Champion Of Lust: Gods Conquer's Harem Paradise!

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DeadBeatWeeb

So, Author, (although I doubt you’ll see this) here’s some feedback from me as of chapter 38. Firstly, some positives-I think you’re making pretty likeable an interesting characters. At least, I can see myself being interested. I also like the idea of him needing to clean up the business before they become too problematic. For some areas of improvement-I think you could be slowing down on the characters and the focus. Especially when it comes to Pyris’ relationships with these ladies. We jumped from his sister to the vampire princess to his assistant to now this succubus. It feels that you’re eager to get to the harem and the excitement that not all of your intent is coming through. It’s as if you’re trying to explain why someone should watch a series by jumping into the highlights with minimal context given. Let yourself and the characters linger and build into the world via varying dynamics. I don’t mean to talk shit author. I’m actually enjoying your series so far and I think you can get much better.

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Zakir_Rana_3088

it's very fantastic 👌, [img=update][img=update]

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Sully122

This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops 👍

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Grim_Reaper_73

Ugh, brother Ugh, what's that, what's that brother?

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Rolando_Maresma

So far I'm on chapter 40, it's my first review and I must say author that the novel is very interesting but the only detail is that the R18 parts are very short and when you're in the best part and you're immersing yourself in the story you leave it and just say after 3 hours of snu snu I would prefer you to leave it complete at least 2 chapters so that it would be more entertaining and that perverts like us readers would like it.

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EyeOfSilver

Beta male mc. . .

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great_lord

Very promising plot, hope the author won't drop it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Muhammed_Farhan_8609

THIS NOVEL IS FANTASTIC WITH GOOD WORLD BUILDING AND CHARACTERS. THE WRITING PACE IS ALSO GOOD

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Fi3l

Don’t know about anyone else but I’ve been having a blast reading this, keep up the good work author!

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Anim3God69

good read other than the spelling errors.

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multiverses_sage

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Bruce_Overton

So far I have read 30+ chapters and I love it characters are pretty well fleshed out and world well put together great read really

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alex_molsbee

author is there chapters missing cause it jumped from him taking over the business to chasing liez and talking about Silas and how he's been running the company but there isn't any chapters explaining what Silas did or what happened when he took over as ceo

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SweetnessSaintess

Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, I haven't reviewed this novel yet? Then let me give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

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Devil023

The plot is average but i don't like the story development at all.

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Anos_Voligoad_6135

Bro was 5 place? Nahh could not let that slide mate

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Lapllace

I haven’t finished reading Chapter 6 yet, but I’m already here to complain. Seriously, why is the main character like this? Throughout these chapters up to the sixth one, he feels like an analogy to a kid under the Christmas tree, opening his presents, overly excited, while his system is like an uncle who gave him the gifts and is explaining what they are and how they work. Seriously, he’s way too carefree. Then there’s the fact that after reincarnating, he didn’t even bother to simulate the behavior of the previous consciousness that was in this body. To everyone around him, he suddenly went from being a serious and mature guy to an overly excited child. I can’t judge the entire novel based on just six chapters, but it’s a bit disappointing.

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almightyP

Thank you @Wbug for the gift. I appreciate the support and love for this work!

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almightyP

Gentle reminder: the first volume and parts of the second are all about background and world-building—think of it as setting the stage for what’s to come. But once that phase is done? Buckle up. The intensity picks up as Pyris starts demolishing everything in his path toward greatness, all while gathering a harem of insanely powerful beauties. Stick around for the ride—you won’t want to miss how this story takes off!

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Daoist_Supra_21

The writing quality is lacking a lot you should put more work into it . So far the rest is good for me [img=recommend]