building aspect but again the first fight scene was way to long. Its fine if you can write 1000-2000 chapters but if it goes on like this you will geh nowhere.
enjoyable and well crafted. much better than most stories on this platform. I can tell that a lot of effort and planning went into this.
So far so good the grammar is spectacular besides a few typos here and there. Already being in the golden rankings before 100 chapters is a testament to the writing quality. Keep up the good work Author.
i wish I could give it 5 stars but it's simply not enough chapters. shame on you, author 😂. I have not done the math to see if every calculation matches with the point totals the author mentioned but do any of us really care? the MC has been put in a sticky situation and uses his brains more than his sword to solve problems. it's a harem but even within 50 chapters the author tries to breathe life into them. they aren't there yet but they are close to not feeling 2 dimensional which is hard to do in harem novels. if you're on the fence I would read what you can. I read up to 56 I think while it was free and it's good so far. one of the better novels grammatically on this site.
Revelar spoiler
(I enjoy the majority of the story so try it out) What will you get? I’m at ch56 and it’s a really cool story with seemingly great potential. It also feels like 10-15ch have been filler or half a chapter will describe one scene that doesn’t really matter. I’m still enjoying it but there are times when you get a description of what the guys appearance is for 6 paragraphs or something that progresses the plot is happening, but you have to read 8 paragraphs of soldiers reactions. I could go on, but I’m still enjoying the story for the most part. Sorry for the rambling.
Revelar spoiler
I love this book. My only problem is that it's a harem book. Other than that, GEAT WORK
overall this is a decent book with a decent start. I may revisit it later on when more chapters are out. the reaction from those around him as he goes from Tyrant to beloved ruler is dynamic. Although where there is lower loyalty it would be nice to see more logical and cunningness instead of the stereotype of 'impossible' the dump villain cant't believe what's happening. On the opposite the loyal are blind followers with there characters done nicely... but could have more depth to them and individuality instead of just following the lord around like a bunch of lackies
Flawless so far. We'll written characters who aren't stupid but also not played as geniuses either. They act like people. The concept itself is great as well.
I have read upto the latest chapter I have to say so far so good I haven’t spotted any grammar mistakes like wrong names for characters. Only issue there isn’t enough chapter yet.
Great book . I wasn't sure that I would like it but I gave it a chance because of how much I love your Draconic overlord novel and this did not disappoint. an incredibly entertaining mc that has a backbone ? it's so rare these days 😔 , I honestly hope the mc treats his wives better than the original ,but the book is still in its early stage so I can't really comment on it.
Favorite story I’ve found in here by far! Need more. It’s the exact thing I’ve been looking for and hit every point I wanted perfectly. [img=update]
as i read this before and after some of you, in my honest opinion this story is one of the best I've read... and I've read a lot of stories.i love that there is good story telling. I love that the spelling is good. and I don't have to guess at the words either. I love this story already and am hanging on every single chapter. the pacing is good. and the detail is also good and doesn't drown you in the scenery. the world background is also good. and i love the characters already each one unique in there own way. if this story is updated persistently I'd be incredibly happy with it. please keep going as this is a work of art.
Wow this is different from your usual transmigration story.. hopefully this will continue as a different style from other common plot.
So far so good enjoying the read. Just wish updating had a regular schedule and more chapters.
It is an interesting story to read. I hope the author update the story more[img=recommend]
aaahhh started reading without seeing chapter number because the synopsis intrigued me so much, its very well written and a fun read im really looking forward to seeing how it progresses from here 14 chapters is too few cant wait for more
author is there Yuri or ntr in harem hope not also how strong will mc became in the end
my time has come, young padawans, to write an honest review of the novel as my promise to congratulate the novel getting 10 chapters. what to say about the novel, it's world building, for now is very lackluster but that is bound to change in the next chapters for a simpler worldbuilding and during the volume that it's to come, probably towards the end of it, the worldbuilding will be at least partially displayed. updating stability is not the best, but the author makes up for it making mass releases, tho I doubt it will keep being like this once the novel is contracted. in regards to character design, the character that I'd like to talk more about is not mc, but his guard. she is a well thought out character with a good built-in personality and reverence for mc and is probably the most loyal subject, and probably significant other (I ship them for now, tho I wouldn't mind if they both end up with their own so instead of eachother). regarding story development, there was some when they talked about the politics surrounding mc's previous body owners' bad decisions regarding basically everything his job as an Emperor allowed. it does feel quite slow for now as the while 10 chapters where centered around the same fight against the damn Mythical snake, but I do understand it's significance to the story so I won't complain much about it. I hope the novel does get a decent pace going instead of just 1-2 of stuff happens, then a huge time-skip, and the same thing again. a lot of things can happen in 2 days of course, but it's important for normal things to happen too, instead of just skipping to the important plot related stuff. all in all just try to focus more on secondary stuff from time to time in order to make the novel feel more light, maybe give mc a hobby and make him a carpenter or a sewer, something interesting like that could add some spice and something relatable to it too to engage readers. just give the novel a try and I'm sure author won't disappoint you.
