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A Blue Lock Fanfic
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John Price was a young upcoming football talent. Just as he was beginning to take his dream of becoming a professional player seriously, his life was tragically cut short in a building collapse.
Now he is reincarnated and given a second chance to pursue his dreams.
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Cover Image is AI generated using imagine.art cause I can't draw yet.
Also, this is my first attempt at writing. Constructive criticism are welcome.
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything mentions in this story, expect for my OC and plot.
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Okay this is an actual review,, Kira/Mc is an knock off isagi with better dribbling and shooting.( Author doesn't describe his moves he'll say. "Kira shot was perfect and went corner" or dribbled smoothly, Theres no telling or unique to him. He helps everyone in blue lock/In His wing like isagi and raichi. Author its blue lock give him his own personality he always trying to improve them. *(And through out the whole story he had not improved or got better Nothing for the whole story*) AND Then on the field he trys writting him all hard and try to make him feel less friendly making orders but then off he always helping and has no backbone to say no... Im done reading this and hope this will tell what you wanted to know about the fic. Story development slow as he build raichi his own background and to make him improve better *His favorite character which is fine but don't be changing the story or fic because of that*. (To learn more on blue lock writting would say read God of Blue lock and other fics just to learn how they write it and take notes as your mc has nothing fancy or cool to even keep him in blue lock.)
So far so good, the only tip for the author is to try to finish the chapters in a more natural way, as there were several released at once it didn't interfere with reading, but when the normal frequency starts it may leave something to be desired. Great work!
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The only thing i don't like bout it is that MC likes? to play more of a midfielder and he doesn't score goals when he clearly could do so, often passing the ball to his teammate but other than that the book has a lot of potential. pls make him score more goals author
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Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1
- 1 Chapter 1 – Ryosuke Kira 3 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2 – The Blue Lock Project 3 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3 – Conviction 3 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4 – Team Z 3 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5 – Scrimmage 1 3 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6 – Scrimmage 2 3 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7 - Scrimmage 3 3 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8 – Pecking Order 3 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9 – First Selection 3 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10 – Team X vs Team Z 3 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11 – Control 3 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12 – A Striker 3 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13 – End of Game 1 3 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14 – Weapons 3 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15 – Team Y vs Team Z 3 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16 – Scrambled 3 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17 – Half-time Strategy 3 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18 – Start of the Second Half 3 months ago
- 19 Chapter 19 – Desperation 3 months ago
- 20 Chapter 20 – Isagi’s Reborn 3 months ago
- 21 Chapter 21 – Aftermath 3 months ago
- 22 Chapter 22 – Denial 3 months ago
- 23 Chapter 23 – Preparation 3 months ago
- 24 Chapter 24 – Team W vs Team Z 3 months ago
- 25 Chapter 25 – Grinding Game 3 months ago
- 26 Chapter 26 – Half-time Drama 3 months ago
- 27 Chapter 27 – Burden 3 months ago
- 28 Chapter 28 – Attacking Football 3 months ago
- 29 Chapter 29 – Thunder Strike 3 months ago
- 30 Chapter 30 – Raichi’s Looking Glass 3 months ago
- 31 Chapter 31 – Crunch Time 3 months ago
- 32 Chapter 32 – World-Class Specialist 3 months ago
- 33 Chapter 33 – Slow Day 3 months ago
- 34 Chapter 34 – Trouble In Paradise 3 months ago
- 35 Chapter 35 – Calm before the Storm 3 months ago
- 36 Chapter 36 – Team V vs Team Z 3 months ago
- 37 Chapter 37 – Lockdown 3 months ago
- 38 Chapter 38 – Domination 3 months ago
- 39 Chapter 39 – Futile Effort 2 months ago
- 40 Chapter 40 – End of First Selection 2 months ago
- 41 Chapter 41 – Celebration 2 months ago
- 42 Chapter 42 – Training Montage 2 months ago
- 43 Chapter 43 – Second Selection 2 months ago
- 44 Chapter 44 – Three Man’s team 2 months ago
- 45 Chapter 45 – Explosive Dragon 2 months ago
- 46 Chapter 46 – Meeting of Two Alphas 2 months ago
- 47 Chapter 47 – Respect 2 months ago
- 48 Chapter 48 – Comeback 2 months ago
- 49 Chapter 49 – A Little Rest 2 months ago
- 50 Chapter 50 – Training 2 months ago
- 51 Chapter 51 – Challenging Number 1 2 months ago
Same boring plot that happens in every BL fanfic. Oh I’m gonna be in same wing as Isagi and make everyone stronger in the beginning so when the next selection comes everyone is stronger and prove my worth yadayada. Boring and overused. Come up with something original you bum.