I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

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DaoistS69MXM

Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.

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ACE_KinGz

5 star for first time Review ! !!!!!!!!¡!!!!

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BigWhiteGoose

I think this novel is well written, unlike some novels that are written at such a fast pace, it is a novel worth reading carefully. The plot is worth looking forward to. This novel needs to be read carefully and slowly to discover its brilliance!

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Doubleyolkeggs

The plot of this novel is also fantastic! I am reading every novel of yours and will recommend it to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!

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Dangerlives

You should focus your energy on writing this story and not others. This is a good story.Not too much fluff.

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Juan_Filippa

una novela que la disfrute demasiado y la recomiendo totalmente

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ReaderMan

Great novel with fleshed out characters and good world building with and interesting premise, writing quality is good and understandable. The characters aren't stupid and can and do use their brains, so far the plot has been good and I'm already waiting to read the next arc. Keep up the good work!