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In commemorate of Seele's birthday, I will leave my review here. Story progress so far had been stellar. Everything fits right into place so that you won't feel weird reading the story, though that might just be me who knows some things about HI3 ahead. The update also had been consistent I guess? I stopped at some point to let it cumulate but even then I already caught up again cause I read things too fast. So far I've nothing but praises to the author since they're able to write things so well with as little errors here and there. And what wasn't there in the canon, they fill it in just fine. Long story short, I'll recommended this fanfic to those who were looking for some Honkai Impact fanfic.
Hello, Author(/Translator?)-san. Before I read this (probably will eventually anyway), I wanted to ask about the love interest. Is it Hua like the cover suggests?
leí tu anterior historia por lo que se que escribes bien, lo único negativo que he observado hasta ahora con tu historia seria la falta de interacción de personajes, por ejemplo, el protagonista se reúne con otro personaje, escribes un párrafo de interacción y luego agregas al siguiente "siguieron hablando de ciertas cosas tal y tal" así que es mas contar que mostrar. I read your previous story so I know you write well, the only negative thing I've noticed so far with your story would be the lack of character interaction, for example, the protagonist meets another character, you write a paragraph of interaction and then add to the next "they continued talking about certain things such and such" so it's more telling than showing.
This novel is freakin great and the mc is very likeable not to mention the powers and plot is amazing too without it looking like a mary sue, recommend
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This is perfect, It's among my top of fanfics I've read so far a pity there aren't many chapters son I'm gonna let it marinate and come back when it's 50+
Date a Live?! Damn, gotta stock up some chapters then. I'mma be back when this reaches chapter 50.
FIRST REVIEW!!! HI3, HSR, AND DATE A LIVE?? Sign me UP. Author didn't cook a meal like I expected, he cooked up a full BANQUET. I'm really excited to read this just based off author's other work which I've loved and been following. I can expect great writing and story just based off that. P.S; I love you Author 🙏
Been reading this on hub can’t say I was disappointed it’s a great fic wonder why it doesn’t have more followers and I just say that it got irregular at magic high in it as well going to be epic
In commemorate of Seele's birthday, I will leave my review here. Story progress so far had been stellar. Everything fits right into place so that you won't feel weird reading the story, though that might just be me who knows some things about HI3 ahead. The update also had been consistent I guess? I stopped at some point to let it cumulate but even then I already caught up again cause I read things too fast. So far I've nothing but praises to the author since they're able to write things so well with as little errors here and there. And what wasn't there in the canon, they fill it in just fine. Long story short, I'll recommended this fanfic to those who were looking for some Honkai Impact fanfic.
Hello, Author(/Translator?)-san. Before I read this (probably will eventually anyway), I wanted to ask about the love interest. Is it Hua like the cover suggests?
leí tu anterior historia por lo que se que escribes bien, lo único negativo que he observado hasta ahora con tu historia seria la falta de interacción de personajes, por ejemplo, el protagonista se reúne con otro personaje, escribes un párrafo de interacción y luego agregas al siguiente "siguieron hablando de ciertas cosas tal y tal" así que es mas contar que mostrar. I read your previous story so I know you write well, the only negative thing I've noticed so far with your story would be the lack of character interaction, for example, the protagonist meets another character, you write a paragraph of interaction and then add to the next "they continued talking about certain things such and such" so it's more telling than showing.
This novel is freakin great and the mc is very likeable not to mention the powers and plot is amazing too without it looking like a mary sue, recommend
Im here just for Date a lite, anything else its an extra[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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This is perfect, It's among my top of fanfics I've read so far a pity there aren't many chapters son I'm gonna let it marinate and come back when it's 50+
Date a Live?! Damn, gotta stock up some chapters then. I'mma be back when this reaches chapter 50.
FIRST REVIEW!!! HI3, HSR, AND DATE A LIVE?? Sign me UP. Author didn't cook a meal like I expected, he cooked up a full BANQUET. I'm really excited to read this just based off author's other work which I've loved and been following. I can expect great writing and story just based off that. P.S; I love you Author 🙏
Been reading this on hub can’t say I was disappointed it’s a great fic wonder why it doesn’t have more followers and I just say that it got irregular at magic high in it as well going to be epic