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a aparência do personagem principalmente não me agradou muito gostaria que focasse um pouquinho na caça contra o crime tipo ele indo atrás do rei do crime [img=update]
As soon as I found out that the Marvel fanfic is not a harem, I immediately left a good review[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is okay. Could be better. It's not a venom system, it's shop system with hero points that activated due to venom. Instead of gaining abilities through actions he can also buy skills like "black rain" from shop.. This is stupid, because these skills sound like rpg skills that doesn't affect allies...
Gostaria de saber se o protagonista e herói ou faz as coisas pro benefício dele? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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why not copy the abilities of animals, birds and fish, plants. if possible, travel to other worlds, like a chat group. I will be grateful if the author reads my comments. thanks for reading
Adorei esta história. Seu personagem é muito bem elaborado e conciso. Espero que você consiga concluí-la. Também estou gostando bastante do romance é bem agravel
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about a story in which a person died and was reborn as a symbiote. And then he decided to merge with Parker from the Gwen Spider universe.
Thank you I hope this story continues taking into consideration that I do not deviate from the topic of the story and please without multiple universes or harems
I like the development of the story , I like the development of the character the main character, if at first he was a stupid and naive guy who thought only about Gwen, now he is also stupid and a simpleton who thinks about Gwen, but more reserved and heartless, this is at least some progress
Got potential to be one of best on this app. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
........... What are your opinions? ................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler Author giving my shameless five star review here! Seriously though if you like my content please leave a review to drown out the haters and give me your stones. There will always be haters and trolls who don't give accurate reviews. Also please be kind, I love my work and while I try not to I do take comments personally.
a aparência do personagem principalmente não me agradou muito gostaria que focasse um pouquinho na caça contra o crime tipo ele indo atrás do rei do crime [img=update]
As soon as I found out that the Marvel fanfic is not a harem, I immediately left a good review[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is okay. Could be better. It's not a venom system, it's shop system with hero points that activated due to venom. Instead of gaining abilities through actions he can also buy skills like "black rain" from shop.. This is stupid, because these skills sound like rpg skills that doesn't affect allies...
Gostaria de saber se o protagonista e herói ou faz as coisas pro benefício dele? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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why not copy the abilities of animals, birds and fish, plants. if possible, travel to other worlds, like a chat group. I will be grateful if the author reads my comments. thanks for reading
Adorei esta história. Seu personagem é muito bem elaborado e conciso. Espero que você consiga concluí-la. Também estou gostando bastante do romance é bem agravel
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about a story in which a person died and was reborn as a symbiote. And then he decided to merge with Parker from the Gwen Spider universe.
Thank you I hope this story continues taking into consideration that I do not deviate from the topic of the story and please without multiple universes or harems
I like the development of the story , I like the development of the character the main character, if at first he was a stupid and naive guy who thought only about Gwen, now he is also stupid and a simpleton who thinks about Gwen, but more reserved and heartless, this is at least some progress
Got potential to be one of best on this app. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
........... What are your opinions? ................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler
Author giving my shameless five star review here! Seriously though if you like my content please leave a review to drown out the haters and give me your stones. There will always be haters and trolls who don't give accurate reviews. Also please be kind, I love my work and while I try not to I do take comments personally.