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Alright what is going on I just read 3 chapters and you keep repeating the story like in the 1st or 2nd chapter Homelander and All Might encounter each other to face Villains and they challenge each other then the next chapter Homelander is just at a distance and hasn’t even met All Might yet and at the ending half he shows up and All Might questions why he is here and this happens again in the next chapter where Homelander is at a distance away from All Might and then shows up but still feels like this is there first encounter. Do you not remember these interactions ? And if you don’t remember go back and reread what you have wrote instead of repeating the same story 3 times.
Alright what is going on I just read 3 chapters and you keep repeating the story like in the 1st or 2nd chapter Homelander and All Might encounter each other to face Villains and they challenge each other then the next chapter Homelander is just at a distance and hasn’t even met All Might yet and at the ending half he shows up and All Might questions why he is here and this happens again in the next chapter where Homelander is at a distance away from All Might and then shows up but still feels like this is there first encounter. Do you not remember these interactions ? And if you don’t remember go back and reread what you have wrote instead of repeating the same story 3 times.