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Will you add more characters later on? I am having problem to remember everyone now. His best friend, his family, his staff, the iron guards then this antagonist's dogs some more. I am okay with it. Maybe you can add the aux chapter about the characters too to make it easier for people to follow. Other than that, I love how you build the story around Novan City only for now. I love how his best friend was brought to be part of the football (soccer) team now. Was wondering about him for a while too.
The only downside was up until chapter 75 is, does Ethan really need 200 Ascendants? Since he himself had reached the Middle Star Apprentice, those below than him should not be recruited. However, I like everything about this story so far. The faceslapping moment was once only and he had reflected on it which I find it making sense after all. Good series and I really hope it will not end prematurely. Haha!
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Noah asked me to give another review if I have reached more than 50 chapters. I like how the introduction of the Great Families, the Ascendants, how the apps developed and the story related with the apps etc. I am just curious on how this story going to unfold.
Catch up until Chapter 78. The story turned to be different than what I expected but as of now, I am liking everything. You should read it first and I saw a few tried to say this series had some similarities to Chinese novels but I guarantee you it is not. It is better. Not better as in the best but can be placed among the best read so far.
Loving this series. Really hope that we can have more chapters being released daily but I know it is easier said than done. So I'll just wait as long as author could give his best for each chapter.
I am new to this platform but consider I am lucky since I came across this series as one of my earliest series here. What I want to say is, this is a good series if you want something to enjoy in your pastime.
I just hope the author will continue to write this series until the end. It is a great write and I am enjoying it so much. All the best, author!
In the beginning, you can see how naive and immature the MC is. I believe (I HOPE!) that it was intentional. After a few more chapters, things are getting more interesting and I'll leave another review after catching up.
What I can say is that this novel is a good read. I don't think it has too much of a wow in the beginning. But, after reading it chapter by chapter, I believe that this novel is promising.
If you enjoy a story that combines modern-day ambitions with a touch of the superhuman, this is definitely worth the read. It’s a fun and exciting series that keeps getting better!
I am just excited as I have read the football part in this novel. Hahaha! I know you guys might be confused. Come on. Football club is a business too. I just want to say I am loving this. Please write a football novel after this!
Awesome work here. Can see the versatility of author in writing. I just hope author don't stop this series. I know it is hard to stay motivated if it is not doing well. But please know that I will support as much as I could.
I can say that this series is fun to read. I don't expect much of it since there were a few face slapping scenes. I thought that this was like a translated Chinese novel but after reading it for a while, it is not what I think what it is. Read it and you will not regret it.
I've been following this series for a while now, and I have to say—it's one of my favorites! The mix of modern business, secret families, and a dash of supernatural powers makes it super engaging. Ethan Cole is a fantastic main character, and it's so satisfying to see him grow from a regular guy trying to make his company succeed to someone who’s becoming a major player in a world full of powerful families and hidden secrets. I love how the story doesn’t just focus on the action but dives into the details of building a company like BiteWave—there's just the right amount of business strategy and personal drama to keep things interesting. The side characters are well-developed too, and each has a role that adds something special to the plot. The story's pacing is just right, with each chapter leaving you wanting more. If you're into stories that blend modern-day settings with a bit of magic and a lot of intrigue, this one's for you. It’s a fun and thrilling ride, and I can't wait to see where it goes next! Keep up the awesome work!
I really liked this series! The story is exciting, and the characters are relatable and well-developed. There’s a great mix of action and interesting plot twists that kept me hooked from start to finish. Even though I’m not great at writing reviews, I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed reading it.
This author is super versatile. He can write about business, action, and even football really well. I loved how the football scenes were written—they were exciting and fun to read! However, there are moments when the pacing drags, and some plot points feel a bit rushed. It would be great to see a little more depth in certain areas. That said, I think he should write three more books, especially a football one. He really knows how to make those scenes come alive. If you enjoy stories that mix different genres, give this series a shot!
Some comments said there are a bit similarity with chinese novels. But, there’s just a little bit of face-slapping moments, but what I appreciate most is the MC's growth. He reflects on his actions, which makes the story better as it shows character development. Overall, this is a refreshing read with creative twists, so just enjoy it.