Heard it's a pogo book, and got more poggers than I thought! Good content, good author, no need for more! Read now guys
Okei, after much lazing around I've decided to drop a review on my work, as well as promises of what you can expect. OK I'll be straight, this is my first kingdom building work so I might make some mistakes, but I shall not fail to give an amazing story! The novel follows Arkanos who as you know was Yu Chen before his death and transmigration, the amazing aspects you can expects from this work are not only building structures out of nowhere with his system due to his nearly unlimited points but also summoning of legendary heroes, creating secret organizations, battling and subjugating mythical creatures and contracting GODS! In the early chapters things may be a bit slow, with training solders, building structures and improving the land, but after that it will be conquest after conquest! Myth after myth! Adventure after adventure! I currently don't have any plan to expand his harem/wives since the three he has now are parts of my plan. If you have any questions or suggestions be sure to bring em here!
Really enjoyed reading this story wg hich had a different vibe than the novels I've been reading. I hope the author continues updating as much as possible
A magnificent book, the way I always wanted to read it, fantastic, interesting, fun and fascinating! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))))))))))))))))))
I like it as a mind numbing read... but then I saw the amount of coins they want for the exclusive chapters. Its still to early the locked chapters at this point make up a third of the available material. I dont generally review things but that coin greed really got me on this one.
Feel like there is a bit of an issue with the plot. I see absolutely no reason for him to tie himself to this empire where everyone despises him, and he certainly isn't given one. With a million points he can literally do anything he wants, without surrounding himself with people that hate him and want to kill him. It doesn't make any sense. He could build an amazing town in the middle of nowhere full of absolutely loyal SSS heroes if he wanted to lol. What is the point of any of it?
For the length of the chapters the description of the status and skills and so on are waaaay to long. Dude no one can keep that stuff in their mind when reading and also it doesnt even matter. I really like the Kingdom building aspect but again the first fight scene was way to long. Its fine if you can write 1000-2000 chapters but if it goes on like this you will geh nowhere.
enjoyable and well crafted. much better than most stories on this platform. I can tell that a lot of effort and planning went into this.
So far so good the grammar is spectacular besides a few typos here and there. Already being in the golden rankings before 100 chapters is a testament to the writing quality. Keep up the good work Author.
i wish I could give it 5 stars but it's simply not enough chapters. shame on you, author 😂. I have not done the math to see if every calculation matches with the point totals the author mentioned but do any of us really care? the MC has been put in a sticky situation and uses his brains more than his sword to solve problems. it's a harem but even within 50 chapters the author tries to breathe life into them. they aren't there yet but they are close to not feeling 2 dimensional which is hard to do in harem novels. if you're on the fence I would read what you can. I read up to 56 I think while it was free and it's good so far. one of the better novels grammatically on this site.
Revelar spoiler (I enjoy the majority of the story so try it out) What will you get? I’m at ch56 and it’s a really cool story with seemingly great potential. It also feels like 10-15ch have been filler or half a chapter will describe one scene that doesn’t really matter. I’m still enjoying it but there are times when you get a description of what the guys appearance is for 6 paragraphs or something that progresses the plot is happening, but you have to read 8 paragraphs of soldiers reactions. I could go on, but I’m still enjoying the story for the most part. Sorry for the rambling.
