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love the idea & the concept only two chapters and I'm sold! very happy with how the story started off and how well I believe the force could fit into the story and Earth just be some ball of dirt in the galaxy far far away the only thing I can say I hope for is that she doesn't just learn Force techniques from those holocrons since Bastila Shan is there it would be good if she could introduce lessons from mission Garth HK and the others on medicine electronics machinery building resources àssássssination piloting languages etc etc from Ravens crew and not just force techniques from her and revan that would give her a pretty decent education and a pretty good plot point to introducing her to more of the galaxy I can't wait for many many more chapters from you dear author! hope to see more of your work soon
This seems like it was ripped from the oringinal author who posted this story with the exact same title on “Archive of our Own” by Kamil_the_Awesome. There’s already 38 chapters done with 295,158 words in it. If for whatever reason you are the original author then just do a simple copy paste with the already written chapters.
love the idea & the concept only two chapters and I'm sold! very happy with how the story started off and how well I believe the force could fit into the story and Earth just be some ball of dirt in the galaxy far far away the only thing I can say I hope for is that she doesn't just learn Force techniques from those holocrons since Bastila Shan is there it would be good if she could introduce lessons from mission Garth HK and the others on medicine electronics machinery building resources àssássssination piloting languages etc etc from Ravens crew and not just force techniques from her and revan that would give her a pretty decent education and a pretty good plot point to introducing her to more of the galaxy I can't wait for many many more chapters from you dear author! hope to see more of your work soon
This seems like it was ripped from the oringinal author who posted this story with the exact same title on “Archive of our Own” by Kamil_the_Awesome. There’s already 38 chapters done with 295,158 words in it. If for whatever reason you are the original author then just do a simple copy paste with the already written chapters.