I have to say, after reading this series, I can’t help but feel for the author—and for many others writing on platforms like webnovel. The story delivers exactly what the author promised: a world of limitless possibilities, where real-world rules don’t always apply. The disclaimer is clear: this is not our Earth, so it’s a bit baffling when some readers nitpick or criticize the story for not adhering to real-world logic. Honestly, I pity the authors who have to face such harsh comments, which often say more about the intellectual level of the commenter than the quality of the story. It’s difficult enough these days to create something fresh or original, and while this series may not reinvent the genre, it certainly brings a breath of fresh air. Rather than tearing down someone’s creative work, maybe we should appreciate it for what it is—a fun, imaginative escape. So, if you're looking for something different and entertaining, give this series a chance. Don’t go in expecting to critique every detail. Instead, enjoy the creativity and unpredictability, which are sometimes exactly what we need in a good read!
I like it when in a novel, we can get everything. Fight, business, sports and many more. I hope you continue this series. Keep it up, author.
Give it a read. Good story. I like how the story is written. In terms of updates, even though the chapters are no more than fifty for now, the author updates every day. Sometimes, a few chapters in a day. I like how the character is being developed. Just don't let those logic police, common sense police, etc, disrupt your reading experience.
I believe you would like this series after reading it. The writing is great, the plot is great, the character development is great. You need to give chance for Ethan's character development to enjoy this series. I love how we can see that Ethan is going to venture into different kind of world and not limited to running a tech company alone.
High quality of writing compared to other series here in WN. If you want to read, stop questioning this and that to follow how our world (or to be exact how your place do things. We have countries in this world and each country operates differently). Besides, it is normal to see stupid or clumsy actions from the MC as he is developing as a character progressively. He is smart but not smart in everything as he is learning. Anyways, worth reading!
Read that in o ne sitting, interesting work . Keep it up , although there are few missing info clips, and a little detailing about things would be good
Very great work, I hope you continue with it and do not make it slow and do not clean the women. 💙💙💙
I was enjoying the nice slice of life. The next thing I know it is doing cultivation, then it goes to demons. Now the mc has amnesia. This better get back to normal soon or I'm going to lose it.
Will you add more characters later on? I am having problem to remember everyone now. His best friend, his family, his staff, the iron guards then this antagonist's dogs some more. I am okay with it. Maybe you can add the aux chapter about the characters too to make it easier for people to follow. Other than that, I love how you build the story around Novan City only for now. I love how his best friend was brought to be part of the football (soccer) team now. Was wondering about him for a while too.
The only downside was up until chapter 75 is, does Ethan really need 200 Ascendants? Since he himself had reached the Middle Star Apprentice, those below than him should not be recruited. However, I like everything about this story so far. The faceslapping moment was once only and he had reflected on it which I find it making sense after all. Good series and I really hope it will not end prematurely. Haha!
Revelar spoiler Noah asked me to give another review if I have reached more than 50 chapters. I like how the introduction of the Great Families, the Ascendants, how the apps developed and the story related with the apps etc. I am just curious on how this story going to unfold.
Catch up until Chapter 78. The story turned to be different than what I expected but as of now, I am liking everything. You should read it first and I saw a few tried to say this series had some similarities to Chinese novels but I guarantee you it is not. It is better. Not better as in the best but can be placed among the best read so far.
Loving this series. Really hope that we can have more chapters being released daily but I know it is easier said than done. So I'll just wait as long as author could give his best for each chapter.
I am new to this platform but consider I am lucky since I came across this series as one of my earliest series here. What I want to say is, this is a good series if you want something to enjoy in your pastime.
I just hope the author will continue to write this series until the end. It is a great write and I am enjoying it so much. All the best, author!
In the beginning, you can see how naive and immature the MC is. I believe (I HOPE!) that it was intentional. After a few more chapters, things are getting more interesting and I'll leave another review after catching up.
What I can say is that this novel is a good read. I don't think it has too much of a wow in the beginning. But, after reading it chapter by chapter, I believe that this novel is promising.
If you enjoy a story that combines modern-day ambitions with a touch of the superhuman, this is definitely worth the read. It’s a fun and exciting series that keeps getting better!
I am just excited as I have read the football part in this novel. Hahaha! I know you guys might be confused. Come on. Football club is a business too. I just want to say I am loving this. Please write a football novel after this!
