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Why is the title clickbait? Does the author not know what the word SUMMON means?!
You lost me at the point when he told Coulson and SHIELD that "an organization in Himalayas said he is the chosen one and only he can save the world" bs. Too cringey for me and such a lame excuse about a savior would never fly with a secret organization like SHIELD.
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I like this story, but can you summon multiple champions or just transform your MC into them? If the former, I think this presents an opportunity. Imagine creating an in-universe version of Riot Records, you could summon the champions in their music artist skins and have them become major artists in the music industry. Your MC can become their CEO. It's one way to make tons of money and influence the world.
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The story's beginning wasn't too great but still a good start. The main downside that made the story fall off for me was the MC becoming unkillable too early and easily. This just makes the story progesion dull
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The beginning is already interesting, hopefully there will be romance. I also think the power of the system is a bit too strong, especially with the skins for just a movie universe
Chinese history Summary: I'm the best because I'm Chinese. Don't read this story Mc doesn't contribute anything If you like Chinese shit, go ahead.
Why is the title clickbait? Does the author not know what the word SUMMON means?!
You lost me at the point when he told Coulson and SHIELD that "an organization in Himalayas said he is the chosen one and only he can save the world" bs. Too cringey for me and such a lame excuse about a savior would never fly with a secret organization like SHIELD.
Hope you continue this story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this story, but can you summon multiple champions or just transform your MC into them? If the former, I think this presents an opportunity. Imagine creating an in-universe version of Riot Records, you could summon the champions in their music artist skins and have them become major artists in the music industry. Your MC can become their CEO. It's one way to make tons of money and influence the world.
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The story's beginning wasn't too great but still a good start. The main downside that made the story fall off for me was the MC becoming unkillable too early and easily. This just makes the story progesion dull
sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?sauce?
The beginning is already interesting, hopefully there will be romance. I also think the power of the system is a bit too strong, especially with the skins for just a movie universe
Chinese history Summary: I'm the best because I'm Chinese. Don't read this story Mc doesn't contribute anything If you like Chinese shit, go ahead.