Revelar spoiler I love this book. My only problem is that it's a harem book. Other than that, GEAT WORK
overall this is a decent book with a decent start. I may revisit it later on when more chapters are out. the reaction from those around him as he goes from Tyrant to beloved ruler is dynamic. Although where there is lower loyalty it would be nice to see more logical and cunningness instead of the stereotype of 'impossible' the dump villain cant't believe what's happening. On the opposite the loyal are blind followers with there characters done nicely... but could have more depth to them and individuality instead of just following the lord around like a bunch of lackies
Flawless so far. We'll written characters who aren't stupid but also not played as geniuses either. They act like people. The concept itself is great as well.
I have read upto the latest chapter I have to say so far so good I haven’t spotted any grammar mistakes like wrong names for characters. Only issue there isn’t enough chapter yet.
Great book . I wasn't sure that I would like it but I gave it a chance because of how much I love your Draconic overlord novel and this did not disappoint. an incredibly entertaining mc that has a backbone ? it's so rare these days 😔 , I honestly hope the mc treats his wives better than the original ,but the book is still in its early stage so I can't really comment on it.
Favorite story I’ve found in here by far! Need more. It’s the exact thing I’ve been looking for and hit every point I wanted perfectly. [img=update]
as i read this before and after some of you, in my honest opinion this story is one of the best I've read... and I've read a lot of stories.i love that there is good story telling. I love that the spelling is good. and I don't have to guess at the words either. I love this story already and am hanging on every single chapter. the pacing is good. and the detail is also good and doesn't drown you in the scenery. the world background is also good. and i love the characters already each one unique in there own way. if this story is updated persistently I'd be incredibly happy with it. please keep going as this is a work of art.
Wow this is different from your usual transmigration story.. hopefully this will continue as a different style from other common plot.
So far so good enjoying the read. Just wish updating had a regular schedule and more chapters.
It is an interesting story to read. I hope the author update the story more[img=recommend]
aaahhh started reading without seeing chapter number because the synopsis intrigued me so much, its very well written and a fun read im really looking forward to seeing how it progresses from here 14 chapters is too few cant wait for more
author is there Yuri or ntr in harem hope not also how strong will mc became in the end
my time has come, young padawans, to write an honest review of the novel as my promise to congratulate the novel getting 10 chapters. what to say about the novel, it's world building, for now is very lackluster but that is bound to change in the next chapters for a simpler worldbuilding and during the volume that it's to come, probably towards the end of it, the worldbuilding will be at least partially displayed. updating stability is not the best, but the author makes up for it making mass releases, tho I doubt it will keep being like this once the novel is contracted. in regards to character design, the character that I'd like to talk more about is not mc, but his guard. she is a well thought out character with a good built-in personality and reverence for mc and is probably the most loyal subject, and probably significant other (I ship them for now, tho I wouldn't mind if they both end up with their own so instead of eachother). regarding story development, there was some when they talked about the politics surrounding mc's previous body owners' bad decisions regarding basically everything his job as an Emperor allowed. it does feel quite slow for now as the while 10 chapters where centered around the same fight against the damn Mythical snake, but I do understand it's significance to the story so I won't complain much about it. I hope the novel does get a decent pace going instead of just 1-2 of stuff happens, then a huge time-skip, and the same thing again. a lot of things can happen in 2 days of course, but it's important for normal things to happen too, instead of just skipping to the important plot related stuff. all in all just try to focus more on secondary stuff from time to time in order to make the novel feel more light, maybe give mc a hobby and make him a carpenter or a sewer, something interesting like that could add some spice and something relatable to it too to engage readers. just give the novel a try and I'm sure author won't disappoint you.
Heard it's a pogo book, and got more poggers than I thought! Good content, good author, no need for more! Read now guys
Okei, after much lazing around I've decided to drop a review on my work, as well as promises of what you can expect. OK I'll be straight, this is my first kingdom building work so I might make some mistakes, but I shall not fail to give an amazing story! The novel follows Arkanos who as you know was Yu Chen before his death and transmigration, the amazing aspects you can expects from this work are not only building structures out of nowhere with his system due to his nearly unlimited points but also summoning of legendary heroes, creating secret organizations, battling and subjugating mythical creatures and contracting GODS! In the early chapters things may be a bit slow, with training solders, building structures and improving the land, but after that it will be conquest after conquest! Myth after myth! Adventure after adventure! I currently don't have any plan to expand his harem/wives since the three he has now are parts of my plan. If you have any questions or suggestions be sure to bring em here!