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Escribe una reseñaNice story. I really love the world building and your writing style is explanatory and unique. It got me hooked from the very start and I am very interested to see how this turns out. Please keep updating this book. I love your work!
I'm not really into system books but this one got me hooked from the first chapter. kudos author👍, Keep it up
Wonderful! Nice work... The writing quality is superb. I'll come back for another review after reading five chapters
altogether a good read. Started out like MVS but took a different turn along the way. The author should try giving better details of the MC. Good work! I'd love to see more updates
Read the first chapter and i got hooked untill the third. However, had to stop there to write. Anyways, The world background, character development, as well as the story development is all good. Just the grammatical and typographical errors. Anyways, nice story keep it up author. I would really love it, if Tahir does gruesome revenge for his parents, they deserve it.
it was really a great read especially from the first chapter. keep up the good work author 💕❤️
Best...! I don't know what to say just this is epic... not much chapters and it's almost like typical genres like most online novels but hey, it's among the trending types of genre, let's just see if author has plot twist that might blow our mind
A really great read with some minor grammar errors but still okay, the paragraphs are not lined well but except that, the book is great. Inspiration came from: My Vampire System Well, i also wrote a book like that; Blood Monarch System.
The first chapter is fire and so where the consecutive chapters. I hope to see where this books goes because I love itttttt and I'm hooked already. 💓
Nice story. I really love the world building and your writing style is explanatory and unique. It got me hooked from the very start and I am very interested to see how this turns out. Please keep updating this book. I love your work!
I'm not really into system books but this one got me hooked from the first chapter. kudos author👍, Keep it up
Wonderful! Nice work... The writing quality is superb. I'll come back for another review after reading five chapters
altogether a good read. Started out like MVS but took a different turn along the way. The author should try giving better details of the MC. Good work! I'd love to see more updates
Read the first chapter and i got hooked untill the third. However, had to stop there to write. Anyways, The world background, character development, as well as the story development is all good. Just the grammatical and typographical errors. Anyways, nice story keep it up author. I would really love it, if Tahir does gruesome revenge for his parents, they deserve it.
it was really a great read especially from the first chapter. keep up the good work author 💕❤️
Best...! I don't know what to say just this is epic... not much chapters and it's almost like typical genres like most online novels but hey, it's among the trending types of genre, let's just see if author has plot twist that might blow our mind
A really great read with some minor grammar errors but still okay, the paragraphs are not lined well but except that, the book is great. Inspiration came from: My Vampire System Well, i also wrote a book like that; Blood Monarch System.
The first chapter is fire and so where the consecutive chapters. I hope to see where this books goes because I love itttttt and I'm hooked already. 💓