Awesome work here. Can see the versatility of author in writing. I just hope author don't stop this series. I know it is hard to stay motivated if it is not doing well. But please know that I will support as much as I could.
I can say that this series is fun to read. I don't expect much of it since there were a few face slapping scenes. I thought that this was like a translated Chinese novel but after reading it for a while, it is not what I think what it is. Read it and you will not regret it.
I've been following this series for a while now, and I have to say—it's one of my favorites! The mix of modern business, secret families, and a dash of supernatural powers makes it super engaging. Ethan Cole is a fantastic main character, and it's so satisfying to see him grow from a regular guy trying to make his company succeed to someone who’s becoming a major player in a world full of powerful families and hidden secrets. I love how the story doesn’t just focus on the action but dives into the details of building a company like BiteWave—there's just the right amount of business strategy and personal drama to keep things interesting. The side characters are well-developed too, and each has a role that adds something special to the plot. The story's pacing is just right, with each chapter leaving you wanting more. If you're into stories that blend modern-day settings with a bit of magic and a lot of intrigue, this one's for you. It’s a fun and thrilling ride, and I can't wait to see where it goes next! Keep up the awesome work!
I really liked this series! The story is exciting, and the characters are relatable and well-developed. There’s a great mix of action and interesting plot twists that kept me hooked from start to finish. Even though I’m not great at writing reviews, I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed reading it.
This author is super versatile. He can write about business, action, and even football really well. I loved how the football scenes were written—they were exciting and fun to read! However, there are moments when the pacing drags, and some plot points feel a bit rushed. It would be great to see a little more depth in certain areas. That said, I think he should write three more books, especially a football one. He really knows how to make those scenes come alive. If you enjoy stories that mix different genres, give this series a shot!
Some comments said there are a bit similarity with chinese novels. But, there’s just a little bit of face-slapping moments, but what I appreciate most is the MC's growth. He reflects on his actions, which makes the story better as it shows character development. Overall, this is a refreshing read with creative twists, so just enjoy it.
I have to say, after reading this series, I can’t help but feel for the author—and for many others writing on platforms like webnovel. The story delivers exactly what the author promised: a world of limitless possibilities, where real-world rules don’t always apply. The disclaimer is clear: this is not our Earth, so it’s a bit baffling when some readers nitpick or criticize the story for not adhering to real-world logic. Honestly, I pity the authors who have to face such harsh comments, which often say more about the intellectual level of the commenter than the quality of the story. It’s difficult enough these days to create something fresh or original, and while this series may not reinvent the genre, it certainly brings a breath of fresh air. Rather than tearing down someone’s creative work, maybe we should appreciate it for what it is—a fun, imaginative escape. So, if you're looking for something different and entertaining, give this series a chance. Don’t go in expecting to critique every detail. Instead, enjoy the creativity and unpredictability, which are sometimes exactly what we need in a good read!
I like it when in a novel, we can get everything. Fight, business, sports and many more. I hope you continue this series. Keep it up, author.
Give it a read. Good story. I like how the story is written. In terms of updates, even though the chapters are no more than fifty for now, the author updates every day. Sometimes, a few chapters in a day. I like how the character is being developed. Just don't let those logic police, common sense police, etc, disrupt your reading experience.
I believe you would like this series after reading it. The writing is great, the plot is great, the character development is great. You need to give chance for Ethan's character development to enjoy this series. I love how we can see that Ethan is going to venture into different kind of world and not limited to running a tech company alone.
High quality of writing compared to other series here in WN. If you want to read, stop questioning this and that to follow how our world (or to be exact how your place do things. We have countries in this world and each country operates differently). Besides, it is normal to see stupid or clumsy actions from the MC as he is developing as a character progressively. He is smart but not smart in everything as he is learning. Anyways, worth reading!
Read that in o ne sitting, interesting work . Keep it up , although there are few missing info clips, and a little detailing about things would be good
Very great work, I hope you continue with it and do not make it slow and do not clean the women. 💙💙💙
I was enjoying the nice slice of life. The next thing I know it is doing cultivation, then it goes to demons. Now the mc has amnesia. This better get back to normal soon or I'm going to lose it.