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Honestly this has a great idea but the person writing this made it a pure power fantasy and his system giving him everything... its basically auto win button, there seemingly no personally growth in anyway both as characters or abilities.
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The translator puts a lot of effort into this novel. Some of the things may seem out of the ordinary, but it's mostly identical to the canon except for some inevitable tweaks. This is a good novel and I hope it never gets dropped. Lemon scenes are free in the translator's Patreon!! cannot beat this translator. best man fr
This story are handsome plz some people know story like that ? Tell me if you know.
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The MC is OP enough to take on all villages by himself but wants to make his village stand on its own legs... Something doesn't make sense here. If he can take care of everything, and he indeed has to do the finishing work himself, why let your villagers die in wars? Just do it with your strength since you love your village so much that you spend all your points on them.
Tengo que admitirlo, está traducción de Naruto está muy buena. Es de las mejores que eh leido o al menos de las más interesantes. Las simulaciones son espectaculares, pero me gusta más lo malvado que es el MC para conseguir waifus como Mei, Kushina, Yugao o Mikoto jajaja
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This is well translated, but the plot is not really my cup of tea, first of all, a good portion of this story, the protagonist’s beginning in this world is glossed over by starting us off at a point where he is powerful enough to beat Yagura and is already in an relationship with Mei, that takes almost all the stakes away from this story and we hadn’t even seen a simulation at that point. After that, we finally see the first simulation of the story and it’s in Konoha, like the description said, he gets into a relationship with Kushina in the simulation, which is fine, but Minato is weirdly mischaracterised here. He’s overly obsessive, and is in love with Kushina immediately while also being antagonistic to the protagonist, that just feels really out of character for someone who’s always depicted as a chill nice person. The protagonist and Minato both aren’t really likeable to me here and the randomness of a villain points addition doesn’t help. All that together doesn’t make it my cup of tea, but if you’re into a villain protagonist, you’d probably like this story.
This book feels like a wet dream of a chinese retard. No hate for the Translator as I am sure he did a lot of work to make this more readable, in it's OG raw translated form, I might have dropped it on Ch 10 or earlier lol
I don't recommend it, reading 40 chapters and the protagonist is ridiculously broken, in addition to him having the ice fruit and thunder fruit, he also has a mangekyo who steals abilities and controls an area (time, and space) that he chooses for up to 5 minutes
What can I say, the translator works well, everything is readable. The speed of translation updates is excellent. Further on the story: honestly, in the beginning it was interesting. But the further you go, the more it just gets monotonous, just empty. The plot at this point has no appeal, everything is clichéd to the point of banality. Regarding the character designs, you could describe them as sparse, cliched. Have no underlying zest. The protagonist showed promise, but his sadistic tendencies after a couple of times cause only irritation. I do not recommend to read this story, here you will not hit anything at the moment, just a typical Chinese fanfic. But under a beer will do.
sinceramente ya me aburrió, si me digieras que las corrompe y terminan haciendo las cosas de buena gana, eso seria un desarrollo interesante pero hasta ahora solo vi al MC repetir una y otra ves la misma táctica y me aburrió completamente. El MC es se puede describir como alguien que solo sabe hacer una solo cosa
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Good fanfic , fun to read ...it's always interesting to see mc from other villages like kiri and kumo etc . The simulation system is kinda cliché but okay , though it's kinda uneven in some places like him doing Aokiji simulation (which happened prior to the start) he still don't have haki . Anyways , till now the TL is pretty good and readable 👍
Hot water dripping I cried when I got there Widow is not a virgin Do not marry the child in the cage It's true that I've been around Widow is my son But I can Turned upside down like frying three Cow
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Honestly this has a great idea but the person writing this made it a pure power fantasy and his system giving him everything... its basically auto win button, there seemingly no personally growth in anyway both as characters or abilities.
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The translator puts a lot of effort into this novel. Some of the things may seem out of the ordinary, but it's mostly identical to the canon except for some inevitable tweaks. This is a good novel and I hope it never gets dropped. Lemon scenes are free in the translator's Patreon!! cannot beat this translator. best man fr
This story are handsome plz some people know story like that ? Tell me if you know.
seriously,i like for this novel, It's amazing,thanks for you author[img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it]
The MC is OP enough to take on all villages by himself but wants to make his village stand on its own legs... Something doesn't make sense here. If he can take care of everything, and he indeed has to do the finishing work himself, why let your villagers die in wars? Just do it with your strength since you love your village so much that you spend all your points on them.
Tengo que admitirlo, está traducción de Naruto está muy buena. Es de las mejores que eh leido o al menos de las más interesantes. Las simulaciones son espectaculares, pero me gusta más lo malvado que es el MC para conseguir waifus como Mei, Kushina, Yugao o Mikoto jajaja
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This is well translated, but the plot is not really my cup of tea, first of all, a good portion of this story, the protagonist’s beginning in this world is glossed over by starting us off at a point where he is powerful enough to beat Yagura and is already in an relationship with Mei, that takes almost all the stakes away from this story and we hadn’t even seen a simulation at that point. After that, we finally see the first simulation of the story and it’s in Konoha, like the description said, he gets into a relationship with Kushina in the simulation, which is fine, but Minato is weirdly mischaracterised here. He’s overly obsessive, and is in love with Kushina immediately while also being antagonistic to the protagonist, that just feels really out of character for someone who’s always depicted as a chill nice person. The protagonist and Minato both aren’t really likeable to me here and the randomness of a villain points addition doesn’t help. All that together doesn’t make it my cup of tea, but if you’re into a villain protagonist, you’d probably like this story.
This book feels like a wet dream of a chinese retard. No hate for the Translator as I am sure he did a lot of work to make this more readable, in it's OG raw translated form, I might have dropped it on Ch 10 or earlier lol
I don't recommend it, reading 40 chapters and the protagonist is ridiculously broken, in addition to him having the ice fruit and thunder fruit, he also has a mangekyo who steals abilities and controls an area (time, and space) that he chooses for up to 5 minutes
What can I say, the translator works well, everything is readable. The speed of translation updates is excellent. Further on the story: honestly, in the beginning it was interesting. But the further you go, the more it just gets monotonous, just empty. The plot at this point has no appeal, everything is clichéd to the point of banality. Regarding the character designs, you could describe them as sparse, cliched. Have no underlying zest. The protagonist showed promise, but his sadistic tendencies after a couple of times cause only irritation. I do not recommend to read this story, here you will not hit anything at the moment, just a typical Chinese fanfic. But under a beer will do.
sinceramente ya me aburrió, si me digieras que las corrompe y terminan haciendo las cosas de buena gana, eso seria un desarrollo interesante pero hasta ahora solo vi al MC repetir una y otra ves la misma táctica y me aburrió completamente. El MC es se puede describir como alguien que solo sabe hacer una solo cosa
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Good fanfic , fun to read ...it's always interesting to see mc from other villages like kiri and kumo etc . The simulation system is kinda cliché but okay , though it's kinda uneven in some places like him doing Aokiji simulation (which happened prior to the start) he still don't have haki . Anyways , till now the TL is pretty good and readable 👍
Hot water dripping I cried when I got there Widow is not a virgin Do not marry the child in the cage It's true that I've been around Widow is my son But I can Turned upside down like frying three Cow
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